Reviews for Thank you for the love potion
| KarenDetroit |
2005.10.13 - 09:30PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
A bit kinky, in its own way. Very nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. |
| Lookfar |
2005.10.13 - 07:06PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Anonymous |
What a fun idea! I really like the way you repeat this, "She had a nice bottom. Small and firm. Her hips swayed slightly when she walked" and this, "Her breasts were small and pert, exactly as he liked them." As if to say a love potion might get it started, but after that...
And I loved the tongue in cheek photo and card -- maybe it would be the kind you order with a little greeting printed on the bottom, Happy Holidays or whatever?
I think you mean "Snape's famililar scrawl," not crawl.
The mushy pillow talk didn't ring true for me. I'd find it more credible if he was the familiar crabby, pessimistic and sarcastic Snape I know and love. Otherwise, a really fun story, thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments and pointing out that typo. I admit it's a rather silly one-shot and Snape is not in character. I'm glad that you liked it anyway. |
| joyteach |
2005.09.17 - 06:25PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Anonymous |
Very heartwarming and funny.Cleverly written and an amusing ending.
Author's Response: Thank you, Joyce. I'm glad to know you like it. |
| shadowycat |
2005.08.16 - 10:55PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Anonymous |
| Very cute story. I haven't seen this pairing done before, but I think it's a fun one to explore. I enjoyed reading this. :) |
| Apythia |
2005.07.22 - 02:34PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
| Very cute story! |
| Maus |
2005.07.17 - 06:30PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
| Ahhh! Love it! |
| blue malfoy lover |
2005.06.09 - 03:03PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
| haha very good i liked it |
| jessicadamien |
2005.04.27 - 12:35AM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
| That was so cute!! Very original concept, which is hard to find with all these fanfics. |
| moepi |
2005.04.17 - 02:01PM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
| awww
I like it |
| Joyce |
2005.03.27 - 10:54AM |
1: Thank you for the love potion |
Signed |
| Fantastic ending. I laughed out loud! Although (for the record) I didn't like this pairing I found it very well written |
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