Reviews for Lily's Worst Mistake
anna |
2005.01.01 - 03:46PM |
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Hm
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It was just written for fun. |
Razzberry |
2004.12.21 - 11:05PM |
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Absolutely hysterical! Of course, Peter squirming like a worm is a mental image that isn't doing much towards getting my own characters into anything quite so erotic, but it's hilarious. ;)
Jen
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write and even more fun to share. |
Snegurochka |
2004.12.13 - 06:03AM |
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OMG *dies* Lupin was huge? Oh, *hell yeah*!! This is awesome, darlin'. Absolutely priceless! I'm quite sure *this* is what JKR means when she says we'll be finding out more about our darling hero's mother... ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am not feeling particularly witty today, but I promise to post you a response poem soon! |
wood_n_snape |
2004.12.04 - 10:27AM |
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SLYTHERIN MASTER, SLYTHERIN MASTER. I'll have One Slytherin Master to go, please!!! I really liked this poem. I'm not one for Lilly/Severus as that to me is just wrong! But I really liked the direction this one went! (Who wouldn't???) I noticed one little bit where I thought you'd maybe put in an extra 'a': "convincing him in A but a jiffy" but, all in all this was a very humorous and lemonny drink! Well Done! Thanks go to Karina for letting me know of this great poet.
I'll be back to read some more! ~Annie WNS :D
Author's Response: I had so much fun with this poem and I am glad that others are enjoying reading it! Thanks for popping in an having a read! Karina, as I have said before, is far too good to me. I promise to give you a little poem in this response as soon as I can.
EllieK
P.S. Thanks for pointing out the extra 'a'! |
Wolf Moonshadow |
2004.12.04 - 12:14AM |
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Oh this is just brilliant! It has instantly become one of my favorites. I always thought Lily was likely a bit of whore with all those "Marauders four" to choose from. Pity the fool for the wrong choice of shag, anyday it's the snake over the stag!
Author's Response: "...Lily was likely a bit of a whore..." LOL! We may never know. Thanks for the rave review!
Poor Mrs. Potter, she chose the wrong prat
I wonder what Harry would think about that?
I think Miss Lily’s was terribly daft
To pass over Severus with his long, mighty shaft
I’ll take what is left of her sweet, sloppy seconds
I’ll follow that basilisk wherever it beckons!
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aerynfire |
2004.12.03 - 05:54PM |
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Oh my god! That was priceless! Thanks for such a great break from studying! More! ~Aeryn
Author's Response: Thanks, Aeryn! I have been terribly busy with final exams! I am working my way through your series of works and loving them!
I am Snape, a true Right Bastard
The art of sex, I well have mastered
I placed on a wench a little hex
I wanted some of ferocious sex
She rode me well; I'd have to say
In a true, conniving Slytherin way
Special Thanks: aerynfire's Works
Author's Response: The link in the poem did not work! Read this story folks, you shan't regret it! A Right Bastard |
mayaxiong |
2004.12.02 - 08:11PM |
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Anonymous |
Brilliant !! And I'd pick the Slyterin Master over that prat Potter any day !!! Stupid cow Lily..!
Author's Response: Thanks, mayaxiong! What the hell was she thinking? LOL! Thanks for stopping by and dropping a review!
Snape saw a wench whom he did fancy
He walked on over all proud and prancy
He showed her his wand growing in his robe
He asked her, begged her to let him probe
Into her fair nethers he then did wedge
His Snapely contraption of meat and two veg
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Pearle |
2004.12.02 - 02:12PM |
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Wonderful! Very funny. Is there really a choice, a Slytherin Master or a Gryffindor Stag? I would definitely go with the one-eyed python. You need a link to the review page, too. The poems here are not be missed.
Author's Response: Thanks, Pearle! There is no debate about who I would choose! Thanks for reading!
This poem is by Vocalion:
Lavinia, Lavinia, Kiki Feeny
Had it bad for the Great Snapini
He filled her heart with flutters and leaps,
But he didn't know where to thrust his Neeps
So through the back door he did go
With a hey nonny nonny and a ho ho ho.
Once he was there, he filled her fully,
And shoved clean through to her woolly bully!
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Jenny |
2004.12.02 - 12:26PM |
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Such Smutty Talent. Much better poetry then I ever found in my school books ;-)
Author's Response: Would you believe that I hated English when I was in school? I never tried poetry until about 4 weeks ago. Snape is such a wonderful topic! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Granger is brainy, but I am of age
I’ll shag the Master as she pouts in rage
Detention is over, Hermione must go
I need no help to give Snapey a blow!
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Florentia |
2004.12.02 - 11:44AM |
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Anonymous |
Slytherin Master for me!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for popping in to have a read! I am such a review whore!
Snape is your choice for a hot, steamy lay
I saw him first, so don’t get in my way!
I’ll rip off his pants and then drop to my knees
Merlin have mercy, I need Severus Please!
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