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Reviews for Ocean of Silence

morgaine_dulac 2008.04.18 - 02:56PM 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence Signed
The German version is beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing.

morgaine_dulac 2008.04.17 - 04:08PM 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence Signed
I'd love to read your original German version. Do you still have it?

Author's Response: I do.... Ein Ozean aus Schweigen Einsam liegen sie da und unentdeckt Wie Inseln, Gefühle schon lange vergessen In einem Meer aus Schweigen, das sich erstreckt Hinter den schwarzen Augen, die mich besessen. Manchmal, nur manchmal ließt du mich schauen, ließt mich die Kontinente erahnen. Warum nur, willst du mir nicht vertrauen? Lässt mich den Weg zu ihnen bahnen. Hinter dem Ozean aus Schweigen Liegen sie immer noch unentdeckt. Niemandem wirst du den Weg dorthin zeigen. Wie gerne nur hätt ich dein Herz erweckt. Ich kam ihm zu nah, dem rettenden Land Da stießt du mich fort und hast mich verbannt.

sophierom 2005.02.19 - 10:09PM 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence Signed
Normally, I'm not a fan of poetry, but I really liked this. You capture Snape's dysfunctional emotional state quite well.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, that is a very nice compliment. :-)

EllieK 2005.01.01 - 10:10PM 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence Signed
Very nice and an enjoyable read. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Will try to post something longer some time but am currently working on fics for other archives (Pureblood and Chaos).

LariLee 2004.12.30 - 05:42PM 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence Signed
Wonderful images!

Author's Response: Thanks. Originally, the poem was written in German and there it was a sonnet. In hindsight, I actually like the English version better.

Vocalion 2004.12.30 - 04:04PM 1: Poem: Ocean of Silence Signed
Evocative and moody. Nicely done. Occlumency needs more poetry to get up to speed with Ashwinder.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. And I'll try my best to write more.

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