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Reviews for To Travel Through Time: Part One: Chronos Taxiclevo Filtro

Grey_Eminence 2005.05.18 - 12:32PM 6: Sun of the Summit Signed
Nice! I kinda fell behind my reading lately, but am making ammends... This is sofar a very good story, I really like it! Not to mention that if the rug has anything at all to do with Snape, well...! ;) I'm looking forward to the next update!!! (By the way, your description of the place really really reminded me to book a holiday! I can feel the sunshine...)

Author's Response: It's all right, I understand. I'm glad that you like it and the rug... *ahem* I'm glad I reminded you to book a holiday. Booking a holiday is very, very important. I'm going to the States in July (there is a God!). I'm going to a St. Louis Cardinals game (yes! Go St. Louis Cardinals!), so maybe I'll get more ideas there. -Mel

wytchkat 2005.05.17 - 11:26PM 6: Sun of the Summit Signed
yeah!this is going really well...keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.05.17 - 01:03PM 6: Sun of the Summit Signed
Very interesting themes in some of the house decor. Kestral must come from a wealthy family. Are her parents dead, is seh the last of the line? I hope you will be giving more about her background soon. Update soon.

Author's Response: She does, believe me. Everything shall be explained bit by bit and in its entirety in chapter 11. Also, in case you've forgotten, she has a married sister. Remember the mention of her an her husband Thespis in chapter four? ;) Keep that in mind! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.05.11 - 10:32PM 5: Arrival Signed
Did Snape get there OK? Why were all the question marks sprinkled though this chapter? Yes, I guess that was you punishment. Update soon.

Author's Response: The question marks are formatting problems, which I intend to correct now. You may not get a chapter as soon as you wish, for I have finals to study for and things to do. But don't worry, the next chapter's ready! -Mel

wytchkat 2005.05.10 - 01:24AM 5: Arrival Signed
did i mention i'm hooked?good job!

Author's Response: lol, thank you! I'm burned out, but don't worry, you'll have your chapters. I can't WAIT for my finals to be over. (week and a half, week and a half, week and a half...) -Mel

wytchkat 2005.05.08 - 04:35AM 4: Acceptance Signed
nice....but what happens next? I'm waiting....

Author's Response: These chapters are short, but they'll get longer. Cross my heart...(at some point. Grrr. My muse is being stingy). Thanks for everything! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.05.08 - 12:01AM 4: Acceptance Signed
Good girl, I'm glad you took it to heart and edited chapter 2, you are too good of a writer to bother with that kind of crap. It was as icky as the comment Charles made to Camilla. A sex scene is much more erotic when the details are left to the reader's imagination. This is much better , the potion really intrigues me, such costly ingredients. Keep it up and update soon.

Author's Response: *wince* Egad, glad I edited it. *wince, wince* I'm glad you like it better now! Updating soon! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.05.06 - 10:08PM 3: The Proposal Signed
I was already to enjoy this story because I like your writing until chapter 2. UGH!!! 'The Conference' was great, the sexual tension between Snape and Mara was wonderful and the sex was not text book graphic. This was very juvinile compared to your adult and mature treatment of the sex between Snape and Mara. I'm not a gay basher, but don't want to read about gay or lesbian sex. I have gay friends who don't constantly tell people how great their sex life is. They prefer to keep it private, and I respect their privacy. It would be different if it were just inferred, like the het sex was in 'The Conference', but now that has gotten me totally turned off. Kestral and Snape have a potential as a very interesting pairing. Why can't she just be a girl with gay friends? I will check back in a few chapters to see if anything has changed, and then decide if I will continue reading.

Author's Response: Do you know that my friend said the same thing? I've reread it and am rewriting it because now I've got two friends in a snit with me. I guess I wanted to try something different. (Not my forte, by the way). So yes, I am rewriting it! (With my friend constantly checking up on me). Thanks for everything, Trickie. -Mel

zafania 2005.05.06 - 10:25AM 3: The Proposal Anonymous
I'm going to keep reading to,my current fic is going all greek too, so it's nice to know that l'm not the only wierd classics nerd out there!

Author's Response: Very nice, I'll be sure to read it! I'm glad you like it! -Mel

wytchkat 2005.05.05 - 08:42PM 3: The Proposal Signed
This is a new twist and I love it!Please don't abandon this-It's going to make for an intense tale.

Author's Response: I will not! I'm correcting the fourth chapter right now. We shall see more emergence of Greek things soon! Thank you! -Mel

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