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| eruesler | 2005.01.10 - 11:06PM | 15: Base Instincts | Signed |
| love it...fun, sexy
keep writing Author's Response: Thank you once for reading, and twice for the review! | |||
| Vocalion | 2005.01.10 - 03:02PM | 15: Base Instincts | Signed |
| A very fine chapter, with a splendid opening paragraph. "At some point, though, he crept into her subconscious, commingling with the culinary dreams in shocking and delightful ways." Apparently, I am not the only one who has such dreams! "Instead, he stood and surveyed the room with his intense black eyes, committing every detail to memory." Imagine Snape being the one to do that instead of Athene!
Author's Response: Thank you...and sweet dreams! | |||
| Sniv | 2005.01.10 - 02:59PM | 15: Base Instincts | Signed |
| Ah that chapter made me feel good lol...Great chapter and there is still some uncertainty - which I find natural since their past is kinda ...well. Great chapter! Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, it's all about uncertainty with them; I am glad you feel this works. | |||
| LariLee | 2005.01.10 - 01:22PM | 15: Base Instincts | Signed |
| I'm just enjoying this so much! Barmy side of the bed, indeed! ~Lisa Author's Response: Cheers! Can you tell that that is where I wake up frequently? | |||
| sophierom | 2005.01.08 - 02:20PM | 2: Remembrances | Signed |
| Oh but I really like the backstory! Author's Response: And thank you again for pressing on! As you and others have pointed out, I should quit apologizing for the backstory. Henceforth, I am NOT SORRY for it and there will be a quiz on it at the end...just kidding. Cheers! | |||
| sophierom | 2005.01.08 - 02:11PM | 1: Arrivals and Breakfast | Signed |
| Intriguing beginning! Definitely like Athene. Off to read more! Author's Response: Thank you! | |||
| Obadiah Slope | 2005.01.07 - 04:35PM | 14: Intimate Acts | Signed |
| I loved seeing, or rather reading, Severus' insecurities. I believe in canon that he does have them, and it's nice that you embrace them - did that sound pretentious?? Lol. Anyway, it was romantic, and their intimate act wasn't perfect, which was refreshing. Can't wait for an update! Author's Response: Not prententious. Very nice indeed. Thank you for all of your reviews! | |||
| Obadiah Slope | 2005.01.07 - 04:26PM | 12: What Is Required? | Signed |
| "I merely wanted somewhere to take a nap, in case things got too tedious." How can he even SAY that an expect anyone to believe him?? Lol. The man is a myriad of complexities! Nice chapter, I really enjoyed it. Author's Response: Yah, that was a pretty pathetic last-ditch attempt to keep control of the situation...but he had to try, poor man. Ooh, and I love "myriad of complexities" (can one review a review?) Thanks for this one! | |||
| EllieK | 2005.01.07 - 11:17AM | 12: What Is Required? | Signed |
| Well, you didn't scare me away! LOL! I could not help but giggle when I realised what they "required". Have mercy, someone needs to bed that man! I can damn near feel the sexual tension between them. I enjoyed the build up, the thighs touching, the doubts...nicely done. Author's Response: Hurrah! And many thanks. | |||
| EllieK | 2005.01.06 - 04:47PM | 3: Burning Up | Signed |
| This was such a fun chapter! I know that isn't very constructive, but it is nevertheless true. I particularly enjoyed the exchange at the end. Author's Response: Thank you...I didn't mean to scare anyone away with my little sermon in response to your last review...we can't be deep ALL the time, or life would be tedious indeed! And feedback of any kind IS appreciated! | |||
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