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Reviews for Rowan's Secret

TRE 2006.08.08 - 08:06PM 1: Introducing Rowan Bourne Signed
Great promise to a new story. Only one thing bothered me. "or else your F will be all too visible as half of your final grade" er, shouldn't that be a D or a T?

Author's Response: oh my, how did I miss that all this time? Guess I'll have to sneak back and fix it - thanks :o)

LunaSnape 2006.08.06 - 08:42PM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
Ok, I really enjoy this story! this intro to her mother worked very well. She acted just like all mothers would have. I am really concernd that she will deside not to marry him. It's just there is no comunication of the past and if she can barely wrap her head around what he did to her, even if she does marry him she would be broken after he tells his story. I'm not complaining it's just I would like to see more of her strength at what she can handle and maybe a bit more communication. pretty plz ;) *LS* P.S. I hope you update again soon to see what your imagination comes up with.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Communication is definitely an issue - and it's soooo hard to do while keeping Snape In Character. It seems to me that, in canon, he says exactly what he is thinking, but he never justifies himself - it's take him or leave him, as is. I'd even say that is his way of testing others. Only the rare few that can see his worth without having it explained to them are worthy of his time. We know how Harry responds, but it is to be hoped that Rowan will see with clearer eyes. I've got much of the next chapter drafted, but it's a toughie and will take time to get right.

Nikara 2006.08.03 - 02:18PM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
I love this story! I need more!

Author's Response: Thanks. There will be more, but not till after vacation - leaving tomorrow!

witte heks 2006.08.03 - 09:42AM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
I started reading this story early this morning and I've just finished chapter 22.I must say.....It's Brilliant. I love the way you describe Snape. He's just the way I like him and Rowan, she's such a tough cookie. You've done a great job!!! I will be going on my holidays soon and will be without a pc for two weeks . I hope there will be updates to this story when I get back. I can't wait. LOL Ann :-)

Author's Response: I can't promise an update quite by then - I'm going away too. I've got the next chapter well in hand though, never fear.

Melusina 2006.08.02 - 05:31PM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
Your writing just gets richer and more expressive as the story progresses. I really like Laurel. She seems strong and intelligent - like her daughter. :) I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yep, seeing Laurel shows where Rowan gets her strengh. Thank you :)

Lady Whitehart 2006.08.02 - 12:58PM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
I was beginning to think you had given up on this fic, but I'm glad to see it updated. :) Poor Laurel Bourne! To lose everything and be thrown into a world that she doesn't fully feel comfortable in, I hope everything turns out all right for her. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: I have every confidence that Laurel will find her feet in time. :)

Trickie Woo 2006.08.02 - 04:31AM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
I have been wondering when or if you would update this story again. I have checked here at Occlumency and at FF.net periodically with no luck until tonight when it appeared at both places. Now we know that Rowan's mother has been told everything, that 'He Who I Find Most Tiresome' thinks that Laurel is dead, and where she will stay while she's hidden. I have 2 questions, first who is Bracken's son? He is alluded to but not given a real indentity. Now for the second question that is more important to me, when will Severus be back in the picture?

Author's Response: It's Adrian Bracken's nephew who is mentioned, not his son, and it's Edgar Bracken, who has mentioned a family farm before - but of course who would remember details like that after so many months! We'll rejoin Severus next chapter, promise.

rdb1975 2006.08.02 - 01:59AM 22: The Dark Mark Signed
yeah! Update! I'm so glad you decided to keep the story going.

Author's Response: I'm committed to finish it (unless I'm committed before that) but I confess I've slacked way back on writing in favor of other interests lately. I have several more chapters in various states though, and there aren't all that many to go. Maybe that's why I slowed down - the end is coming, and I'm sad. Sniff!

Melusina 2006.05.01 - 03:53PM 16: Surviving Potions Signed
Um, wow. That kiss was amazing. Your Snape is really sexy, with his glittering eyes. I really like Rowan. She's strong and feminine and smart, yet still very much eighteen years old.

Author's Response: Ah yes, the kiss. Mmmmmm :)

phoenix 2006.03.23 - 03:59PM 21: Laurel Bourne Arrives at Hogwarts Signed
Oh, wonderful and update! Like I should really talk about that. LOL…I don’t know why, but the fact that the mirror is rude to Muggles really tickles me today. I like how you have added this tiny smidgen of humor in what promises to be a somewhat dark chapter…I think Rowan did a good job explaining to her mum, but you can’t just leave it there for too long, I mean that’s just not fair. *pouts* I know, life isn’t fair. *wink* Update when you can, I’ll be looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, the next chapter isn't too far off. It will probably go through at least one more draft before it's done though -- it's nowhere near ready to escape to the wide world yet. I liked doing Tippy - she's nearly the only thing that survived unscathed from the original draft of that chapter.

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