Reviews for Shadow of the Moon
scoutwithwings |
2009.08.23 - 03:34AM |
10: Time of Decision, Moment of Truth |
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I enjoyed this. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) |
NoxSomnium |
2008.05.05 - 02:11PM |
2: Uncomfortable Explanations |
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Lupin is...oddly giddy. I know he's excited, but canon Lupin suppresses his emotions to the point of ridiculousness. Unlike Snape, who tends to channel everything into rage, he only becomes mildly anything except under extreme circumstances. I think he would be trying harder to suppress his excitement. Failing, undoubtedly, but trying. |
phoenix |
2005.04.21 - 01:32AM |
10: Time of Decision, Moment of Truth |
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Very nicely done. All in all a great follow up. You did an absolutely marvelous job capturing both characters and, as always, I loved the verbal sparring....I also like that while there is a cure, that perhaps might help the newly bitten, it is not without consequences for those that have been afflicted for a while. I really enjoyed this. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.29 - 09:47PM |
9: Your Dreams Could Come True, It Could Happen To You |
Anonymous |
interesting side effects. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.29 - 09:35PM |
6: Reviving the Sacrificial Wolf |
Anonymous |
Minor nitpick in an otherwise fantastic story. How long does that potion last? Unlikely as it could be, Lupin could have turned into a wolf while sleeping in the guest room.
Author's Response: Snape states in Chapter Two that the potion would need to be taken every month...my intent was to imply that it would last similarly to the Wolfsbane Potion. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.29 - 09:27PM |
5: Testing on Live Animals is Strictly Prohibited |
Anonymous |
Good detail. I like how you put in their feeling about things.
The clothes dialog was hysterical. Snapes thoughts about Lupin transforming were poignant. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.29 - 09:20PM |
4: The Cage |
Anonymous |
Nice dialog. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.29 - 09:16PM |
3: Slaughtering Guinea Pigs in the Name of Research |
Anonymous |
guinea pig at my door step. Cute phrase. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.29 - 09:04PM |
1: A Cure or Not a Cure, That's Only Half the Question |
Anonymous |
I like the moral dilemma that Snape new potions entail. good insight. |
June W |
2004.09.22 - 03:06PM |
10: Time of Decision, Moment of Truth |
Anonymous |
You're not going to tell us what happened to Marga? In her childlike state, did she wander off and get herself killed? Will there be another sequel? |
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