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Seanna 2005.06.17 - 04:55PM 4: Isobelle/Family Tree Signed
“Daddy, can I be a dunderhead soon?” Classic genius!!! hehehe!!

Author's Response: I couldn't resist! thanks for reviewing!

greenwood 2005.06.14 - 04:35PM 5: Etienne Signed
Wonderful chapter. I loved hearing the past about thier son and what a prat he was/is and where it all got him (ha!) The ending was very touching. You paint Drusilla as such a loving person (so opposit of her brother!) Well done.

Author's Response: Drusilla is lovely, but she wories too much, i think it's coz she's the eldest. there are similarities between all of the children, as wellas their significant differences. poor Etienne no one likes him! if my friwend yazz ever finds out that i named such a nasty person after her eldest son (who, by the way, is an absolute sweetie, not in the slightest bit like this etienne!) i am going to be in such deep shit! Don't tell her! thanks for reviewing!

moonylj 2005.06.14 - 02:53PM 5: Etienne Signed
Uhh! What a delightful person Etienne seems to be! Looking foward to a scene between Lynda and Mathilde... ooo and Spike and Etienne... Lots of good things to come hopefully!

Author's Response: scenes between lynda and anyone are going to be limited, they've all known her for years and try not to speak to her if they can help it (she's based on someone i know, i toned her down a bit, but trust me, at social gatherings this is what happens) but there are lots of things to come, you will just have to make your mind up about whether they are good or not. thanks for reviewing!

June W 2005.06.14 - 12:12AM 5: Etienne Signed
Ooh, I do NOT like Etienne at all! I hope Severus tells Mahaut everything so that she can tell off her son. Etienne works at the Ministry and can get access to his mom's Auror file - why doesn't he find out just how she lost her powers?? Idjit... If anyone should be turned into a pig, it's Etienne! Mmmm, bacon.... And when he finds out his baby sister married a Muggle, he better not be a hypocrite, him with his Muggle mistress and taxpayer-paid girlfriend. Hey, Lynda could be a cute piggy too!

Author's Response: Having a bit of a Homer Simpson monent there, were we? Etienne is a bit of a git, weell, you didn't expect all of there kids to turn out as well as drusilla, did you? don't give up on him completly though, there's great ebtertainment value in our Etienne, and you get to see more of lynda in ch7. i don't think etienne would ever bother looking at his mum's auror file, people who are prejudied are rarely interested in the facts. it wouldn't tell him how she had lost her poweres anyway, only dumble dore ever knew the whole truth about how severus helped mahaut escape from bella, and the only people they told the whole truth about Aeaea were Mahaut's family paintings and albus and minevra, who can't tell anyway, they're a very secretive pair remember, and aeaea doesn't have a good reputation in the wizarding world, they wouldn't exactly go around showing people thier holiday snaps from that little trip! thanks for reviewing!

moonylj 2005.06.11 - 05:20PM 4: Isobelle/Family Tree Signed
Thanks for the family tree, my little brain understands (kinda..) the connections now! Isabelle seems to be the most Snape-ish, why was she in Gryffindor again?! Mathilde's still my favourite though.

Author's Response: actaully no one's really sure why isobelle was in gryfindor, but Mahaut thinks that the sorting hat overheard a snide comment that severus made about it being"nothing more than a flea-bitten flat cap with an attitude problem" and hurt it's feelings! personaaly i can't believe that, i mean, severus? make an insensitive comment? we are talking about the same sevrus, aren't we? i like mathilde too, and spike. i think mathilde is bit what mahaut might have been like if she'd never met severus and settled down. i had fun writing etienne as well though, but not for the same reasons, he's very different to the girls(despite a fewfamily traits that they all share) anyway you get him next so you'll see. thanks for the review!

greenwood 2005.06.10 - 05:05PM 4: Isobelle/Family Tree Signed
Great contuation of the family reunion. Loved the "tree". Funny to see a Potter and a Malfoy in there! Ha! Severus would have been a bit irked by the Potter I would have thought but maybe because the Potter is female it made a difference. Ha Ha!

Author's Response: Hmmm. not making any comments about how irked severus was by the Potter, you'll just have to wait and see! there are a few clues in the family tree about whats going to happen, but that's all i'm saying. thanks for the review

June W 2005.06.10 - 04:52PM 4: Isobelle/Family Tree Signed
I like Isobelle - she must've been sorted Gryffindor because her parents named her after Minerva! It looks like everyone married fairly old , having kids at age 48+. Marguerite's kid is named Stobbe - so she didn't marry Malfoy? Etienne has a mistress - because his wife is dead? I wonder what Severus thought about his own son having an illeg child.... No kids from Octavius - Harry's son-in-law, eh? Well, c'mon - where's the next chapter??? THANK YOU FOR THE FAMILY CHART - this makes things much easier for my noodle-brain.

Author's Response: noodle brain huh? mines full of mashed potato, mashed potato is far more practical during a cold british winter, you must live somewhere warm if you can get by with having noodle for brains, that's all i can say! thankyou for pointing oiut the typo, the kids name is meant to be malfoy, but i'm hopeless, l'll go and correct it now. not saying anything about Etienne's wife, but you get to meet him in the next chapter, so you wont have to wait long(you have to wait a bit longer to find out what severus and mahaut think about tha illegitanmate child i think that chapters 7 and 9, not sure without double checking) you should get a new chapter sometime next week, don't get your knickers in twist now! thanks for reviewing!

greenwood 2005.06.10 - 04:31PM 3: Mathilde Signed
Well done! Well done! Loved the introduction of Spike to the world of magic!

Author's Response: thank you, thank you. l think spike quite enjoyed his initial intrioduction to "ahem" magic wands, too. that bit was mainly a result of one too many smutty conversations between me and kathy about magic wands, the result of which is that i now can't even type those words without giggling manicly(not that manic giggling is all that unusual for me, but my evil git does get really paranoid when i start doing it for no apparent reason and then can't stop coz hes giving me funny looks) thanks for reviewing

June W 2005.06.10 - 03:40PM 3: Mathilde Signed
A Muggle son-in-law ... poor Severus, at least he won't be around much more to see this! Good thing Mahaut can get Severus to calm down. Okay, now that the Ch3/4 thingie is fixed, I can safely post this and read the next chappie....

Author's Response: muggle son inlaw was a big temptation to write this to be honest, that and Mahaut and Severus' reaction to a few other little family related problems. Spike gets a few chances to redeem himself in severus' eyes later on, though. i think severus main problem is that spike is a bit of a jack the lad, personalty wise, mahaut secretly thinks he's cute. thanks for reviewing!

moonylj 2005.06.09 - 01:00PM 3: Mathilde Signed
I loved this chapter especially Snape's reaction to Spike, very well written! Mahaut and Snape were as good as usual and I loved Mathilde, although I did spend the first half of the story wandering how old she was...!

Author's Response: I'm glad someone else likes Mattie, coz l had great fun writing her. Certain things like severus' reaction to one of his children Marrying a muggle rockstar and what he would think about Octavius' choices were what promted me to write this in the first place. You get so see more of spike later on, he's good ar light relief, coz he's a bit of a bloke. thanks for reviewing!

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