Reviews for The Tenth Rule
Rilka |
2005.05.02 - 11:36PM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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Cruel Snape? Very enjoyable. This is the only story on Occlumency that I actually read, and I felt that it was high time I left a review. Please keep up with the excellent work. I do hope Bethany chooses to skip out on detention and lets Snape play with Alice. I'm curious as to how far he plans to take her next. Until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for writing, and glad you are enjoying the story so far. Much to come yet, but not giving away any ideas as to what ;-) |
sambomad |
2005.04.28 - 09:02AM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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er well i think the stories good maybe a bit long winded but well i suppose you,ve seen this http://www.godawful.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=14739 if not sorry
Author's Response: Ha,ha...thanks for the laugh! |
Domino |
2005.04.26 - 05:54AM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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Oh . . . oh . . . I must leave some kind of comment, for your delicious work. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU, for this cruel potions master you have so expertly crafted. You had me crying in sympathy, in ecstasy . . . I WANT PROFESSOR SNAPE! I'm eternally glad to have found this again. Take care, and thank you once more.
Author's Response: We want Professor Snape too! Thanks for telling us you are enjoying the story so far. We hope you'll continue to do so! Lots more to come |
DMitchell1985 |
2005.04.24 - 02:04AM |
24: Chapter 24: First lesson |
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Oh! He is terrible! Just when you make him absolutely unbearable, he turns a bit of a corner that makes me want to read further.
Author's Response: He hasn't even begun yet! Thanks for writing |
Oktober Black |
2005.04.20 - 09:32PM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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Very erotic!
And disturbing...
The chapter with the charmed fake clitoris was a bit overwhelming. What a nastily clever idea.
Well written too, which is nice to see.
Thanks for writing! |
Gina Potter |
2005.04.19 - 10:36AM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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Wow! It was worth the waiting, but now I want more! And more Bethany please; she is so much more interesting than Alice and it's fun to read about the complex feelings Snape has towards her.
Great! |
Teacherspet |
2005.04.17 - 08:16PM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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Wow, a two chapter posting and so worth the wait. The detail is just incredible. Snape doesn't miss a trick. He is a consummate hedonist. Really, this is the best erotica I have ever read and I'm an avid reader ;) Thanks to you both for such excellent work. |
June W |
2005.04.17 - 05:40PM |
25: Chapter 25:Subjugated |
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Omigosh, he is such an expert at manipulation! erotic pain was an art and took years to perfect - he is a master at it. He couldn't give her something for her muscle pain? Despite the pleasure she had given him, he continued to loathe her - yow! What does she have to do to get him to like her? So, will you give us more Bethany next, or will Alice finally get something? Will the girls ever need contraceptives? I wonder if he'll end up keeping one of the girls after the year ends... |
pockle47 |
2005.04.11 - 12:49PM |
23: Chapter 23: Inexperienced |
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You haven't abandoned this, have you? I can't bear the suspense! Talk about delayed gratification! I'm really enjoying your story and look forward to seeing how it develops. When do you think you might update?
Author's Response: thanks for writing. No its definately NOT abandonded...just RL getting in the way right now. Two chapters will be in their way...soonish. stay with us. |
tisasil |
2005.03.22 - 08:43AM |
23: Chapter 23: Inexperienced |
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Again, another incredible chapter. You are a very gifted writer. |
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