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Reviews for The Conference

Black_lust_z	2005.04.01 - 08:57AM	20: Day Four	Signed
I love where this is going, I hope they have some successes on the potion soon. And I'm happy for Hermione’s healthy '100% human' baby boy, not that he wouldn't be loved any less if he was not completely human. Keep up the great work! ~Luv Loz, mwa!~ Author's Response: Of course. I'm sure that everyone was rooting for a perfectly normal baby boy. Thanks so much! -Mel

Grey_Eminence	2005.03.31 - 03:20AM	20: Day Four	Signed
How wrong they were... Now hold on a minute! Was this a hint of some kind? I am beginning to have the feeling that the potion will never see the 'light of the day', or better - inside of Remus' stomach... And you know the worst part? - I also know that YOU won't tell me just yet!!! Oh, the mysery... Update, update, update, please! Author's Response: snicker* whistles innocently Maybe, maybe not... I intend to leave you in complete suspense. -Mel*

Trickie Woo	2005.03.30 - 09:47PM	20: Day Four	Signed
I want more than dreams, unless it is the Sex God I dream of. Interesting way to do a sonogram. I read one story where Poppy waved her wand over the OFC's abdomen and it emitted a light that split into 2 beams of blue light, she was pregnant with twin boys and Snape fainted. Why don't you just add these transitions into the preceeding chapter? Professional authors do it all the time, they just make a break of several lines and then start another part of the chapter. It would make your chapters longer and I wouldn't have to nag so much. I'm too tired for that tonight, I spent last night in the Sleep Clinic at JHH to be monitored for sleep disturbences. They fit you will about 40 electrodes including your legs, a band on your upper chest and another on your lower abdomen, something on your right middle finger that measures your oxygen and emits a red light, tubing in your nose to see if you breathe through your nose or mouth, and to top it all off the hardest, narrowest bed you can imagine has green lights coming from the bottom on each side; then they expect you to be able to go to sleep. I doubt if I got 2 hours of sleep total, and it was all dozing and waking because I got yanked by the electrode tethers. Sorry I just had to get this off my chest and try to elicit some sympathy for my trials. So give me the dreams that I've been dreaming of. Author's Response: One word: ouch. I hope that I don't have to do that. eyes dart around, eyes narrow I sympathize. I think my father had to do that... but I can't remember. Frowns I hope you liked the way I did the sonogram. I have no idea where I got the thought... And I'll think about it. I've got several people nagging about every single little thing, so I'm getting used to it. Evil grin I shall be immune to you! MUAHAHAHA! blinks, coughs Yes, yes, I'll think about it. Thank so much, Trickie Woo! -Mel