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Reviews for A Right Bastard

Estrilda 2004.10.25 - 01:25PM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
What a lovely story - Severus with an American is usually my least favorite OFC because it often seems to contrived to include one, but with the story being from Severus' point of view and very well done, by the way, it actually overcomes that tradition Mary Sue problem rather well. I loved the button lemon in chapter one - actually, I'll admit that I sort of skipped down to it, and started there, but your wonderful story sucked me in and here I am at the end of chapter two. Two tiny things - the participle gone is used with have - have gone - not have went and house-elf is usually hyphenated. I hope you plan on writing more soon. Occlumency gets so slow sometimes. Estrilda

Author's Response: Thank you, Estrilda! I'm glad I'm avoiding the dreaded "Mary Sue-ism" so far. Thank you for the heads-up on the house-elf correction. I haven't found the bad participle (though when I do, it's going to be spanked and grounded) though I've read through twice. Chapter three is being worked on, should be up in a couple of days! Thanks! ~Lisa

Vocalion 2004.10.24 - 08:22PM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Anonymous
Very, very good, and you're just as much of a button fanatic as I am! I possess absolutely no skill as a reviewer, but I wanted to let you know I enjoyed your story.

Author's Response: Karina, Thank you so much! You should try TPMM for their Button challenge. This one got away from me and keeps growing... like most of my plot bunnies. I appreciate your kind words! ~Lisa

aerynfire 2004.10.24 - 05:05PM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
Lisa~ Once again a wonderful chapter. I loved how you got inside his head and explained, not only what had been going on, but what his motivations were. Great job and I look forward to reading more. ~Aeryn

Author's Response: Aeryn, thank you! Chapter 3 is about halfway through. I really enjoyed being in Severus' bed, er... head. ~Lisa :-D

allthosewildhorses 2004.10.24 - 04:28PM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Anonymous
Some really clever touches in there! I loved it... this story is fast becoming one of my favorites.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with this chapter. I'm hoping it got some snickers. ~Lisa

Sineed 2004.10.24 - 01:13PM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Anonymous
A delightful update with lots of clever touches. Showing his point of view expanded the scope of your story.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sineed! This was supposed to be a short chapter with Snape, however, he had a lot he wanted to get across. :-D I'm glad it added depth. ~Lisa

silkysoul 2004.10.24 - 07:12AM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Anonymous
Beautiful characterization and a good plot. I would love to read more. Please update soon, and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you, Silkysoul. Working on chapter three now. ~Lisa

siesta 2004.10.23 - 10:20AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Anonymous
I loved the "voice as rich as cocoa", and it was nice and lemony - so I hope you´ll write some more!

Author's Response: Thank you Siesta! Chapter two should be up in a day or two. It'll be Snape's POV. Then comes the hexing chapter. I'm pretty excited by all the hexing coming up. ~Lisa

AmbarSnape 2004.10.22 - 06:32PM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Anonymous
I liked it a lot!!! Really... quite an experience.

Author's Response: Thank you, Ambar! ~Lisa

Lana Manckir 2004.10.22 - 03:31PM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Anonymous
That was wonderful! hot and very well written, I hope to see more of them in the future. ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you, Lana! So many writers I love are leaving such kind words! But I think the rabid plot bunnies are breeding. This story has to go on because it's just keeps getting bigger (and the chance to input a sly joke on other things getting bigger shall pass untouched for now)... ~Lisa

Bree McGregor 2004.10.22 - 03:11PM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Anonymous
WOW that was great! I can't wait to read more from you!!

Author's Response: Oh Bree, thank you! ~Lisa :-D

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