Reviews for The Great Snape-Deveroux Grudge Match - Part I: The Parvenu vs. The Potions Master
medea callous |
2005.09.30 - 08:01AM |
13: 10b. The Past Casts Shadows |
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Well up to the last couple of chapters I've really enjoyed this; I feel it's the best fic detailing the plans of Voldemort and the interactions between DEs, and there are many things to praise about it; but I'm tired of all the vampire stuff. Is this a HP fic or a vampire fic? I think you're a very good writer, but if the stuff with the vampires ends up continuing to be a major plot thread, I won't be continuing. |
LariLee |
2004.12.15 - 12:42AM |
13: 10b. The Past Casts Shadows |
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Dog it all! (expletive in honor of Sirius who I like in this story which even JKR couldn't make me do). I wanted this to continue. "mort-de-kai" I'm starting to get an idea of what that might be. ;-D
"So that's why I haven't put you out of my misery yet." This is one of those lines that is so good, I wish I had wrote it.
I adore the Sirius-Severus exchanges... and the ending was superb. Um, if I beg prettily, will the next update be quick? You walk the drama-comedy line so well. I am amazed and awed. Though I won't be able to write the rest of rest of the night because... ::sniffing:: I can't write like this! ~Lisa
Author's Response: Awww ... now don't say that! I've read some of your stuff, and I like it! Keep in mind, I have the benefit of a co-author with this. Also, a lot of Part 1 was written two or more years ago, so I've had time to go back over and tweak (and re-tweak).
As for update, well, I hadn't planned on doing another one until at least next week, but what can I say -- I'm a sucker for begging :) So I will do my best to get the next bit soon. |
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