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| GREAT!! | 2005.04.15 - 09:34AM | 2: Entrance to Hogwarts | Anonymous |
| I love it and was wondering hen you'd add more chapters! Thanks for the great story! Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Everyone loves this part! *gasp* *sarcastically, with a grin* I wonder why. *snort* *laugh* -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.04.13 - 01:22PM | 26: The Woman that Saw My Aura | Signed |
| The ice skating came from out of left field for me, I don't remember seeing anything about it in the story before. I'm reading another story where the heroine was a figure skater in the past and that figures into the plot, so maybe I have them mixed up. But if this was the first time you mentioned skating, how did Snape know about it? I would imagine that Artemis was the least desirable house to be sorted to in her school, maybe her schoolmates called them the Vestal Virgins. I'm wondering about using Judas since it comes from Christianity, but I can't think of another betrayer or traitor from mythology, wait a minute, one just came to mind, Mordred, the son of Arthur and his 1/2 sister Morgause. He was a Slytherin type in the worst sense, very much like Lucius Malfoy. Chapter 27 is the next chapter, it better be a long, long one if she is going to finish the potion, get her sight back, see Snape in all his naked glory, lose her virginity, and get shagged senseless. Author's Response: Actually, the ice skating idea was mentioned in Chapter Eight: Secrets. To catch up with the story, you may want to reread that chapter. Don't let me lose you! Chapter Eight explains how Snape knew! That was what I was thinking actually! There was Mordred, but for some reason, I liked Judas better. It seemed (to me anyway) to give more impact... She will do all of that... well...4 out of 5 ain't bad. *winks* -Mel | |||
| Grey_Eminence | 2005.04.13 - 11:58AM | 26: The Woman that Saw My Aura | Signed |
| So, now we know why she doesn't ice skate anymore... I liked the part about bribing Hermione and the Mad-Eye Moody complex... Interesting. And I daresay I am very much looking forward to the next chapter (not only 'cause I remember something said about Ch. no 27...), but the "I'll see you in my dungeons" is a sentence worth to die for (when Snape is the one saying it...) ;) Go Mara!!! (I just hope she doesn't fall and break her leg along the way or something...) I can't wait for the next update!!! Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the... ahem, LEAD IN? *snigger* She won't, believe me. I'm not that stupid. *sings for joy* I'm finally at the peak! -Mel | |||
| Black_lust_z | 2005.04.13 - 11:53AM | 26: The Woman that Saw My Aura | Signed |
| Great chapter, and no…I'm not going to 'flame' you for blinding Mara. I'm rather intrigued as to how this will shape future chapters...thanks for the update, I really enjoyed this chapter. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~* Author's Response: Whew! Thank you! If you liked this one... *smirk* Wait for the next one. -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.04.12 - 08:29PM | 25: The Soul-Search | Signed |
| OK. I'm not angry at you. But you'd better bring Snape on in all his naked glory soon to rid the poor thing of her virginity or I will be furious at you and supply you more quotes that will gross you out. Did she masterbate too much and that's why she went blind. Author's Response: *moans* That's... wonderful, Trickie. Thank you so much... I'll update! I'll update! -Mel | |||
| Black_lust_z | 2005.04.12 - 03:30AM | 25: The Soul-Search | Signed |
| Oh CRAP!...NOOOO...cliff hanger...arrggggghhh!!!! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~* Author's Response: *sniggers* *innocently* Not that much of a cliffhanger. And, like I'm promising all around here, Mara won't get all angsty and dark on us. -Mel | |||
| Grey_Eminence | 2005.04.12 - 02:35AM | 25: The Soul-Search | Signed |
| What about the magic - she closed the door and locked it with a spell? This can not be happening... What about Snape, where is he? Hopefully already trying to brw something that will help... Damn. You positively can't do this - how on Earth am I supposed to concentrate on anything else? (update, update, update, please, please, please!!!) ;) Author's Response: Well, she won't be blind for long. I promise. Just... go study. That'll help. Let the admins take their time in correcting the flood of admissions... I'm so kind. ;) -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.04.11 - 08:55PM | 25: The Soul-Search | Signed |
| What the Hell? This is totally stupid. It makes absolutely no sense at all. Are you saying that when we finally get to chapter 27 she won't be able to behold Snape in all his naked glory? Why did you have to take a dark, tragic turn? Far too many stories are full of dark and angst, but the real world we live in is darker and has more angst than any fanfic author could dream up. What we need in this world is sunshine, humor, and love. Until now you have provided it. Author's Response: Please don't be angry! If you think it's going to turn dark and angsty, that's wrong! Wrong, wrong, wrong. Mara's not like that, I made sure of it. 1) she's not going to be blind for long 2) she's not COMPLETELY blind. 3) she is too going to behold him in all his naked glory... just not when she expects it. But at a good point. I promise (cross my heart!) that it won't be angsty! -Mel | |||
| Grey_Eminence | 2005.04.09 - 05:37PM | 24: Day Six | Signed |
| "Well... I don't think anybody can possibly bend like that." Well, I guess he'll soon find out, right? RIGHT? I mean, it will be SOON, right? (the repetition is caused by a rather exhausting week of midterm exams, allright?) Right. Remus in China... Hmmm. That wouldn't be right. Or was it left (with the communism and all)? I may be confused, exhausted and on the brink of insanity, but it changes not the fact that I really enjoyed this chapter. Add more soon, please ;) Author's Response: Of course he'll find out soon. I promise. Apparently, we're in the same boat. Finals...*pulls face* Yuck. We're both exhausted, confused, and on the brink of insanity (almost over it, in fact). I'm glad you enjoyed it! More coming up! -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.04.09 - 03:12PM | 24: Day Six | Signed |
| All right, she has to remain a virgin until she completes the potion, then they can consummate their relationship. I sure hope she gets it right on the first try. I loved the line "She'd have to change her underwear now. Damn the man." Now your'e really getting me worked up. More than Shakespear, I remember what Prince Charles told Camilla he wanted to be. Snape would never consider that, I'm sure. A quote in the paper from today's wedding brought that to mind.
Author's Response: Maybe she will... maybe she won't...I'll never tell! Well, until we get to that chapter. I'm glad you liked that line. *grimly* I've thought it once or twice. I haven't read the article about Prince Charles and Camilla yet. Can you believe it? I've been sucked into preparing for finals. Gah. Glad you liked it! Thanks for sticking with me! -Mel | |||
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