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| snapeaddict | 2005.05.25 - 07:35AM | 8: The Eumenides | Signed |
| Love the Eumenides!! Can't we kill him just a little? Poor Severus...*sigh* Well, serves him right. ;-) Author's Response: it did serve him right, didn't it? l liked the idea of turning the tables though, coz he always wants to be so dominant, and Mahaut's power is damaged l thought she deserved to have a moment of glory where she is the one in complete charge whether he likes it or not. the first draft had me making the Eumenides dead straight scary, but it just didn't work, so i just thought "sod it" and went for silly instead, anticlimaxes are always funnier in my opinion anyway. thanks for reviewing! | |||
| snapeaddict | 2005.05.25 - 07:32AM | 7: Aeaea | Signed |
| I love the description of the island and of course I couldn't help being very very gleeful at seeing Severus suffer. :-) Author's Response: oh you little sadist you! if l'd known how popular torturing the poor bloke was going to be, l would have done a lot more of it! glad you liked the island. thanks for reviewing! | |||
| snapeaddict | 2005.05.25 - 07:30AM | 6: Journeys | Signed |
| So, finally he does come to his senses. Groveling time, I'd say!!! Author's Response: yes but it will be subtle grovelling. by the way, thankyou for using the word grovel, grovel is one of my all time favourite words, fab word grovel! thanks for reviewing! | |||
| greenwood | 2005.05.23 - 07:39PM | 9: Sacrifice | Signed |
| Good! Very good! What a choice to make.....Severus did well too I thought. I thought your discription of him as a boar was really rather funny! Author's Response: the description of Severus as a boar was really what inspired the whole story, so i'm glad you enjoyed it. and yes it was a hard choice tomake, but then, easy choices don't make interesting stories. thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Owlbait | 2005.05.23 - 11:33AM | 7: Aeaea | Signed |
| I really liked the textile bits, but I'm a total sucker for it :*)
I was beginning to wonder if Mahaut's silence was required by the ritual. The whole scene was starting to remind me of the fairy tale of the seven swans. The heroine isn't allowed to speak while she makes the nettle shirts that will undo the swan enchantment on her brothers. Author's Response: l love weaving too, mostly l tsblet weave, l like doing writng in double weave and gold brocading, painstaking but satifying, l use a warp weigted loom occaisionally too. last year someone gave me an 8 shaft loom but l havn't had tim to play with it yet, toooooo busy! l hadn't hought of the tale of the 7 swans, l havn't read that one for ages. l don't think Mahaut had any trouble maintanning her silence for ritual purposes though, she was after all masiively pissed off at him! thanks for reviewing | |||
| Ali1124 | 2005.05.23 - 09:21AM | 9: Sacrifice | Signed |
| Wonderful story!! Author's Response: thank you! glad you're enjoying it so far! | |||
| June W | 2005.05.22 - 07:16PM | 9: Sacrifice | Signed |
| I don't mind you turning him into a piggy as long as you turn him back. Piggy-Severus does not make for good lemons.... BTW, I re-read Ch7 of Bella for Mahaut's third vision, to see what your next story will be like - I saw you, dying, in my arms. - ack! too sad! They better have lots of kids and grandkids and sex and greatgrandkids and sex, with tons of happy stuff, before THAT happens. They've both had way too much angst - those years with Bella, etc. - it wouldn't be nice if you just offed them. Pleeeeeeeease??? Author's Response: no, l think poor Mahaut has already figured out that piggy severus does not make for good lemons! but l thought she was very brave to kiss him anyway, then again l'd rather kiss a pig than a frog! he's already human again though, coz Mahaut fed him the moly, so fret not, dear reader! figured out what the third visions is then? don't worry, the next story is set about 100 years ahead of this one, and yes there are children and grandchildred, a lot of the story is told from their point of view(l had particular fun with thier youngest daughter mathilde, esp when she was licking melted chocolate of a nak... sorry giving away too much info there!) l can't promise that it will all be happy, but it mostly will, and it will be agood death for them, l promise, and it won't be till right at the end of the story, l'm not just going to start the story by having their kids flush them down the toilet! and theres a short story to come in between, too! thanks for reviewing! | |||
| moonylj | 2005.05.22 - 02:24PM | 9: Sacrifice | Signed |
| I've just read both parts of this story (haven't done much else this weekend...) and I love your writing style! Thr references to greek mythology echo JK Rowling's style, and during the dream I kept trying to figure out who Medea was. Please update very very very soon! Author's Response: so glad l could facilitate your timewasting activities! so did you figure out who medea was in the end? or not until l told you, coz l treid to make it so it was not tto obvious, but still figure outable. updateing hopefully for the weekend. thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Isobel L | 2005.05.22 - 10:49AM | 9: Sacrifice | Signed |
| I spend my evening reading both of your stories yesterday (stayed up quite late) and I have to tell you, I think the world you've created from canon is brilliant. I love Mahaut, I love the way you write Severus, I love the mythological history woven through your story.
Looking forward to more pleasant evenings! Author's Response: l'm flattered, thankyou.bella was mt 1st ever fanfic so it's really reassuring that people have liked it so much. l hadn't written anything for years, and just after l started posting bella l found some stuff l'd had publisehd when l was 20, and l thought "ohm my god this is shite! what am l playing at!" l think l muct have grown up a bit since then, thankfully! l love Mahaut too, l just wish l was that together, and well, who doesn't love the potions master? thanks for reviewing ! ch10 coming soon | |||
| starshadow | 2005.05.22 - 06:44AM | 9: Sacrifice | Signed |
| Can't believe it's nearly the end - Severus sounded quite cute as a piggy (or wild boar, whatever...) but I'll be pleased when he's back to his usual form. Can't wait for the next chapter... Author's Response: he's already in his proper form, the moly has taken care of that, worry not! although he's probably a bit stinky by now. l'll try to get ch10 uploaded for next weekend, although why you'd want to read it is betond me- it's mostly snogging and makeup sex. thanks for reviewing | |||
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