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Laudomia 2004.11.26 - 03:48PM 1: The Quest Anonymous
I’d like to believe Snape and Harry could be chums, but I can’t. Snape held a grudge against dead James for more than 17 years; Harry has hated and feared the Potions Master for five, so far. They tried for months to cooperate during OOTP—and failed. I can’t see Snape as protective, patient or encouraging toward Harry. I can’t see Harry as sensitive and trusting toward Snape. Though the writing was good for the most part, there were a lot of Americanisms and the setting was confusing—Captain Jack, flesh-dripping spirits and St. Thomas reminded me too much of Pirates of the Caribbean rather than Maine. Love to see a snarky Snape!

Author's Response: There was no intention to suggest that Harry and Snape became chums. The challenge was to try to make Snape be convincingly OOC, and to be honest, Harry was tougher than Snape to do this with. As for the Americanisms, well, I’m an American and it would be foolish of me to try to sound otherwise, although I do try to keep some of the more glaring expressions out of their conversations.

The Maine coast has a rich history of pirates. With its 3000+ miles of coastline, and over 1000 islands, it was a wonderful place to disappear. More than one pirate is reputed to have buried treasure here. As for the captain being named Jack, I debated that. I think you’re right, and will go change it.

Thanks for reviewing!


WhimsyLass 2004.11.25 - 03:32PM 1: The Quest Signed
This was well written, but I really did not like it. The idea behind it was fun and creative and you did a nice job of blending in all the requirements. Something about the whole thing really bothered me though. Given the word count limitation, I can excuse the fact that Harry and Snape reached a rather hasty agreement. But...I really didn't like this story. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. Sorry you didn't enjoy the story but I completely understand. Not every story is to everyone's liking. Putting Harry and Snape in the Muggle world was the only way I could come up with for them to reach any kind of understanding in anything under JKR's 8 books. Even though Harry was raised there, he was in the Muggle world as a wizard, with a wizard. A very cranky and volatile one, at that. His 'protection' of Snape was as much to protect himself as Snape - more so, perhaps. Had they been in the Wizarding world, Harry would never have offered to play cards with Snape, nor would Snape have accepted.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. Sorry you didn't enjoy the story but I completely understand. Not every story is to everyone's liking. Putting Harry and Snape in the Muggle world was the only way I could come up with for them to reach any kind of understanding in anything under JKR's 8 books. Even though Harry was raised there, he was in the Muggle world as a wizard, with a wizard. A very cranky and volatile one, at that. His 'protection' of Snape was as much to protect himself as Snape - more so, perhaps. Had they been in the Wizarding world, Harry would never have offered to play cards with Snape, nor would Snape have accepted.

Author's Response: Whoa! Is there a bug in the new system? I swear I only hit submit once!

Salty Dog 2004.11.25 - 01:05AM 1: The Quest Anonymous
Great story, enjoyable interactions, good scenery. I liked the Maine setting. Very cool interpretation of the money pit mystery. (even if you did move it to another state;) I found Snape's and Harry's discovery of each others true character compelling and believable. Looking forward to your next story.

Author's Response: Thank you! (Acutally, I moved Oak Island to a new country. It's off Nova Scotia.)

rambkowalczyk 2004.11.24 - 01:20PM 1: The Quest Anonymous
excellant story. Good detail about sailing as well as the day to day stuff. The only criticism is that Snape and Harry probably reached an understanding a little too soon but I did like how you tried to show what each was thinking.

Author's Response: Thank you. I can't argue and my only defense is that I only had 10,000 words to work with. Glad you liked it.

Wolf Moonshadow 2004.11.23 - 06:12PM 1: The Quest Signed
Oops, sorry, I is not English good speaking today, I is must be in house-elf mode, and is not proofing. Lets try that again. ~I love how you brought the imagery out, making us feel as if we were up on deck with them.~

Author's Response: Thanks! (I didn't notice your error!)

Wolf Moonshadow 2004.11.23 - 05:49PM 1: The Quest Signed
Poor Snape, keeps thunking his head. This was a great story, I love how brought the imagery out, making us feel as if we on deck with them. Very enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thank you - glad you liked it.

PlaidPooka 2004.11.23 - 01:20AM 1: The Quest Signed
I really enjoyed Harry and Severus' quest! It was nice to see them actually able to put aside their differences and work together.

Author's Response: Thanks. I like to hope that JKR is working toward, if not an understanding, at least a tolerance between these two.

Winna 2004.11.22 - 10:33AM 1: The Quest Anonymous
Well, it wasn't Lillith's Snape, but I enjoyed him anyway. Good story & good Snape/Harry interaction.

Author's Response: No, not Lillith's Snape. I find I miss them a lot more than I thought I would. Thanks for the kind words.

Apothecaria 2004.11.21 - 10:06PM 1: The Quest Anonymous
It's a thoughtful take on this challenge. Snape does a number of "unlikely" things, but they all occur naturally as a consequence of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you. That's what I was trying for.

LariLee 2004.11.21 - 08:37PM 1: The Quest Signed
Smoke, this is so good on so many levels. I love the interaction between Snape and Harry, but I love the 'thunk' he began cursing Albus. Great job! ~Lisa

Author's Response: Thanks! I remember the cabin of my Dad's work boat. I just brushed the beams and I'm only 5'6". I can imagine poor Snape...

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