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| sophierom | 2005.02.26 - 10:15PM | 4: Malady | Signed |
| This is a fascinating story so far! After reading the first chapter, I was both outraged and intrigued. You've done a great job in all four of the chapters of developing Severus's character. His concern about money and his appearance is very well done; it suggests a lot of what's going on in that stupid teenage head of his. I also liked the contrast of Bellatrix (the seductress who he can have but who disgusts him) and Lily (the innocent that he keeps pushing away though he seems to want at least a friendship with? maybe reading too much into this.) Anyway, very nice work so far. Best, Sophie (And sorry for spelling errors - they need to put spell checks on these review boxes for lazy reviewers like me! :-) Author's Response: Thank you very much for your excellent review, Sophie. :) You're quite right - Severus may be an intelligent man, but he's still such a stupid teenager at this point. The Bellatrix/Lily contrast is spot on - I am glad it is coming over well. The next chapter should be up in a day or so. :) PS Are you kidding? We need spell-checkers for frazzled writers like me who can't spell worth a damn without their trusty betas! ;) | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.02.24 - 09:32PM | 4: Malady | Signed |
| Not fair! She didn't even ask who started it! Author's Response: But she DID let Severus off the detention hook - so it balances out. Hey at least Sirius' pretty face got scuffed up? :D | |||
| PlaidPooka | 2005.02.24 - 08:33PM | 4: Malady | Signed |
| Possible possesion? How intriguing! Keep it up, darlin', I love this tale! :) Author's Response: Thank you, Pook my sweet! <3 | |||
| phoenix | 2005.02.24 - 06:58PM | 4: Malady | Signed |
| I can't wait to see where this is going. I look forward to the next installment and am glad the rest of it should be coming sooner rather than later. Author's Response: Oh I am sure you all know WHERE this is going... it is the HOW that has you hooked. Thanks for reading! :) | |||
| June W | 2005.02.24 - 05:58PM | 4: Malady | Signed |
| I'm glad that Minerva noticed his eyes - perhaps she will ask Albus about it and they can both watch Severus. Very nasty of those Marauders to play such infantile tricks at this age. Looking forward to the Malfoy scene! Author's Response: Minerva thinks it is a mild concussion - why would she report to Albus? ;) Boys will be boys... I doubt they ever really grow up. Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| DADA_Mistress | 2005.02.21 - 04:00AM | 2: The Invitation | Signed |
| Ah, snarky Severus Snape! How we love him so. :) Hmm, a package, eh? Hmm, a robe, eh? MONEY?! Why can I get money in the mail? Aww :( I'm off to read chapter 3! Author's Response: Snarky Snape... I can Appreciate that. ;) The reason you don't get money in the mail is because Lucius isn't your buddy! Maaaaybe if you buddied up to him instead of passing the poor dear around, he MIGHT send you money. | |||
| DADA_Mistress | 2005.02.21 - 03:58AM | 3: Cufflinks | Signed |
| Dude, Bellatrix is so crazy! I like Snape in this story though. Definately a sexier side we've not seen before. As always, I love it so, just as I love you, my sassy scientist! *big hugs* Author's Response: Hey! Don't be dissin' mah Bella! I've grown attached to her <3 She's so much fun to write. And what do you mean "a sexier side we've not seen before"?! We're TOTALLY about that sexier side! Aren't we? Thanks for reading and reviewing, my lovely! | |||
| donnalp68 | 2005.02.20 - 07:23PM | 3: Cufflinks | Signed |
| Oh I was so glad to log in today and see a chapter 3! I wonder if Lily will be the 1st to notice Severus' black eyes. I can't wait to see how everything plays out in this story! Keep it up!! Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying my story! Lily won't be the first to notice the change, I'm afraid, but it will be noticed in the next chapter. You'll never guess who notices! ;) If you keep reading and leaving such encouraging reviews, then I'll keep writing! :) Thank you! | |||
| donnalp68 | 2005.02.20 - 07:21PM | 2: The Invitation | Signed |
| Another excellent chapter! I love the way this is developing! Again, well done! Author's Response: Thank you again! :D Keep on reading! | |||
| donnalp68 | 2005.02.20 - 07:18PM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| I very much enjoyed this chapter! I can't wait to read more! Very well done! Author's Response: Thank you! :) | |||
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