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Estrilda 2004.11.20 - 05:09AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Donít Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Signed
What a lovely little story. One little thing - the first time you mention the protest - it is a "peach" march - don't you mean "peace"?

Author's Response: Lol, well, in this story, it could very well be a peach march. Thanks reading and for pointing that out! ~Lisa

lucy 2004.11.20 - 02:58AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Donít Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Anonymous
Ooooo, this is so good! I, too, really enjoyed the backstory. How long will it take our dear Snapey to come to his senses re: love?? :) Thanks a lot!

Author's Response: Thanks Lucy! Well, we are talking about Snape, so it might take a while. When it comes to matters of the heart, he's a little slow. ~Lisa

Vocalion 2004.11.20 - 12:00AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Donít Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Anonymous
I really like what you did with this chapter and the whole backstory of Patricia's parents' courtship. Enjoyed Snape's inner thoughts too. Even the humble pineapple is the property of J.K. All I did was place it up on a pedestal where it belongs. I am glad that it is finally receiving the attention that it so richly deserves.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Voca! You've been a godsend to me. You did more than elevate the pineapple. But with pineapples, peaches and lemons, perhaps this should be renamed "Fruit Salad"? ~Lisa

EllieK 2004.11.19 - 11:47PM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Donít Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Anonymous
You know I feel about this chapter already. I love it!!! "if they ask if youíre shagging their daughter, donít grin like an idiot; smile." LOL!!! ďPeaches!Ē...Severus heard that in mid-sip. As it was, he nearly spit his tea back in the cup before swallowing...I love how you are keeping the peach reference going throughout the chapters.

Now, I loved so many parts of this story that I cannot reference them all because it would be like a novella, but here is my very favorite one "Fate, the ever capricious bitch is catching up to me at last" I am honored that I was able to offer my services to you, Lisa. This story is a 100+! ###Liz

Author's Response: Liz, you have no idea what your words mean to me. I'm just going to bask in the glow this review has given me. And I so appreciate your help! ~Lisa ::bask, bask, bask::

Miri Tiazan 2004.11.18 - 12:42AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous
Wandered over from Ashwinder again to check for an update, and lo and behold, there it is! Fantastic. Jealous!Severus is very cute, and Nervous!Severus is even more endearing. Aww. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mira! Though you do realize calling Severus either jealous or nervous at this stage could get you hexed most severely by our severe Potions master. :-D Though he is both, poor boy. I almost feel sorry for him. No, wait, I'll feel sorry for him in a later chapter--he'll need it then far more. ~Lisa ;-D

Obadiah Slope 2004.11.17 - 11:45AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous
I adored the last line of the chapter, about Severus obliviated Tricia's parents and "starting again", as he put it! It reminds me why I love him so. Lol. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next ...

Author's Response: Thanks Obadiah! You're the 2nd person to comment on that. It's why I chose to end here rather than trying to squeeze in her parents. Nearly halfway through the next chapter. Should be up within the week. ~Lisa

Angie 2004.11.17 - 09:07AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous
You're doing a very good job with this fic. I'm always hunting around to see if you've updated. The Southern flavor is wonderful.

Author's Response: Angie! Thank you so much for the kind words! Roanoke University of Magic always seems to appear somewhere around my plot bunnies, hence the Southern flavor. Well, that and Tricia's just a Georgia peach. :-D Thanks again! ~Lisa

Linnet 2004.11.16 - 09:48AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous
*hugs hard* Great job! Am just adoring your fic, and all the lovely one-liners you've got Snape thinking. ...and the sex is hot, of course! hee! ... Keep it up, please!

Author's Response: *hugs back* That is so sweet, Linnet! I'm so glad you're liking it! And I'm glad you think Snape is thinking snarky and loving hot! ~Lisa

emmeline_vance 2004.11.16 - 07:27AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous
Hey again! I'm so glad that you've updated. I have noticed that you have the absolute best ending lines for your chapters. "Well, if it does not work, I shall simply obliviate them and try it again,". I just love the way his mind works. Thanks so much for updating, and keep up the great work. Peace! Love, me.

Author's Response: Hey me! I'm so glad you like the end lines. I love those classic short stories where you get that hook at the end (thinking of "Quitters, Inc" and "The Ledge" by Stephen King... I like to put that little twist in. I'm so happy you noticed and you like it! ~Lisa

eve/roarke 2004.11.15 - 01:51PM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous
It's a really good story, I like it, I think I am really going to enjoy our lovely kind Severus meeting up with this idot of a man who goes around abusing people just because he can. Your Severus would bring out goose pimples anyway, but I really think the power he will show will have me shivering for hours. Good story, please update soon, now I have discovered the site I will check often.

Author's Response: Thanks again, eve/roarke! I promise you Severus will meet up with Ripley sooner or later... but it might not go as you'd think ::grinning evilly:: I do appreciate your kind words and chapter 7 is being worked on now! ~Lisa

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