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Reviews for The Tenth Rule

Marianne 2005.11.21 - 07:10AM 8: Chapter Eight: Article 77b. Signed
So far, I have liked your description of Snape, but now...Though we all know that Snape is anything but a nice person, I don't like the character you are describing here. It's kind of sick.

Author's Response: I guess here comes the saying, " you can't please all the people all the time." Sorry to disappoint you.

alicebs 2005.11.21 - 02:34AM 28: End of Term Signed
I missed Snape's point of view, but it fits the overall atmosphere of this chapter: bleak, the sense of loss shared by Alice and Bethany. After the intensity of the previous chapters, it feels like a vacuum. Is this the new tactic? To make them feel accutely their need for him, so that they will completely surrender to his will? I keep wishing they might at least find their friendship again, but at the end of the chapter, it looks hopeless indeed.

Author's Response: There is much to come, as you will see.

June W 2005.11.20 - 06:08PM 28: End of Term Signed
Hmm, I wonder if the girls will find an excuse to contact Severus during the hols.... Thanks for the new chapter!

Earla 2005.11.08 - 11:35AM 27: Changing Tactics Signed
aaw...no update*pouts* I'll just have to wait then =P

rab 2005.11.07 - 06:49PM 27: Changing Tactics Signed
Just wanted to tell you that having just found this fic, I read all 27 chapters over the course of about 4 days last week. HOLY COW!! OMG! I LOVE YOU! This was the absolute hottest, most perfectly written Snape I've read yet. More please!!

rayvyn2k 2005.11.01 - 10:51PM 27: Changing Tactics Signed
Another fabulous entry. I really like how you've looked inside Snape's mind and motivations. I'm curious to see what the "Unbreakable Secret" will be. Thank you for the update.

alicebs 2005.10.31 - 09:11AM 27: Changing Tactics Signed
Well, now that you addressed my concern on the growing animosity between Alice and Bethany, I see that I am being masterly led where you want me to go, since these chapters have already been written some time ago. I look forward to seeing how Snape is going to handle that with "caution and delicacy". Please allow me to congratulate you on how elegantly and seamlessly you made your story HPB-compliant - without lengthy explanations, in a few lines, and without altering a single detail in your own story! It is uncanny how you took the events in HPB and made them serve your story even better than before. As for the interval between updates, I find once a week perfect. Especially since it is on Mondays, and gives me a reason to look forward to Mondays.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you are enjoying the way the tale is unfolding. I'm sorry you are not going to get your Monday update! There is a *technical* problem at the moment. Chapter is ready to roll, but....hopefully the problem will be resolved a.s.a.p!

Maria 2005.10.30 - 11:17PM 25: Chapter 25:Subjugated Signed
Your descriptions are unbelievable - glad you're back!

June W 2005.10.30 - 04:55PM 27: Changing Tactics Signed
Hmm, now what new tactic does Snape have in mind.... is he deliberately luring them into each coming to him alone, using their jealousy of each other? Will he accept both of them, even the convenient but of little challenge Bethany, or just the more deliciously thrilling Alice? More, more!

Knockturn 2005.10.30 - 01:44PM 27: Changing Tactics Signed
Finally, they're both together. I was surprised to see Snape's distaste at their rivalry. I would have thought their jealousy would have been a satisfying testimony to his growing power over them. Or that he would have liked seeing them squirm even further because of what he was doing with them. That's another thing I like about this fic--its unpredictability. And thank you for updating so quickly--careful, or you'll spoil us! :)

Author's Response: Just as we thought we were doing so well and updating regularly we hit a slight problem. Hopefully its going to be sorted out a.s.a.p. Chapter is ready, just one or two problems with it from getting from me, to the beta, back to me, and then to Occlumency!

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