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Reviews for Squidbait Returns

testingt 2008.04.23 - 07:12PM 5: Night Terrors Signed
I usually don't like Snape/OFC's (jealous or possessive, me?), but this is great. It may be AU, but it's very much in character. I can see Snape reacting exactly that way--both at 16, and now.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback! Believe you me, if I had known what I know now, I never would have dared write an OFC fic...but it was fun at the time. ;-)

celestialrain 2008.03.20 - 02:50AM 33: The Return of Squidbait Signed
Absolutely loved this story! You write very well. I was skeptical at the beginning, but I'm so glad I stuck with it. When I read the chapter where Snape first called her 'Squidbait' in Dumbledore's office and she responded with 'snivelling' I actually laughed until tears were running down my face. Some of your lines were downright classic! Keep writing! It was all so much fun to read.

Author's Response: I am very happy to hear that you enjoyed this. The beginning does seem very cliche (and verging on Mary-Suish) to me now, but I'm glad that I had the experience of writing the story, and it is nice to know that people actual read it. Thank you.

MimiManderly 2007.10.26 - 10:13PM 23: Snape Is Typecast Signed
I was laughing my ass off! Particularly at Snape's alliteration and general over-the-top huffiness. Superb story!

Ehmaz 2007.10.20 - 06:18AM 33: The Return of Squidbait Signed
Really entertaining and interesting story! The plot/s were well thought out and the writing was focused and clear throughout. I only recently started reading Harry Potter fanfics and have been wary of Original Character ones, but you have proved all my fears wrong here. Again, great story! I love your fics over at Ashwinder as well. :)

Nadrek 2007.08.27 - 10:36PM 33: The Return of Squidbait Signed
Well done.

Deeble 2007.05.19 - 06:12PM 33: The Return of Squidbait Signed
This was so much fun. I really liked Athene -- down-to-earth, ever-pants-wearing Athene -- and even more so the way you had both her and Snape develop as people as they worked through their differences and their attraction for each other.

eroburn1 2006.09.30 - 06:33AM 33: The Return of Squidbait Signed
awesome 10/10

LookFar 2006.09.05 - 02:49PM 33: The Return of Squidbait Signed
Oh, gosh, I've devoured this wonderful story and now it's over. Boo hoo. Thank you for a most enjoyable ride. Your heroine is completely believeable, flawed and real, your Snape is believeable, too, and your writing is smooth and clever. I laughed out loud many times. The way you've developed the canon and non-canon cast is wonderful; they, and the castle, have been present at all times. Most of all, it seems you had fun, and that certainly made it fun for me! Thanks.

LookFar 2006.09.04 - 11:03PM 31: The Yule Debacle Signed
Still enjoying this eeemensely. I do think that Athene needs to learn some control; she seems awfully techy. Your Yule Ball is wonderful and Martha Furry and her Minions are inspired. Did I perceive a little tip of the hat to the HG/SS shippers?

LookFar 2006.09.04 - 12:49AM 29: Dungeon Bound Signed
Absolutely lovely and adorable. Yes, this was a fluffy chapter, but they got their licks in. The Room of Accord is a genius idea, and I could believe that, having had thier fight, they could go happily to their f*ck.

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