Reviews for The Conference
niklars |
2005.03.28 - 05:43PM |
17: In the Name of Trust |
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Not terrible at all, quite good! I just started reading 'The Conference' today and I thought this chapter was really interesting and flowed nicely with the rest of the story. I, personally, rather like Snape a little bit OOC :). And I'm very much looking forward to the rest of the story! Thank-you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Now I'm definitely starting to like this chapter more. ;) I'm glad you like it, niklars, and I hope you like the rest of it as well. I live to serve chapters... long chapters. *wrinkles nose, winks*
Thanks again!
-Mel |
Grey_Eminence |
2005.03.28 - 01:37PM |
17: In the Name of Trust |
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Hmmm... Snape did get a bit 'fluffy' or 'teddy bear like' as I like to put it - HOWEVER, it was not too much and I must say that in order to fall in love with a man, the odd moment of weakness somehow works like a charm on women - Maras bottom I guess proves this correct!!! I think this chapter has its firm and righteous place ;)
Author's Response: *gasp* It's okay? *gasp* *dances for joy* *plot bunnies look smug* Thank you! I'm so glad! I thought it was awful. Well... I still think it's strange, but it's a bit better now that you tell me it's okay!
Happiness!
-Mel |
Black_lust_z |
2005.03.28 - 10:11AM |
17: In the Name of Trust |
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I love where this is going, great chapter...I'm curious about Hermione's child. Will the potion be used on her unborn child if it has any werewolf's genes? Keep up the fantastic work! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. Thank you so much! I guess you didn't think it was fluffy... whew!
-Mel |
Trickie Woo |
2005.03.27 - 11:52PM |
17: In the Name of Trust |
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I don't think it was out of character, I think it added interest to the story. The chapter should have gone on longer, it was far too short. I think 2000 to 2500 words is a good chapter length. I hope we get to the Sex God Snape soon.
Author's Response: Really? Wow. I'm astonished. I know several excellent reviewers and writers that hate OoC Snapes... sometimes (only sometimes) I'm one of them.
Sex God Snape is coming up... 19. 19!
-Mel |
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