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Reviews for A Right Bastard

Subversa 2005.10.27 - 04:30AM 17: Honor and Remembrance Signed
Your recounting of the Final Battle moved me to tears, particularly the grief of Arthur and Molly Weasley. I can just see Arthur cradling Percy and blaming himself; it makes me tear up to just think of it. It reminds me of that passage in the Bible where King David's son, Absolam, who led a rebellion against his father and died in the battle, is brought to his father. David cradles him and cries, "Oh, Absolam, Absolam, my son, my son, would God I had died for thee." Very powerful writing, LariLee, and much better Last Battle storytelling than I have read elsewhere.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Subversa! Actually, I thought of that same scene when I saw Arthur cradling Percy. I teared up as well. But I cried out right during the proposal chapter. I suspect you will say a lot about me then.

tak 2005.10.23 - 10:34AM 27: Amor Vincit Omnia Signed
wow. that was a long couple of days. i only found your story last week, and it has been remarkably satisfying read. great character development. can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, tak! I am so happy you have enjoyed the story so far and I hope I can keep it up for you!

uniboob 2005.10.21 - 01:18AM 27: Amor Vincit Omnia Signed
well if I can (and do) beg for more chapters, then you're well within your rights to beg for more reviews. The story is wonderful. The plot bunnies have been good to you and the sex scenes are awesome!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, uniboob! Uniboob is that anything like unibrow? I am so happy you're enjoying this! The plot bunnies have been very, very good to me.

Subversa 2005.10.20 - 07:22AM 15: Define Normal Signed
"Severus was certain it would not end up like the majority of the few promises he had ever given--crushed in the dust under his boots." Poor Severus -- he doesn't give himself much credit, does he?

“I realize there are many men who would like to be by your side. Fortunately, not many of them are suicidal enough to challenge me.” God, Miss LariLee, what IS it about that kind of possessive protectiveness that just drives women NUTS? Works on me, m'dear, every single time.

Author's Response: I don't know what it is, Subversa, but Snape has it in spades. :-) thank you!

Subversa 2005.10.20 - 04:30AM 14: A House is a Big Thing to Drop or Better Aim for the Ego Signed
Awww, I love it when he drops to one knee by her side. The give and take and the sparring between Severus and Beau augur well for a friendship there.

Author's Response: Thank you, Subversa! Yes, not only do I have to give Severus a girlfriend, but a buddy as well. I think he deserves it.

elysianmusings 2005.10.13 - 11:35AM 27: Amor Vincit Omnia Signed
I've gotten through it! Whee! Now I'm going to impatiently sit and wait for more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, elysianmusings! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it!

Subversa 2005.10.13 - 11:28AM 13: Operation House-Drop Begins Signed
You are building some strong characters here, Miss LariLee, who are all your own invention. Everybody isn't just making nice; they are being unpleasant and challenging our Potions Master and I am ever so impressed.

Severus! Please take me to Greece and claim me! =) Sorry, couldn't help myself.

Author's Response: Thank you, Subversa! I'm convinced that not everyone will want to play nice. But I always think the good guys make it through. I'll see if you still feel that way when you read what happens in Greece.

elysianmusings 2005.10.13 - 11:01AM 25: Expected Enemies and Unexpected Allies Signed
There is nothing wrong with going completely AU. Most of my fics are now that way. This is too wonderful to stop.

Author's Response: Thank you, elysianmusings! I have declared myself "Queen of the Alternate Universe." :-)

Subversa 2005.10.13 - 04:42AM 12: Plots, Schemes, Manipulations and Hexes or Just Another Californian Day Signed
Now you've got me all in love with Beau and Carol. Good lord, woman, have you been writing all your life?? And I wonder if Carol will tell Tricia she's been claimed?? I like the revenge on Derek Andrews -- quite appropriate!

Author's Response: Thank you, Subversa! I've always had stories in my head, but it wasn't until a year ago other people got to see them. I'm so happy you're enjoying this!

elysianmusings 2005.10.13 - 12:49AM 23: Happy Engagement or Is That a Secret? Signed
LariLee, dear, you might as well start injecting this story directly into my veins. I can't concentrate on my damn Philosophy homework because I *have* to know what's next. Absolutely fantabulous, as always.

Author's Response: Thank you, elysianmusings! This sounds almost like to start of a philosophical problem. :-)

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