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LariLee 2005.03.23 - 07:20PM 3: Chapter 2: Werewolves are Trouble Signed
Athena is a girl who goes after what she wants! I wonder what will happen when Remus tells her...
~Lisa

Author's Response: Thanks, Lisa. Yeah, she is pretty darn forward, isn't she? LOL Of course, it's kind of in her nature, isn't it?...As for Remus, he's been a wonderful character to write for and I'm enjoying the ride.
Jean

Sniv 2005.03.23 - 04:46PM 3: Chapter 2: Werewolves are Trouble Signed
Interesting ...Im not sure where their relationsship will go...Please add more soon...You say you have 2 plot bunnies? ..

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Sniv. I'm having a lot of fun with this story. I'm getting ready to put the next chapter through my final personal, post-beta review and it should be up soon. I'm actually in the midst of writing 9, so major rewrites aren't likely, but it's becoming trickier and going a tad slower than some of the others. 5 & 6 are out to the betas so there will be regular updates and hopefully it will be finished with updates about once a week.

As for the plot bunnies, I have two camps of bunnies fighting for story supremacy. :D One group is on Severus' side and the other on Remus'. As for where the relationship goes, well...you'll see *evil grin*

Sniv 2005.03.21 - 01:56PM 2: Chapter 1: Meetings Signed
First she was rude by not returning the salt to the middle of the table, now she was being more discourteous by ignoring him. hehe! His scowl deepened as she placed her hand on Lupin’s knee, laughing at his latest joke. He got up, made great show of folding his newspaper, tucked it under his arm and stormed out of the staff room. Just admit it Snape - you are jealous! lol I really like the development here...Although I want Snape to be with Athena ...But I will look forward to an update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Sniv, but do you really think Severus will admit he's jealous? LOL My muses have had a lot of fun with jealous!Snape as he is just so much fun to write, I think I want to play with him a while. :-D
I'm going to submit the next chapter today so you should see that soon.

Sniv 2005.03.21 - 01:41PM 1: Prologue Signed
Another year of dunderheaded students and exploding cauldrons, he could hardly wait. I bet he cant! lol He looked up to see what this new professor looked like so he could avoid her. Oh yeah thats Snape! He was momentarily caught off balance. Oh ho he did not see that one coming - very good! Interesting start I already like Athena lol...She seems like a nice girl...woman ...

Author's Response: Thanks Sniv. I've tried to make Athena interesting and different from the other stories I've read. I'm glad you like her, though you will find she has some interesting secrets. :)
As you can tell, I've had a lot of fun with Snape's sarcastic wit. The first line you quoted is one of my favs. And having him interact with someone that catches him off guard will be even more fun

Andie Bubbles 2005.03.21 - 12:02AM 2: Chapter 1: Meetings Signed
I love it so far, although I am concerned that Remus will have his heart broken. I have such a soft spot for him! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Andie, thank you. I will admit that I have devloped a soft spot for Remus through this story. As an author, you should never, ever have a soft spot for your characters. ;-) The next chapter should be coming soon.

LariLee 2005.03.20 - 10:45PM 2: Chapter 1: Meetings Signed
I'm enjoying it. A jealous Snape is always fun, especially when he won't admit to why he is jealous. :-) Athena's innocent comment on the moon certainly put a damper on Lupin. And I love hearing the differences between the American schools and the British schools.
~Lisa

Author's Response: Thanks Lisa. I will admit that this fiction did not start out with a jealous!Snape, but after the evil plot bunnies latched onto Remus, another group of evil plot bunnies decided that jealous!Snape is tons of fun. So, he will be a staple for a while. I kind of like being able to make stuff up, and the American school has been fun, but sometimes I beat my head looking for differences. :D
Jean

Anouska Draconius 2005.03.16 - 08:34AM 1: Prologue Signed
Good start, looking forward to reading more soon.

Author's Response: Thanks AD. I've got about 6 chapters written so far with 4 to the betas. It has soem nice twists and turns along the way and I'm enjoying where my muses take me. I hope that readers will, too.

Obadiah Slope 2005.03.13 - 07:21AM 1: Prologue Signed
An interesting beginning, and I look forward to seeing where this takes us! Well done so far!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm having fun with this fiction. Severus has such a fun mind to slip into, though I will admit my muses wanted to play with some of the other characters a bit, too. The first few chapters at least should come out in fairly short order. After that, I'm at the mercy of the muses.

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