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| June W | 2005.08.15 - 02:10PM | 13: Together | Signed |
| They didn't say goodbye to the house elves? And how will Etienne know that hs father kissed him if he was asleep and no one saw? (Unless the portraits saw?) Did S&M have portraits made of themselves? Author's Response: more about elves and portraits in the final few chapters, in fact frou frou has an important part to play from now on, but l cant say more than that without spoiling it. thanks for reviewing again! | |||
| Seanna | 2005.08.15 - 04:20AM | 13: Together | Signed |
| Oh pooh! I think I made a mistake in reading this at 9am with my toast. I'm going to have a rotten day now, bloody tanya and your weepy story...............sniff.........its sooo sad! xxx Author's Response: Thats twice l've made you cry! l thought that you sunderland lasses were meant to be ded hard? l feel not in the slightest bit repentant about your rotten day, coz it means that l did my job properly! thanks for reveiwng! | |||
| June W | 2005.08.15 - 01:32AM | 13: Together | Signed |
| Okay, I went back to re-read 'Bellatrix' (AGAIN!) and it just says in the vision he dies in her arms. But with all their kids and grandkids at the house this weekend, somehow I started thinking that everyone would be together, instead of waking up and finding our fave couple dead in the garden. Sigh again.... I know this whole story was about that third vision, but still I didn't expect it to happen here. And as his soul flew away confused me because it is right after S&M became one - so I thought it would be their shared soul flying away, not his soul flying away. You know that I'm just whining because you killed off S&M, don't you? Sigh.... sad reader goes off in search of chocolate.... Author's Response: Glad you didn't expect it, that means kl did my job properly. sorry l confused you, l was sort of trying to write fronm severus point of view as thier souls merged, but there is a wee bit more about that right at the very very end, so keep reading if you want more info. feel free to whine... hope you find good chocolate... now i want some too, but then again, l always want chocolate, so nothing new there! thanks for eviewing! | |||
| June W | 2005.08.15 - 01:10AM | 13: Together | Signed |
| Erm ... uh ... in the vision you described in the other story, wasn't he supposed to be in his bed, with Mahaut, surrounded by all their kids? This isn't the end, is it? Sigh.... Author's Response: L never said that he would die in bed, only that it would be in her arms. and it's not quite the end, there are a few more chapters yet! thanks for reviewing! | |||
| moonylj | 2005.08.14 - 05:12AM | 12: Sunday Evening | Signed |
| Ahhh sweet and sugary! I loved second wedding even if my teeth are now rotting! Author's Response: just remember to clean your teeth and you should be fine! thanks for reviewing | |||
| starshadow | 2005.08.10 - 01:51PM | 12: Sunday Evening | Anonymous |
| The 2nd wedding was so sweet... What a fab idea. Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter - the artwork is fab too. Can't wait for the next chapter... x Author's Response: told you it was sugary! uploading the next chapter now, but l have butterflies about it. thanks for reviewing | |||
| greenwood | 2005.08.09 - 07:18PM | 12: Sunday Evening | Signed |
| Very well done! I thought your ending - bringing the day down to one on one in such an intimate moment was very touching. You can really see how the children love their parents and the parents really love their children. Author's Response: aw quite the little love in isn't it? to be honest severus and mahauts intimate moments are the easiest parts for me to write sometimes, they are so very easy together in my head, isn't it nice that l'm so in touch with my imaginary friends?l think they do all love each other very much, even if they're not good at saying it, thats why severus has such a problem with ettienne, it hurts all the more because he does love his son. thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Seanna | 2005.08.09 - 03:41PM | 12: Sunday Evening | Anonymous |
| What a bloody romantic softy you are!!!!
Yet again a very nice chapter, although I grow alittle impatient for some action. However, I have never been know to be the patient type so it's best to ignore me and continue as ever.
All your pictures are lovely and you're right, Spike is quite yummy!
Glad to see your learning the powers of restraint. You averted TWO, count them TWO lemons!!! Well done, I'm sure it was hard.
Anyhoo, very nice, keep me posted and until Severus admits that Trewlany's words are utter truth then make mine the third vision! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Author's Response: l know you don't like lemons, dear, but l wasn't aware that l had avoided any! yes spike is cute, matties a lucky girl, don't get the trewlawny reference, please explain? what did you say? am l being thick?thanks for reviewing | |||
| snapeaddict | 2005.08.07 - 02:50AM | 12: Sunday Evening | Signed |
| I'm on low-carb, so I fear for my health after reading this chapter. Well...nevermind. I still like it. Well done. Author's Response: you like iut all the more coz you know that its bad for you, dont you? thanks for reviewing!i | |||
| June W | 2005.08.05 - 08:42PM | 12: Sunday Evening | Signed |
| So Spike didn't get a prize for winning the chess match? I like the 50th anniversary thing - sounds wonderful, although I was a little leery about Etienne as best man, seeing that he later opposed his parents staying married. I am glad Mahaut told Severus about Etienne's apology, although the prat still needs to do something about being a proper dad to his baby boy, like getting a divorce. And will Severus and Mahaut eventually tell their kids what Mom and Dad did during the war??? It would help them to appreciate their parents more, and to understand WHY their parents taught them certain values. And to help Jamie understand the animosity to his dad. Have I told you lately that I adore your story? Author's Response: l think not being turned into a froggie was sufficient reward! knew you's like the wedding, you big softie, just like me! etteine was my choice as best man exactly bacauase of what he said later, l'm twisted that way! cant really answer any of the other questions without spoiling the next 4 chapters, so you'll just have to keep reading. thanks for adoring my story you're so sweet! and thanks for reviewing | |||
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