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| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.24 - 05:25PM | 11: The Aftereffects | Signed |
| Alright, I'll let you get by with short one, but after this I'm back into nagging mode. Hurry and update so I can find out what happened. Author's Response: Oh dear. Definitely avoiding that. You sound like my mother. *shudder* Updating, updating! | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.24 - 05:16PM | 10: Happy Halloween, Professor | Signed |
| Good Chapter! Snape as Don Juan, it suits 'Sex God' Snape, though he hasn't made an appearance yet. After what happened to Ginny in PoA, it's amazing that any Weasley would name a child Tom. I liked the fact that Snape and Harry were getting along and having a conversation. I also like that the chapters are getting longer. There is one I read where the majority of the chapters are 10,000 or more words long, that's too long for me. I like them long enough to take me a little time to read, but short enough that when it's late I can finish up and go to bed and not be a couple of hours tyring to finish. Author's Response: 'Sex God' Snape isn't going to make an appearance until around chapter 26. I know that's a really, really long way away, but that's when he makes an appearance in the flesh. *coughs* I couldn't find any other name but that one... shows how well my name imagination was working at that point. Finnigan's daughter was my best friend's name! I'll bear that in mind and search for a better one. Now I that I know how long you like your chapters, I shall be able to escape your wrath. Most of the time. There's always the matter of transition chapters... Thank you for everything! -Mel | |||
| Grey_Eminence | 2005.03.24 - 03:00PM | 10: Happy Halloween, Professor | Signed |
| If I was Mara, I would probably end up being paranoid that everytime I spoke of Snape he'd be standing behind me - I love that!!! However Dumbeldore dressed as Ghandi - that can be a very disturbing thought (I laughed dearly at what my imagination produced...). Great exchanges between the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: I spent a whole day thinking about what Dumbledore could be dressed up as. A few of the thoughts that ran through my mind (just to give you a hint as to how that day went) were these: a strawberry, El Zorro, a pen, and Kurt Kobaine. I'm glad you liked the exchanges. I see this chapter as one of the best ones. Thanks! -Mel | |||
| Grey_Eminence | 2005.03.24 - 02:35PM | 9: Hogsmeade | Signed |
| Those two are simply meant for each other... Great chapter - I especially enjoyed the "I'm not going to let him hex you!" bit... Author's Response: I'm glad I've got that bit about meant for each other through. I was beginning to worry about that! Thank you so much! -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.23 - 06:55PM | 9: Hogsmeade | Signed |
| Yes,the chapter length is getting better. Now keep it up and try extending them a little more. Are you always that thrilled when somebody puts one of your stories on their Favorites list? I can't be the only one who has done it, it is a fun story. Author's Response: Yes, I'm always thrilled. I've got the giddy plot bunnies hopping in my brain, ready to tell me what to write! Thank you so much for the compliments and the comments! -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.22 - 05:54PM | 8: Reminded in Silence | Signed |
| I don't know about Hermione, but when I was pregnant my sense of smell was ulta sensitive, the slightest odor would have me heaving my guts up. You could have combined the last 2 chapters and had one of a more desirable length, I want longer chapters. Author's Response: *nods* She's in... month three or four I believe, I haven't kept good count. Yes, I suppose I could have combined them... but I didn't feel like it. Chapter Nine is loads longer! Again, thanks! -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.22 - 05:40PM | 7: Secrets | Signed |
| Yes, I do belive the Mulch siblings have a grude against our pair. Was Sandra a former lover spurned by Snape? And what was the relationship between Mara and Marcus? Very interesting. Author's Response: Or... maybe they're just people informing on things! Or... it could be something else... I'll never tell! -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.22 - 05:25PM | 6: Release the Hellcat | Signed |
| Your Snape can really be an SOB, that was about the meanest comment he's made that I've come across in fanfic. I like your story, it's in my Favorites, but I still want longer chapters. Author's Response: *defensively* I like my Snape, thank you very much. (lol) I'm in a Favorites list! *gasp* I'd better keep this up to par then. I'm working on the longer chapters thing... Thank you! -Mel | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.22 - 05:17PM | 5: Just a Reminder | Signed |
| Sorry I haven't been able to read your updates until now, my birthday was this weekend and things got in the way of me and fanfic. Well the sexual tension is building, now you must work on making the chapters longer. Have you seen Playwitch yet? The photo of Snape on the interview page proves that they all stand in his shadow. Author's Response: Ooh, happy birthday! I made the chapters longer, I made them longer. Except for a few which can't be made longer or else I'll be rambling. Yes, I've seen Playwitch. *snort* Thanks! -Mel | |||
| Black_lust_z | 2005.03.22 - 12:07AM | 8: Reminded in Silence | Signed |
| Haha, go Remus! Well this chapter most certainly leaves much to be asked...so I will simply say, UPDATE QUICK. lol. Thanx again for the update. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~* Author's Response: Definitely does, doesn't it? Hm, why on earth would Severus be thinking about the night he lost his virginity? Ho hum... Thanks for the appreciation! -Mel | |||
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