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moonylj 2005.06.05 - 02:44PM 2: Drusilla Signed
I'm feeling sad already! Please post the family tree if you can, it'd be good for reference... Love Drucilla but it feels funny to think of her as 90!

Author's Response: I'm trying my best with the family tree, hopefully soon! i know what you mean though, dru doens't feel 90 to me either, i think witches and wizerds have ayoung attitude though, how else could they live so much longer without growing crazy? thanks for reviewing!

Seanna 2005.06.04 - 07:01AM 2: Drusilla Signed
Ah that was lovely, although I'll be very surprised if Snape dosen't go out with a bang, I wonder how he dies? Anyway, very nice indeed, I especially like the sibling banter. "Hair of the Dog potion!" I must have it! I like Drusilla, shes a perfect mix of them both.

Author's Response: I'm not giving anything away about thier eventual demise, so you'll just have to wait. glad you liked the banter, i like a bit of banter myself! i believe that a propreitary brand of "hair of the dog potion" is available from several apothecaries in both diagon alley and hogsmeade, although i doubt that any of the commercially available brands are half as good as prof snape's home brew! maybe you could pick up some next time you are in london, i'm sure if you did some comparative testing, playwitch would be interested in the results, perhaps you could make a few galleons out of it? glad you like dru, she's going to be poking her nose into her siblings business so you'll be seeing qhite abit of her in the next few chapter (not as much as you're gooing to see of mattie and spike, but that's another staory) thanks for reviewing!

greenwood 2005.06.03 - 06:53PM 2: Drusilla Signed
Such a wonderfully tender chapter. Loved it.

Author's Response: thankyou. l was a bit worried i'd let severus and mahaut mellow a bit too much, but severus is going to missbehave in the next chapter, and in chapters5,6,and7, so maybe not! mahaut is going to be a bit sneaky too, it's one of the side effects of spending so much time with the potions master. thanks for reviewing!

June W 2005.06.03 - 01:00AM 2: Drusilla Signed
Ack! How many hankies will I need before your story finishes??? Did Drusilla have a happy marriage? It doesn't seem that she understands her parents' closeness. Did her parents tell her about everything they went through - the Bellatrix years and Severus' spy years? I'm glad Drusilla will at least have Ovid, who seems like a nice friend, but who will the house elves have? Oh, where's that box of hankies....

Author's Response: erm, well i don't have shares in kleenex or anything. you get mathilde in the next chapter, she's the youngest and she's a bit naughty, i had fun with her! but i'm trying to post the family tree before the next chapter- having trouble with spaing thouh. you find out more about what the children know in snippets in future chapter, so you'll have to pay attention i'm afraid, mattie will tell you some stuff. ovid is nice, i named him after the roman poet ovid, who wrote the metamorphosis, it seemed appropriate. the house elves have each other, and the washing up, they find the washing up very comforting! thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: sorry! i forgot to say, yes , Dru had a very happy marriage, until the daft sod got himselt eaten by a dragon, men eh? tch! you send them down the shops for a loaf of bread, and what do they do?

snapeaddict 2005.06.01 - 01:48AM 1: Le Dejeuner Sur L'herbe Signed
Old farts rule! At least if it's Severus and Mahaut we're talking about. Certain other old farts - you know who I'm referring to - are less enjoyable. *lol* I hope my hubby and I will still be that raunchy when we're old farts. I wonder what it would be like to have known all your life how (and approximately when) you would die and then realise that the time has come. Must be weird.

Author's Response: ah, obviously you do like old farts! jolly good! l agree that it must be a bit wierd to know appoximatly how and when you are going to die, but also it hink that it would be strangley comforting, at least you know you're not going to be run over by the number 22 bus to oldham next time you pop down to the post office for a book of stamps! plus there is so much in the wizarding world that's wierd anyway, so i think that they'd be able to take it in their stride on that basis. i'll keep my finger crossed for you and your hubby's future raunchiness. l'd ask if you're thatr aunchy now, but i don't thtink i really want to know! thnaks for reviewing!

greenwood 2005.05.31 - 08:33PM 1: Le Dejeuner Sur L'herbe Signed
I had not realized the second story was finished! This one ports to be very good and well in keeping with the first two. Good opening...you have drawn me in.

Author's Response: so did you read this before the end of colchis then? hope that wasn't too confusing, but then again the plot was a bit minimal in ch10 anyway, it got squeezed out by all that snogging, randy little buggers! more coming your way soon, thanks for reviewing!

Seanna 2005.05.31 - 04:09PM 1: Le Dejeuner Sur L'herbe Signed
Very nice, very intriguing....so they're gunna die then, I wonder how? I always like it when they bicker, makes it more realistic in a way. Some other stories just give you the worldwind romance, a few lemons and thats it. It's nice to see aspects of their lives together afterward and on into old age. I'm quite excited to meet these children and great grand children...

Author's Response: glad you like to read the bickering, because i like wirting it. don't you think it would be impossible to put up with snape and not bicker though? not unless you were a total doormat, yuo'd have to bicker with him, no matter how much you loved him. sounds as if you're a catherine cookson sprawling family saga type of girl, good, read on, coz thats what you're going to get! the kids are fun, ive been really enjoying writing them, so i hope you're going to enjoy reading them. thanks for reviewing!

starshadow 2005.05.31 - 03:37PM 1: Le Dejeuner Sur L'herbe Signed
You know I'm crap at reviews, so I'll keep it short and sweet. It were great!!

Author's Response: short and sweet is good, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing!

June W 2005.05.31 - 03:09PM 1: Le Dejeuner Sur L'herbe Signed
He hadn’t touched a bacon sandwich for over a hundred years. Heh-heh! Neither would I. And no vacations to Greece, although I wonder if you'll tell us how Drusilla did with her test there. Or what happened to Minerva, and Ginny Weasley. BTW, nice use of Trelawney - poor Severus must have gagged at having to acknowledge her on this! postprandial exertions - right..... A house elf named Twinkle? Severus really is being a "cupcake," isn't he - devil's food. Time for a family photograph of everyone together? Okay, I'm ready for the next chapter!

Author's Response: i'm goint to post a family tree( if between me and the admins we can ever figure out exactly how to do it, few problems there, apparently no one has ever needed a family tree before! - trust me to be an awkward sod- i'm so talented in that area!) but i wouldn't even know how to go about a family photo, nice idea though, maybe i'll get the old watercolours out if i have some spare time. your right, i think poor severus must have been a bit peeved when it was sybil who figured things out, but can you imagine the look on minerva's face too! i like the comparison of severus to devils food, nice one! l think they've both mellowed a little bit, i mean severus no longer has the stress of having to deal with dunderheads every day, and that's probably done wonders for his nerves. but worry not, there are still snarky bits ahead, and their kids are not all angelic little sweety pies either, although i think dru and mattie are probably the nicest, and you get to meet tham 1st. next chapter belongs to drusilla, she's the eldest, and she's a bit responsible, then you get mattie, who's just sooooooooo not the responsible! thanks for reviewing!

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