Reviews for The Witching Hour Challenge Story: A Farce in Several Parts
Alynna |
2005.03.27 - 03:05AM |
5: Chapter Five: Say, did you know you look just like... |
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LOL! Slytherin scheming gone out of control. Great! |
LariLee |
2005.03.26 - 06:47PM |
5: Chapter Five: Say, did you know you look just like... |
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He is not going to want to return to Hogwarts. :-) A wonderful job! ~Lisa |
zafania |
2005.03.26 - 03:02AM |
5: Chapter Five: Say, did you know you look just like... |
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very funny! Either poor Severus' night is going to end in disaster and a very slapped face, or he's going to have a whale of a time. Are we going to get an orgy? eh are we? pleeeeeze? Go on, you know you want to.
Author's Response: Maaaaybeeeee... *grins* |
greenwood |
2005.03.24 - 09:03PM |
4: Chapter Four: Would you like mustard with that? |
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This story is really rather good! I like the theme of "Hogwarts goes Muggle" and the setting is really good too. I like the banter (very life like) and it is interesting to watch how Severus deal with Muggle environments. Good job and look forward to more! |
LariLee |
2005.03.24 - 10:17AM |
4: Chapter Four: Would you like mustard with that? |
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A wonderfully funny and ironic chapter. :-) ~Lisa |
zafania |
2005.03.24 - 07:55AM |
3: Chapter Three: You can check in anytime you like, but you can never leave?! |
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I liked snape and the lightswitch, it reminded me of a story my granda used to tell about how fascinated his dad was when granda got one the 1st houses in our village to have electricity! |
Alynna |
2005.03.24 - 12:23AM |
4: Chapter Four: Would you like mustard with that? |
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Love the way you're making Snape get acquainted with his surroundings without making him out to be a complete fool. Can't wait for more! |
sunshinefanfics |
2005.03.23 - 09:29PM |
4: Chapter Four: Would you like mustard with that? |
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I sat and giggled and snickered my ass off, and I can't wait for more chapters. |
LariLee |
2005.03.22 - 04:21PM |
3: Chapter Three: You can check in anytime you like, but you can never leave?! |
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Snape in a Muggle hotel just makes me laugh and you've done such a good job with it. I just wish we could get a list of who he is using what pseudonym, though you do a good job of telling us who is who. Nicely done! ~Lisa
Author's Response: There's a sort of list in chapter two, but if you'd like, I'll post a character list at the beginning of the next chapter, which should be up fairly soon. Just waiting on my betas... Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! |
KarenDetroit |
2005.03.12 - 07:20PM |
2: Chapter Two - You want me to do WHAT with my thumb? |
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I love it! but 50 miles outside of Salem and you're in New Hampshire. I wouldn't send a Death Eater to New Hampshire! It's not hospitable! Or go to the west, and you are in Lowell, Mass. armpit of the Universe. South and you're in the Boston sprawl, and that's no place to send babes in the woods. But still, an escellent start.
Author's Response: See, my problem is that I'm really thinking in kilometres and that, of course, I don't know the geography. I'm a baaaad author for not doing my hw, I know. So how far out would they have to go to hit a bit 'o' not quite developed countryside? |
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