Reviews for The Colchian Inheritance
| snapeaddict |
2005.05.25 - 07:30AM |
6: Journeys |
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So, finally he does come to his senses. Groveling time, I'd say!!!
Author's Response: yes but it will be subtle grovelling. by the way, thankyou for using the word grovel, grovel is one of my all time favourite words, fab word grovel! thanks for reviewing! |
| starshadow |
2005.05.14 - 06:13AM |
6: Journeys |
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It's great being able to see the different sides of Severus... At least he's decided to go after her instead of moping. Bloody men... Great chapter too - thanks!!
Author's Response: ANd yea, verily so 'twas written in times of yore, when two or more women shall gather together, verily they shal verbally abuse the males! Anyway, mopings just no fun to write, so l could only indulge him so much(it's also no fun to read, can you imagine 6 pages of"i'm so pathetic and sad" it would be like spending time with marvin the paranoid androin, although, if you like i could supply you wioth a beverage that is almost but not quite like tea!)Thanks for reviewing! |
| Ali1124 |
2005.05.10 - 11:07AM |
6: Journeys |
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I need to know what happens! I love it!
Author's Response: updating soon, l hope, as long as my wierd spelling doesn't get in the way. glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reviewing! |
| June W |
2005.05.09 - 04:35PM |
6: Journeys |
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Well, I'm glad he decided to go after her, and that he FINALY realized Medea didn't kill her sons. I really like Minerva's actions - yelling at Severus (who deserved it!), explaning the situation by saying Severus is a male and Mahaut is pregnant (although Mahaut's feelings are far more than mere hormones raging). Interesting that Mahaut was smarter than Severus and Hagrid, in getting a Thestral to come quickly by using her own blood rather than a ferret's. So is anyone going to tell Ginny that Mahaut is gone? Thanks for the new chapter!
Author's Response: well, it wouldn't have been much of a story if he hadn't gone after her, there is only so many pages of moping and feeling sorry for yourself that one person can write, after all! l think Minerva would be pretty typical of most people reactions though, she seems to me like the rest of us, and we all like to indulge in the occaisional bout of verbal male abuse don't we girls?(and yeah verily, so it was written in days of yore, when two or more women shal gather together, they shal verbally abuse the males!) as for mahaut being smart, well of course she 's smart, but l'm not sure if it wasn't just desperation in this case. thanks for reviewing! |
| thewhisperingwolf |
2005.05.09 - 04:03PM |
6: Journeys |
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Just deep and bitter and painful and wonderful! I love how you balance the the emotional intensity with deft brushes of humor. The final two sentences about waiting for the Thestral is a perfect counterpoint to the opening of chapter.
Author's Response: thankyou for noticing humour. l'can't help that, l'm terrible with the gallows humour, l have a complete innability to take life seriously, l got told off last year for scaring people with the sarcasm! l don't think there's any hope of a cure at this stage, l'm too far gone. thanks for reviewing! |
| aramintasnape |
2005.05.09 - 03:10PM |
6: Journeys |
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Thank goodness Severus has got his arse in gear and is going after her! Now I just hope he finds her before something awful happens. I liked the way you described the 'different faces of Severus', if I can put it like that. I'm tired and I can't think how to phrase it any better! And thanks for explaining the spelling of 'Sokrates' - I admit I was wondering about that!
Author's Response: as for the sokrates thing, apologies agian for my incurable nerdyness. i liked the description of differeant faces of severus, thats quite good. l think l need to stop listening to the voices in my head though, every single one of them keeps tellling me that l'm not eating enough chocolate, they're ganging up on me! thanks for reviewing! |
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