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| Wiccan | 2006.06.18 - 01:12AM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| Alright, alright...I give up! I have just joined this site and like to play voyeur and read long completed stories. Your Disclaimers are more entertaining than some fics I have read and give me insight into your wicked sense of hunor. Therefore, because you seem more 'human' than some authors, I felt the need to review. Once (I don't remember which chapter), you said 'he had went'...either 'he went'..,or 'he had gone' is correct. Never 'he had went'! That is the ONLY thing I have seen in this fic that gave me a small 'stutter'... When I placed this on my browser favorites...I simply labeled it 'good'. It is a lovely story and I have throughly enjoyed it so far and look forward to the rest. I think yoiu have Snape's desire for love, his guilt and his paranoia down pat and am enjoying his machinations so very much. Wonderful story...you have entranced me. | |||
| Subversa | 2005.10.12 - 04:34AM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| I love the history of Tricia and Brad, and want to know more. I think it's interesting that Tricia can FEEL Severus being un-authentic, even as he's trying to woo her by being "nice". And I'll imagine the kittens claws are right little razors, actually! Author's Response: Thank you so much, Subversa! You'll find out even more about Tricia and Brad, much more. Severus can't pull as much over on Tricia as he thinks he can, but I think she lets him believe it. :-) ~Lisa | |||
| SeaIsleWitch | 2005.05.17 - 10:08PM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| Welcome to Occlumency...Slip into the shower of Severus Snape... Um...what am I doing? (Slaps forehead YIKES!) That, um, shower scene...nice levitation trick there.... Author's Response: Thank you, SeaIsleWitch! I am so happy you're still enjoying this! ~Lisa | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2005.03.18 - 02:20AM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| I loved the shower scene. The Slytherine shower room with AR or Snape, that's my fantasy. Author's Response: Thank you again, Trickie Woo! I know a lot of women would like to see the inside of the Slytherin shower room with Snape. :-) ~Lisa | |||
| phoenix | 2005.03.17 - 06:53PM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| The shower scene was wonderful. Absolutely loved it. Very steamy, in more way than one. ;)...Nice tidbits on the background. I especially like the way it's causing Severus to question his motives. Very deep....As for the cliffie, that was a very mean one, but I like it. Guarantees I'm going to read the next chapter. :D Author's Response: Thank you so much, Phoenix! I toss a mean little cliffie in every so often. :-) I'm so glad you're still with me! ~Lisa | |||
| Sniv | 2005.02.24 - 04:50PM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| Beautiful! Wonderful chapter!!!!! lol Author's Response: Thank you, Sniv! I had a lot of fun with this chapter! ~Lisa | |||
| Grainne | 2005.01.27 - 04:30PM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| Just me--clapping--& letting you know I appreciate the Quidditch match, shower scene, and the whole back & forth at the end there. I am glad that Snape has not forgotten his title! [I see his conference badge *HELLO, MY NAME IS: Right Bastard*] Author's Response: As long as you're still enjoying it, Grainne, I am happy! He won't forget hs title any time soon. ;-D ~Lisa | |||
| pinkcorsair | 2005.01.25 - 01:01AM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| You had a perfect oppertunity for a threesome in this chapter and you let it get away. Rolanda could have came in while they were in the shower. She could have joined them or just watched...................I'm still wondering how "The Brad" knocked up a seventeen year old Tricia? Was the perv out shouting local high schools or did he grab her at a Qudditch match like a groupy at a rock concert.................What did Remus do to get arrested. Pee on a firehydrent or chase some cars? He didn't take a dump on the sidewalk and not use a pooper scooper afterwards. Or are the Ripleys starting to put pressure on Tricia through her friends?....................The sex scenes are still ok, but you need to kick it up a notch. You're still in rated R territory and have yet to hit NC-17. Maybe she can start calling him Daddy and he can tell her what a naughty little girls she's been. Author's Response: Do you think a flying instructor could have broken Severus' wards? And as Tricia isn't gay and Rolanda isn't straight, it'd just be a waste of time for all involved. You're the first person to pick up on how "The Brad" (and don't you just want to hammer him?) knocked her up. The clues are there, though, but will be explained later. Do you think Elspeth Ripley would fight so dirty? Yeah, so do I. I'll work on my sex scenes. Perhaps some more research... Forget the "daddy" scenario or the detention fantasies. Just not me, I'm afraid. ~Lisa | |||
| sophierom | 2005.01.21 - 11:14AM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| I loved the parallel between Severus and Patricia's 18-year-old choices. Best, Sophie Author's Response: Thanks, Sophie! 18 is a dangerous age. ~Lisa | |||
| Melpomene Erato | 2005.01.18 - 01:08PM | 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) | Signed |
| Not my poor, dear Remus!! Author's Response: I know. It's not fair! He's so sweet! Thanks, Melpomene! ~Lisa | |||
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