Reviews for Sex
| Blackhound |
2011.02.08 - 07:25PM |
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| Marvellous, I loved it. Great read. |
| Jong_Kahn |
2010.10.13 - 06:16AM |
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| Severus' erection-that-will-not-die could be the Everlasting Gobstopper of Willy Wonka, could it not? Yes, of course your story is hot; but anytime it becomes too unrealistic (as in real life would be too painful, or medically unadvised), I find I can't suspend my disbelief and enjoy it anymore. The story "The P Word" by Paisley Snail on Ashwinder is about priapism, or the medical condition of erections not going away. Another reviewer wrote: "there's a reason they say seek medical help if it doesn't go away after 4 hours - the tissue isn't getting new blood and will actually necrotize and stop working altogether - forever - after a prolonged amount of time due to lack of oxygen..."Armed with that knowledge, all I can feel about a never-ending erection is "OMG! If that thing isn't relieved soon, that man's going to lose it permanently!" And I couldn't stand for that to happen to Severus! I'm still giving you a "10" for sheer heat, though!
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| morgaine_dulac |
2008.08.12 - 03:56AM |
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| Yes, how many more women has he taken in that manner? And how many more would want to be taken? Sigh ... |
| tangerine dream |
2008.05.19 - 05:41PM |
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So hot and fabulous!!! Very well written! Can't wait to read more of your work.
Author's Response: If you're interested in anything else I've written, go to adultfanfiction.net - I've got a few things there still that I hope will entertain you. |
| janis |
2006.08.27 - 09:34PM |
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| Severus was very much in character here! And the descriptions of the sex are hot! Thanks for sharing this. |
| ennariam2010 |
2005.08.30 - 08:56PM |
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| good story...think you might do something more in depth onit? |
| the_moviestar |
2005.08.13 - 01:18AM |
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| omg...this is REALLY good
keep writing, your really talented! |
| EndlesslyLost |
2005.06.14 - 12:47AM |
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| WOW, so hot. I just love your writing. The ending was especially effective! Please write more soon!! |
| franny |
2005.04.25 - 05:46AM |
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| FRICKEN A! That was really good. be proud of yourself. and i love how you kept him in character. He wasn't kind and mushy, he was superior and forceful. i loved it. i'd rate it eleven if i could |
| argesh |
2005.04.18 - 09:40AM |
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| Goddy;) |
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