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Reviews for The Great Snape-Deveroux Grudge Match - Part II: Watcher and Hunter

greenwood	2005.04.04 - 01:11AM	24: 33 Languages of Darkness and Light	Signed
So well done, again. This story is woven so with such detail that it seem so alive! This is not just a run of the mill fic. This is a well done novel! Your plot is keeping me in suspense. I love the interaction you are mater-minding in these last few chapters. We see more and more of Severus and Aurellia come out of hiding. Sevrus is very multi dimensional. I know it is too much to hop for but I was hoping that some romance would start to form from this. I do see something from time to time (and very cleverly done at that...like her noticing his eyes when he was "three-heads-to-the-wind", and his admitting that she is pretty. I will just have to be patient since the prophacy (sp) will eventually play out. Thanks for the generous updates! I eagerly look forward to more! Author's Response: * I do see something from time to time (and very cleverly done at that...like her noticing his eyes when he was "three-heads-to-the-wind", and his admitting that she is pretty.* YESSS!!!!!!!! WHOOOHOOOOOO! does major happy dance I am one very happy author right now -- glad you picked up on that! Thank you! Glad you are enjoying this. Multi-dimensional? Detailed? Suspense? Yay! You've made my day -- and it was a rough one, at that.

LariLee	2005.03.31 - 09:06PM	24: 33 Languages of Darkness and Light	Signed
So, you had to create a second language! I'm really going to remember that. You definitely have my appreciation for managing to keep all three languages straightened out, not to mention, the additional languages you slip in. I really enjoyed the lime green Jell-O as a study guide and I adored the watchers vow! I'm really glad they're getting along even though I miss the Grudge Match. :-) ~Lisa Author's Response: Yes, creating the languages has been fun, if challenging. This was probably the most "translating" work I had to do. Don't worry, there won't be a quiz :) Anything that is important will be repeated. The green jello reference is a nod to the folks at the Harry Potter Lexicon Fanfic Forum. Thank you!