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| SiriusLives689 | 2005.02.10 - 11:29AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
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Cool...never seen anything quite like it... Author's Response: Glad I could offer something you find original. :) Thank you for your review! | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.02.10 - 08:41AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| Very good work. I would like to see more work from you, though I think this piece is good enough to stand alone as a single chapter. I can't believe how you could convey so very much with so few paragraphs... I envy you! I'm always looking for ways to convey much with little. Author's Response: I wish I had more work to share, but alas! I literally only started writing two days ago. To think it all started with a 100-word drabble on a LJ community! It was meant as a one-shot, but I can certainly see the potential here. Oddly enough I think of my writing as somewhat... spartan. I hope that I am not leaving too many blanks up for my readers to fill in! Thank you very much for your kind words! :) | |||
| michmak | 2005.02.10 - 08:36AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| I've already told you I love this, but it should be repeated: this is really fantastically written. It's taut and tense the entire way through and the bit at the end with his eyes is utter brilliance - are his eyes black because he's emotionally dead? Has he given his soul to Voldemort? Will his eyes ever go back to dark blue? So many ways you could run with his, should you decide to continue. But even if you don't and it ends as just this one-shot - wow. Powerful. Author's Response: Dearest Mich! So glad you finally got to read it! I don't know where this story is going yet or even if I will be able to see it through once I embark on a multi-chapter fic. Somehow I know you SASSy ladies will see me through. :) | |||
| Jade_Orchid | 2005.02.10 - 07:51AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| Tarah! Where have you been hiding this gift for writing? Beautiful job. The last few lines were, pun intended, killer. You're awesome possum, vixen! Author's Response: Under my bed! Next to the trapdoor to Severus' holding pen! I've finally let him out to play... *waggles eyebrows* And I'm a wha? o_o | |||
| LariLee | 2005.02.10 - 04:26AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| A very good, but very dark start. I really look forward to reading more on this. I'd love to find out why his eyes turned black. Is it because the eyes are the mirror of the soul? ~Lisa Author's Response: *nods* Clever girl! :) That is partly what I had in mind, but I might expand on the idea if I decide to add more chapters. Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| null | 2005.02.10 - 03:08AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| That was so deliciously creepy from beginning to end! I'm facinated that this was your FIRST fic. That was magnificent! Wow! I'm intrigued by the change in eye color. What happened that made his eyes black? Was it some sort of spell? Could the soul of the girl be haunting him? My lady, you must, must, MUST write more and soon! You cannot leave us hanging there. Please update as soon as possible. Well done! ::applause:: Author's Response: Daaww.. stop it... you're making me blush. I'm ecstatic that ANYONE even remotely enjoyed this. :D I am considering expanding this from a one-shot into a multi-chapter fic. Maybe your questions will be answered then? | |||
| June W | 2005.02.10 - 01:32AM | 1: Already Dead | Signed |
| Excellent start! I'm looking forward to the next chapters, to see what happens his next time with Lucius and/or the Death Eaters. Will you take this story up to when he comes back to Albus to become a spy? Author's Response: It was originally only intended as a one shot... but you know what they say about the path to Hell... :D Thank you for taking my review cherry with such a lovely review! XD | |||
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