Reviews for Rowan's Secret
phoenix |
2005.07.22 - 04:43PM |
17: Quarrel and Estrangement |
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Oh, poor naive Rowan. She's really gotten in over her head, hasn't she? I look forward to seeing how she resolves this one and if her apology will be accepted or if she can accept what Severus is.
Author's Response: Both things definitely have to happen, making up the argument is important, but isn't going to fix the problem. |
phoenix |
2005.07.22 - 04:23PM |
16: Surviving Potions |
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Great chapter. I love how they try to go about things normally. The "because your my fiancee points were great" LOL...I like how she begins to realize how much more experienced Snape is when they kiss, great kiss, BTW. I look forward to checking out the next chapter. :)...And don't worry about being out of canon, it's still a great story.
Author's Response: A really good kiss is a fine thing :*) Normal, alas, doesn't last long. Rowan hasn't realized something important yet. |
Lady Whitehart |
2005.07.22 - 09:46AM |
17: Quarrel and Estrangement |
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I'm thrilled beyond words to see that you're going to finish this. I agree with Trickie Woo: Hooray for AU, where canon doesn't matter! Poor Rowan, being so naive to think that he wouldn't be continuing with his spy status. Are things going to get worse before they get better?
Author's Response: I think she had something of a mental block about it, which was why she flipped out that way. Things won't get worse exactly, but they won't resolve immediately either, and there will be an additional complication. I'm way too fond of complications :*) |
Aiden |
2005.07.22 - 04:12AM |
17: Quarrel and Estrangement |
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I am so glad you decided to update. I've had enough of dissecting HPB for a while. The new chapter is great--she does have to deal with the reality of living with a spy.
Author's Response: Me too, working on this story means I can just ignore HBP, and all it's implications, for a little while. I thought I'd be too upset at being out of canon to write more right away, but it's really still fun. |
Trickie Woo |
2005.07.21 - 11:25PM |
17: Quarrel and Estrangement |
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I should have proof read that, even better would be if Occlumency would go back to the print size they used to use in reviews, then I wouldn't feel that the typos in my reviews make me look so stupid. My corrections are, she can keep it, and, give me a good fan fic any day.
Author's Response: Same for author responses. Maybe a chance to edit them, pfeh.
HPB is great, I really am happy with it, now that I've gotten over the initial shock, but it's going to be a while before it really takes up residence in my brain. |
Trickie Woo |
2005.07.21 - 11:20PM |
17: Quarrel and Estrangement |
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I'm glad that you are not going to change anything about your story. As I've been telling other authors in my reviews, since HBP canon sucks... I prefer AU any day to Rowlings current canon. Potter canon is hers and she can keept, give a good fan fiction any day, I'd much rather read it. I was glad to see the honking daffodils back. Now I'm waiting for the reconciliation, update soon.
Author's Response: Anything new I do will be compatible with current canon, but I'm not going to mangle a story that's nearly done at this point. Besides, it's fun to revel in the pre-HBP world a while longer and this is a perfect excuse. |
Lady Whitehart |
2005.07.20 - 09:00AM |
16: Surviving Potions |
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Nice description of that first kiss! Glad to hear that you will be continuing the story. If you keep writing I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: I'll keep writing, I'm in it till then end! |
EXECUTR |
2005.07.15 - 06:25PM |
16: Surviving Potions |
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Very good. Please keep it coming. |
Verity Brown |
2005.07.14 - 03:38PM |
16: Surviving Potions |
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I love the "for being my fiancee" points. That was quite a sultry kiss (and I confess that I feel fortunate to have been privy to *all* the various versions of it)! "If you come to me anyway, I cannot promise to be gentle." I like how he understands himself and his own limitations. Anyway, this is definitely a place to pull out that fan. :~)
I'm such a slave driver, aren't I? ;~)
Author's Response: If you count yourself lucky to have read some of that stuff I won't argue with you. I'll just stay waaay over here and won't hand you any sharp objects! Hmm. better watch out for the dull ones too - I hear they hurt more. ;^)
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Gina Potter |
2005.07.14 - 01:43PM |
16: Surviving Potions |
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After this chapter, you better finish it! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: You'll be glad to know I have most of the next two chapters drafted, so I have no excuse not to keep going! |
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