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Reviews for The Tenth Rule

Rilka 2005.05.02 - 11:36PM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Cruel Snape? Very enjoyable. This is the only story on Occlumency that I actually read, and I felt that it was high time I left a review. Please keep up with the excellent work. I do hope Bethany chooses to skip out on detention and lets Snape play with Alice. I'm curious as to how far he plans to take her next. Until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for writing, and glad you are enjoying the story so far. Much to come yet, but not giving away any ideas as to what ;-)

sambomad 2005.04.28 - 09:02AM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
er well i think the stories good maybe a bit long winded but well i suppose you,ve seen this http://www.godawful.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=14739 if not sorry

Author's Response: Ha,ha...thanks for the laugh!

Domino 2005.04.26 - 05:54AM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Oh . . . oh . . . I must leave some kind of comment, for your delicious work. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU, for this cruel potions master you have so expertly crafted. You had me crying in sympathy, in ecstasy . . . I WANT PROFESSOR SNAPE! I'm eternally glad to have found this again. Take care, and thank you once more.

Author's Response: We want Professor Snape too! Thanks for telling us you are enjoying the story so far. We hope you'll continue to do so! Lots more to come

DMitchell1985 2005.04.24 - 02:04AM 24: Chapter 24: First lesson Signed
Oh! He is terrible! Just when you make him absolutely unbearable, he turns a bit of a corner that makes me want to read further.

Author's Response: He hasn't even begun yet! Thanks for writing

Oktober Black 2005.04.20 - 09:32PM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Very erotic! And disturbing... The chapter with the charmed fake clitoris was a bit overwhelming. What a nastily clever idea. Well written too, which is nice to see. Thanks for writing!

Gina Potter 2005.04.19 - 10:36AM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Wow! It was worth the waiting, but now I want more! And more Bethany please; she is so much more interesting than Alice and it's fun to read about the complex feelings Snape has towards her. Great!

Teacherspet 2005.04.17 - 08:16PM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Wow, a two chapter posting and so worth the wait. The detail is just incredible. Snape doesn't miss a trick. He is a consummate hedonist. Really, this is the best erotica I have ever read and I'm an avid reader ;) Thanks to you both for such excellent work.

June W 2005.04.17 - 05:40PM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Omigosh, he is such an expert at manipulation! erotic pain was an art and took years to perfect - he is a master at it. He couldn't give her something for her muscle pain? Despite the pleasure she had given him, he continued to loathe her - yow! What does she have to do to get him to like her? So, will you give us more Bethany next, or will Alice finally get something? Will the girls ever need contraceptives? I wonder if he'll end up keeping one of the girls after the year ends...

pockle47 2005.04.11 - 12:49PM 23: Chapter 23: Inexperienced Signed
You haven't abandoned this, have you? I can't bear the suspense! Talk about delayed gratification! I'm really enjoying your story and look forward to seeing how it develops. When do you think you might update?

Author's Response: thanks for writing. No its definately NOT abandonded...just RL getting in the way right now. Two chapters will be in their way...soonish. stay with us.

tisasil 2005.03.22 - 08:43AM 23: Chapter 23: Inexperienced Signed
Again, another incredible chapter. You are a very gifted writer.

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