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Reviews for Ashen and Sober Skies

greenwood 2005.06.10 - 04:09PM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
My only complaint is that the chapters are so short! This story has such a good feel to it that it is hard to see the end of the chapter coming. Please keep going!

Author's Response: I tend to write short chapters because that's what is most comfortable for me - and this story has a very choppy feel to it, where the chapters are more little snippets of life and the healing process, rather than a play-by-play, if that makes any sense.

Teatochan 2005.06.10 - 01:01PM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
Oh please please write more on this story!! I am really enjoying your style of writing, it is very discriptive and I truely do like how you have made the memories into physical things in a way...

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! You'll be happy to know that the story as its written is at nineteen chapters now, and is nearly complete. Updates are scheduled every couple of days as time permits editing.

Ali1124 2005.06.10 - 09:40AM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!

Author's Response: Thank you. Updates are coming every couple of days, although the next one may not happen until Monday, depending on what my weekend has in store for me.

sadlittlesnapefan 2005.06.10 - 09:23AM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
I really like the image of the memory tree. And what could be worse torture than having all your good memories destroyed, knowing that they're there, but that you can access them. And young Severus, what a tug on the heartstrings. This is just a powerful story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I was really rather fond of the idea of the memory tree myself. In fact, the entire mindscape was just such a fascinating concept. More to come soon!

Owlbait 2005.06.10 - 07:31AM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
what lovely imagery, I hope Dumbledore does come back soon. Severus needs to trust again. The downriver Severus, now he sounds grim.

Author's Response: "Grim" does seem to be the most common word associated with this fic... :) But since that was the point, I think I must be doing well. Thank you again!

June W 2005.06.10 - 03:17AM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
Dumbledore IS going to come back, isn't he? The boy-Severus won't trust him again if he promises to "not be gone long" and fails to return. He should give the boy-Severus a big hug; I still think he'd improve if he had more physical contact. Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Physical contact is such a bizarre prospect. I don't think I really realized it, but there are people whose families simply *do not touch each other*. At all. And for someone who comes from such a background, the respect for personal space becomes extremely important. Not to mention, the potential for any sort of physical contact to be misconstrued as something that it is not.

zafania 2005.06.10 - 03:11AM 8: Seven - Memories Signed
sorry l haven't reviewed for a while, i just caught up. loving this, especiallt the dream sequence. if there wasn't already such a long queue i would volunteer to help lick the porions master's wounds (and the other bits for thst matter!)

Author's Response: You and I are together on the licking part, at least. :) Sadly, I think I'm rather towards the back of the line, as I only recently found the glory of Snape-fic.

EXECUTR 2005.06.09 - 07:51PM 7: Six - Somnia Aperio Signed
Good story. Please keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thank you! That is one thing that I can promise. One new chapter is on its way. :)

greenwood 2005.06.09 - 03:57PM 7: Six - Somnia Aperio Anonymous
Oh oh OH..what a way to tighten the ropes around your readers! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is forthcoming.

LariLee 2005.06.09 - 12:26PM 7: Six - Somnia Aperio Signed
I hope Albus can do some good while he is there. Definitely another compelling chapter.
~Lisa

Author's Response: Ooh, compelling. I like the sound of that. As aways, thanks for the review. I feel all warm and fuzzy having received it!

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