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Reviews for Highly Improbable

Verity Brown 2005.04.29 - 06:04PM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
Hasn't that man learned YET not to say "Nothing can possibly go wrong"???

Anaxarete 2005.04.27 - 11:04AM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
Excellent chapter, the conversation between Dumbledore and Snape makes you think of that paternal bound everyone talks about. Dumbledore sure handled things rightly with Clancy :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

BaYer04rulz 2005.03.27 - 05:50AM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
Wonderful story! This is the first SS/OC story I've ever read, and it has not disappointed me. I love the dialogue and characterization, and many a times I laughed out loud! I am holding my breath for Severus. When will he get that no matter what Clancy would stay with him?

Author's Response: Thank you so much, BaYer04rulz! I appreciate all my reviewers, but when a new reader drops in, it really makes my day. Yes, for an intelligent wizard, Snape isn't too bright at times, is he? Thanks for reviewing!

phoenix 2005.03.26 - 06:38PM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
I love the way you have them having their parallel convesations. The misunderstandings are always so wonderful...I also liked the part about him going Slytherin on his decision to enjoy the situation as much as possible and almost despising himself....Won't she be surprised when she learns what he did?

Author's Response: Yes, she certainly will, and I don't know yet exactly what will happen until I write it. Thank you for all the reviews!

Sniv 2005.03.26 - 08:06AM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
YES YES an update! She always left the room knowing less than when she’d entered. hehe I bet many feels that way! If he missed me, it might light a fire under his cauldron. LOL! If I ever met Snape that would be my pickup line! "What's up Snapey-poo want me to ...ok I better stop! ..."Moreover, I would need to pack at least one half dozen spare pairs of trousers.” LOL Ah yes! “Because I’d miss --” Snape cut off his admission, realizing that he had just fallen prey to Hogwarts’ master meddler. Ah gotta love Dumbledore at times! “There’s a distinct difference between surprise and heart failure.” lol! In one swift move, they were entangled in each other’s arms, soaping and scrubbing, shampooing and scratching, and kissing their way to cleanliness. MmmMM! “A new era of trust and understanding.” *dies* Nooo! (oh dear I said that out loud...!) Nothing can possibly go wrong. Yeah right! Just please remember not to say that out loud because I still clearly remember what happened last time you said that Snape! LOL! Uhhuuu this is good - glad to see an update Karina :) I enjoy reading how Snape is so insecure and unsure, scare and yet so Slytherin...Bless him! And Clancy for being the pineapple princess! lol

Author's Response: Hi Sniv! This chapter took three days to post, then got bumped off the page in one day. I'm surprised anyone found this update at all! Glad you enjoyed it.

Trickie Woo 2005.03.25 - 06:04PM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
Good, they are back together, for a while at least. Now I ca got to work on that anagram. Do you remember the 'Morse' where we finally found out what his first mane was? He gave the woman an anagram and told her to figure it out.

Mari 2005.03.25 - 12:45AM 28: Everything Happens to Me Anonymous
I love your story so far, Snape is romantic, yet he does not loose his snapeyness ^_^ would you please help me with my snape? I am writing a story but my snape seems so ooc. please help!! Email me if you can at bloodyscallywags@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I e-mailed you, but it was returned due to an "invalid address". You may contact me from my bio page, if you wish.

Sigune 2005.03.24 - 09:08AM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
What a delight: a combination of Twinkling Dumbledore and Slytherin Snape - scrumptious! It makes this chapter a real treat. The qualities of your Snape have long earned you much justified praise, so I'll make use of the occasion to worship your Dumbledore. You have him pinned - he's a delightful old eccentric who, when he wants, can be vaguer than Fudge and more slippery than an eel; who chitchats only to throw the really important bits to his interlocutors when they don't expect them anymore; and who is a master schemer. Kudos! And of course I found myself (once again) laughing out loud. I was especially taken with the dungeon conversation (I agree with Snape: Dumbledore would be excellently suited as a matchmaker - perhaps for Witch Weekly?), and I must of course agree with Sophie about Clancy's vision of her future with Snape, too; and with Grainne when she says that even in this hilariously funny fic you manage to keep Snape in character... But how is the poor dear going to make his Death Eater past acceptable to his intended? I'm really even more apprehensive than he is...

Author's Response: I'm apprehensive too. Next to the love scene, the upcoming chapter will be the most difficult one to write. At least one thing is certain: When Severus Snape is fully in control, what can possibly go wrong? :-) Thanks for reviewing, Sigune!

sophierom 2005.03.24 - 08:36AM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
Yay yay yay! I haven't been around here much lately, so I was so happy to see that you had updated! I love Snape's internal struggle, and I love that he keeps thinking he's got to enjoy this while it lasts. That's such a perfect response for someone -especially a Slytherin someone - who's been caught in a lie or a difficult situation. And of course, this line is a classic: I could be Mrs. Severus Snape – the wife of a petty, emotionally unbalanced wizard who’d squander the family fortune on Dr. Pepper and keep dark secrets from me. Isn't that what we all want out of life? :-) Thanks so much for another great chapter. I hope you're doing well! Best, Sophie

Author's Response: Thanks, Sophie! Now that I've finally figured out how to work those darn html codes, the characters have a much easier time expressing their inner thoughts! :-D

Grainne 2005.03.23 - 08:21PM 28: Everything Happens to Me Signed
Most, most excellent. At times, when I am reading your story, I forget that I am reading "fanfic" on a computer screen. I find myself groping at my laptop monitor, trying to "turn the page" to read more of this tender, witty & intelligent work. This chapter was perfect in so many ways (and you know I do not use that word lightly). You have once again woven Clancy and other original details into the fabric of Hogwarts and canon with great skill. You have taken Snape's canon (Slytherin) qualities and written him anew, such that I can read about him becoming a Dr. Pepper fountain and, in this story, it seems perfectly apt (and belly-achingly funny). I have this feeling that everyone is going to quote the shower lines at you, so I wiil instead single out: "Snape’s Slytherin propensities rose to the occasion" (Ahem..ahem) and, "He sniffed the can and dipped his finger cautiously into the opening to sample the taste." Don't know why, but this was just one of those fabulous, hilarious and spot-on moments of Snapeworld/Clancyworld interface. Your take on Dumbledore and Severus's inner dialogue was also superb. [Claps madly...bows in gratitude for brightening my grim day.]

Author's Response: Thank you, Grainne! You've certainly brightened my grim day with your review. I wish I possessed your reviewing skills. Even when I've enjoyed a chapter immensely, I'm often at a loss for something insightful to say. I wish I'd read this review before I'd written the chapter. I would have tried to make it better to live up to your kind words! :-D

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