Reviews for The Tenth Rule
momo |
2006.04.23 - 10:52PM |
20: Chapter 20: Sharp Awakening |
Anonymous |
OMG! I'm completely out of my mind by now!
-In a similar state as Bethany, I have to confess.
Btw, I love your detailed little descriptions that make it all feel so real, like her head turning to the side and noticing her essay, and especially when ever you mention Snape's clothes, like how she looked up and sees nothing but black and buttons, and when she feels his sleeves on her thigh. It feels so real!! His outfit is a real turn on after all.
God, I’m loving this guy!!!
I hope he doesn't ever make it easy for the girls. I hope they get everything they want, just not quite HOW they wanted it! lol |
momo |
2006.04.22 - 08:19PM |
17: Chapter Seventeen: Dressing Down |
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Oh damn you! it is already early morning and about three chapters ago I decided the next one would be the last for me to read this night. And now this!
That Bethany is she out of her mind?! -I can understand how desperate she is but this is insane! I hope Snape lets her suffer for that!
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Momo |
2006.04.20 - 08:08PM |
8: Chapter Eight: Article 77b. |
Anonymous |
I was so exited when I finally found this story after hearing about it elsewhere, cause it sounded so promising. Even though I am into bdsm and all this stuff for a while
I just lately discovered Professor Snape and his world. Can you believe I did not stumble over his attraction earlier?!
Anyway I loved reading the story so far, I was dyeing from the suspense! I love stories that build up the main events! I'm telling you I am not living in my normal every day world since I started reading. I do what I have to do during the day, while feeling haunted by Snape and this story and can’t wait for darkness to fall so I can snuggle up and read on.
And this chapter has blown me away!!! I have been reading lots of spanking fiction written by people in the community and I have to say I never came across anything as exiting and fantastic as this scene!!
Even though he is such a pure dominant you don’t fail to portray his character believable and with lots of depth, that makes him likeable. It’s tricky to balance that with the sexy, dominant and overpowering side of him, but so far you are totally pulling it off, showing his “humanity” but still leaving him in complete control.
You seem to know exactly what buttons to press and what strings to pull and by that you make Snape the hottest guy around! His lines in this chapter particularly are just mind blowing and hot!! And I understand every thought Alice is having about what is happening to her, am thinking I’d feel the exact same, though I also identify with Bethany.
And thank you for not falling into routines and clichés!!
You are truly original with the theme of bdsm, giving so much attention to the individuality of the characters and what is more you are amazingly brave! I have read bdsm stories that bothered more with making everything look sort of fair and nice enough so that people would not find it appalling rather than creating truly thrilling and morally challenging scenes. And I wondered if it was only me who enjoyed some darkness, badness and twistity. I am sure this story will turn some people off. But remember that there are people like me who have been looking for a story like this for years!!!
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rab |
2006.03.22 - 06:52PM |
28: End of Term |
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Love this story. Need more. Pleeeeeaaase. Any update soon? |
alicebs |
2006.02.09 - 02:20AM |
28: End of Term |
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In this long interval between updates, I find myself thinking about the story and wondering where it is going. Somehow I find it difficult to imagine a "happy" end. If Snape had decided to take only Alice, I suppose he could get away with it, since she seems to be a masochist by nature, and she would never denounce him. But Bethany? With her temperament, sooner or later she is going to explode, either because of jealousy or because she will revolt against his treatment of her. Or will she learn to really enjoy it and to share with Alice? |
MissWilson |
2006.01.31 - 10:26PM |
28: End of Term |
Anonymous |
So...when can we expect an update pelagian?
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Celina Snape |
2006.01.29 - 05:55PM |
28: End of Term |
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What?!!! Nononononono! It's not over yet!!! |
vonHardenberg |
2006.01.24 - 03:31AM |
28: End of Term |
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Excellently written, sad to see it end. However, it will be a challenge to go on without being repetitive. |
Teacherspet |
2006.01.22 - 01:48AM |
28: End of Term |
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Excellent chapter exploring the girls' feelings for each other now that Snape has managed to divide and conquer. It is so sad that girls often forsake their friendship to focus on a male that only wants to use them. Eagerly awaiting more chapters! |
Melpomene Erato |
2005.11.21 - 11:59AM |
28: End of Term |
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A steamy three-some would probably remove a lot of this tension ;)
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