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| SataiDelenn | 2011.10.02 - 01:42AM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| Wow. This has been most intriguing. You write mystery very well. I do hope that your muse will hit you again, and that you will continue this story. I would like to see where it goes. Author's Response: Thank you very much. I seriously doubt, however, that I will ever find this particular muse again. I wish I could, but that ship has long since sailed. | |||
| Obadiah Slope | 2005.04.10 - 01:59PM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| I am finally caught up with this story! Sorry it's taken me so long... Anyway, I am amazed and mindboggled by it. I like the way you're sort of building up a picture of the situation and giving us bits of information all the time. It must have been a hard thing to work the plot out...I always knew there was a reason I went for the more simple story-line! Wonderful so far! 'Miss Jones' is very very interesting...even if she never was! Author's Response: Hey, no problem! I have been out and about, putting fan fiction on the back shelf for months now. I'm so glad that you took the time to read what I have posted thus far. I am very behind on my own reading. I look forward to your future feedback, Obadiah! | |||
| pinkcorsair | 2005.03.02 - 09:16PM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| I know there wasn't a Susan. But is she really Maria or her sister? Just update tomorrow and let us all know. Author's Response: I will update by Sunday, the 6th. | |||
| pinkcorsair | 2005.03.02 - 08:58PM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| If Maria is Susan, than who was the body found at Nott Manor? Was it her sister? That would really suck. Or was the body really Marie and Susan is the sister. That would still mean there a dead sister either way. Once again, that would suck. I hate it when the bad guys kill a good witch, it's always sad. But it would justify her cutting his head off. So who is the dead women? Come on, tell me damn it! Author's Response: Hold your horses there, Pink! If I gave you all the answers, who would read this fic? There never was a Susan Jones. | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.03.02 - 06:13PM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| THANK YOU for finally updating! I miss this story very much, and I was fretting that you had abandoned it. Author's Response: You are welcome, Melpomene! I missed being able to write this story. I will never abandon my stories! Another update will be on its way soon, I promise. I'm glad you like her poems. She has an odd mind. | |||
| aramintasnape | 2005.03.02 - 04:21PM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| So much great stuff in this chapter, I don't even know where to start! Loved the 'Lady Rhyme-Lacking-Reason or Madam Penchant-For-Purposeless-Poems' description! The plot is getting more and more intriguing and Snape was a real bastard in that last part! Hope you have time to update this again soon Author's Response: I do have time to update, and I shall! Snape was a bastard and will continue to be a bastard, but he will have his moments of ...er...bastard light??? Thank you for sticking with me, alison. I always look forward to your reviews! | |||
| Grainne | 2005.03.02 - 02:02PM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| First off, EllieK, I think you should win some kind of award for starting a sentence with, "Out of breath and semen..." On a more highbrow note, I can tell how intricately you have this plot mapped out and that you choose your words with care, all of which I appreciate. Well done! I know you are a busy lady, but I am joining the queue of those who are eagerly awaiting more of Miss Susan Oy-Look-Out-Snape-Thinks-He's-On-To-You-Now Jones. Author's Response: What kind of award would that be, Grainne? LOL! I wanted this story (and chapter) to be a touch dramatic but peppered with unexpected humour. Glad you liked that bit! I have so much more to tell in this story. And yes, I have a very intricate diagram for this story. I hope that all continues to proceed as planned but, if Susan speaks, I will listen. ;) Thank you so much for your reviews! Updates are soon to follow. | |||
| Vocalion | 2005.03.02 - 11:19AM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| "Snape decided that he was finished with Miss Susan-Maria-Santiago-Jones, otherwise known to him as Lady Rhyme-Lacking-Reason or Madam Penchant-For-Purposeless-Poems. The moment she stepped out of his office, he had scourgified his hands of her. " -- Very funny passage! What a bastard he was with that prositute! Bad boy.
Author's Response: Bad boy, indeed! The best lines are the ones that just pop out of one's head, you know? Thank you for your encouragement throughout the entire process. I hope that Severus does more research before he confronts Miss Jones. Of course, she won't be in the dungeons when he returms ;0 | |||
| LariLee | 2005.03.02 - 10:53AM | 6: Chapter Five: Choices | Signed |
| This is such a wonderful chapter. Snape is such a bastard (of course, he was paying for it, so he can be a bastard). Now where the hell is Susan Jones going? You really aren't going to take another month for an update, are you? I really love to the "how is she" with the answer being "average". I just enjoyed this! And I took the "seeds" and planted them. We'll see what grows. :-) ~Lisa Author's Response: I am so glad that you recommended removing that sentence, Lisa. I keep laughing about it. I keep forgetting to add it to my LJ list, though. Susan Jones is coming over to your house for cake and chili, of course! No, I am NOT going to take another month to update, but thank you for the public flogging ;) Yeah, you understood that "average" line and connected it. You are such a good little Ravenclaw! Perhaps the "seeds" will morph into a lemon next time *winks*. THANK YOU!!! | |||
| sophierom | 2005.02.22 - 09:51AM | 5: Chapter Four: A Name | Signed |
| Oh no, I've reached the last posted chapter. Definitely looking forward to more. You've done a brilliant job creating a character that I feel I both know and don't know at the same time. Best, Sophie Author's Response: You have made my day by leaving so many wonderful reviews. Thank you so much! I hope to post an update soon, but I have been saying that for ages now. I do hope you will continue enjoy the story. Happy reading! #EllieK | |||
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