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Blackhound 2011.02.08 - 07:25PM 1: One and only Signed
Marvellous, I loved it. Great read.

Jong_Kahn 2010.10.13 - 06:16AM 1: One and only Signed
Severus' erection-that-will-not-die could be the Everlasting Gobstopper of Willy Wonka, could it not? Yes, of course your story is hot; but anytime it becomes too unrealistic (as in real life would be too painful, or medically unadvised), I find I can't suspend my disbelief and enjoy it anymore. The story "The P Word" by Paisley Snail on Ashwinder is about priapism, or the medical condition of erections not going away. Another reviewer wrote: "there's a reason they say seek medical help if it doesn't go away after 4 hours - the tissue isn't getting new blood and will actually necrotize and stop working altogether - forever - after a prolonged amount of time due to lack of oxygen..."Armed with that knowledge, all I can feel about a never-ending erection is "OMG! If that thing isn't relieved soon, that man's going to lose it permanently!" And I couldn't stand for that to happen to Severus! I'm still giving you a "10" for sheer heat, though!

morgaine_dulac 2008.08.12 - 03:56AM 1: One and only Signed
Yes, how many more women has he taken in that manner? And how many more would want to be taken? Sigh ...

tangerine dream 2008.05.19 - 05:41PM 1: One and only Signed
So hot and fabulous!!! Very well written! Can't wait to read more of your work.

Author's Response: If you're interested in anything else I've written, go to adultfanfiction.net - I've got a few things there still that I hope will entertain you.

janis 2006.08.27 - 09:34PM 1: One and only Signed
Severus was very much in character here! And the descriptions of the sex are hot! Thanks for sharing this.

ennariam2010 2005.08.30 - 08:56PM 1: One and only Signed
good story...think you might do something more in depth onit?

the_moviestar 2005.08.13 - 01:18AM 1: One and only Signed
omg...this is REALLY good keep writing, your really talented!

EndlesslyLost 2005.06.14 - 12:47AM 1: One and only Signed
WOW, so hot. I just love your writing. The ending was especially effective! Please write more soon!!

franny 2005.04.25 - 05:46AM 1: One and only Signed
FRICKEN A! That was really good. be proud of yourself. and i love how you kept him in character. He wasn't kind and mushy, he was superior and forceful. i loved it. i'd rate it eleven if i could

argesh 2005.04.18 - 09:40AM 1: One and only Signed

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