Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In | Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions Reviews for A Right Bastard View All ReviewsReviews For 2. Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse.Reviews For 27. Amor Vincit OmniaReviews For 5. Who Is Lynne Fields and Why is Severus Saying Such Bad Things About Her?Reviews For 1. So Many Buttons, So Little TimeReviews For 3. The Chapter That is Character Heavy But Lemon LightReviews For 4. Why Southern Women Don't Drink (and Why British Men Think They Should)Reviews For 6. Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--FinallyReviews For 7. The Muggliest Muggle or You Don’t Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having SexReviews For 8. Do Peaches and Lemons Really Go Together?Reviews For 9. The Obligatory General Angst Chapter or Roses vs. CarnationsReviews For 10. A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually)Reviews For 11. A Kitten’s Claws are Just as SharpReviews For 12. Plots, Schemes, Manipulations and Hexes or Just Another Californian DayReviews For 15. Define NormalReviews For 13. Operation House-Drop BeginsReviews For 14. A House is a Big Thing to Drop or Better Aim for the EgoReviews For 26. Out Of the Cauldron and into the FlameReviews For 16. Dwelling on DreamsReviews For 17. Honor and RemembranceReviews For 18. When Good Proposals Go BadReviews For 19. Alone Again, UnnaturallyReviews For 20. Operation: DestinyReviews For 21. Destiny RulesReviews For 22. With Friends Like TheseReviews For 23. Happy Engagement or Is That a Secret?Reviews For 24. When Good Potions Go BadReviews For 25. Expected Enemies and Unexpected Allies Estrilda 2004.11.20 - 05:09AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Don’t Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Signed What a lovely little story. One little thing - the first time you mention the protest - it is a "peach" march - don't you mean "peace"? Author's Response: Lol, well, in this story, it could very well be a peach march. Thanks reading and for pointing that out! ~Lisa lucy 2004.11.20 - 02:58AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Don’t Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Anonymous Ooooo, this is so good! I, too, really enjoyed the backstory. How long will it take our dear Snapey to come to his senses re: love?? :) Thanks a lot! Author's Response: Thanks Lucy! Well, we are talking about Snape, so it might take a while. When it comes to matters of the heart, he's a little slow. ~Lisa Vocalion 2004.11.20 - 12:00AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Don’t Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Anonymous I really like what you did with this chapter and the whole backstory of Patricia's parents' courtship. Enjoyed Snape's inner thoughts too. Even the humble pineapple is the property of J.K. All I did was place it up on a pedestal where it belongs. I am glad that it is finally receiving the attention that it so richly deserves. Author's Response: Thank you so much, Voca! You've been a godsend to me. You did more than elevate the pineapple. But with pineapples, peaches and lemons, perhaps this should be renamed "Fruit Salad"? ~Lisa EllieK 2004.11.19 - 11:47PM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Don’t Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Anonymous You know I feel about this chapter already. I love it!!! "if they ask if you’re shagging their daughter, don’t grin like an idiot; smile." LOL!!! “Peaches!”...Severus heard that in mid-sip. As it was, he nearly spit his tea back in the cup before swallowing...I love how you are keeping the peach reference going throughout the chapters. Now, I loved so many parts of this story that I cannot reference them all because it would be like a novella, but here is my very favorite one "Fate, the ever capricious bitch is catching up to me at last" I am honored that I was able to offer my services to you, Lisa. This story is a 100+! ###Liz Author's Response: Liz, you have no idea what your words mean to me. I'm just going to bask in the glow this review has given me. And I so appreciate your help! ~Lisa ::bask, bask, bask:: Miri Tiazan 2004.11.18 - 12:42AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous Wandered over from Ashwinder again to check for an update, and lo and behold, there it is! Fantastic. Jealous!Severus is very cute, and Nervous!Severus is even more endearing. Aww. Can't wait for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mira! Though you do realize calling Severus either jealous or nervous at this stage could get you hexed most severely by our severe Potions master. :-D Though he is both, poor boy. I almost feel sorry for him. No, wait, I'll feel sorry for him in a later chapter--he'll need it then far more. ~Lisa ;-D Obadiah Slope 2004.11.17 - 11:45AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous I adored the last line of the chapter, about Severus obliviated Tricia's parents and "starting again", as he put it! It reminds me why I love him so. Lol. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next ... Author's Response: Thanks Obadiah! You're the 2nd person to comment on that. It's why I chose to end here rather than trying to squeeze in her parents. Nearly halfway through the next chapter. Should be up within the week. ~Lisa Angie 2004.11.17 - 09:07AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous You're doing a very good job with this fic. I'm always hunting around to see if you've updated. The Southern flavor is wonderful. Author's Response: Angie! Thank you so much for the kind words! Roanoke University of Magic always seems to appear somewhere around my plot bunnies, hence the Southern flavor. Well, that and Tricia's just a Georgia peach. :-D Thanks again! ~Lisa Linnet 2004.11.16 - 09:48AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous *hugs hard* Great job! Am just adoring your fic, and all the lovely one-liners you've got Snape thinking. ...and the sex is hot, of course! hee! ... Keep it up, please! Author's Response: *hugs back* That is so sweet, Linnet! I'm so glad you're liking it! And I'm glad you think Snape is thinking snarky and loving hot! ~Lisa emmeline_vance 2004.11.16 - 07:27AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous Hey again! I'm so glad that you've updated. I have noticed that you have the absolute best ending lines for your chapters. "Well, if it does not work, I shall simply obliviate them and try it again,". I just love the way his mind works. Thanks so much for updating, and keep up the great work. Peace! Love, me. Author's Response: Hey me! I'm so glad you like the end lines. I love those classic short stories where you get that hook at the end (thinking of "Quitters, Inc" and "The Ledge" by Stephen King... I like to put that little twist in. I'm so happy you noticed and you like it! ~Lisa eve/roarke 2004.11.15 - 01:51PM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Anonymous It's a really good story, I like it, I think I am really going to enjoy our lovely kind Severus meeting up with this idot of a man who goes around abusing people just because he can. Your Severus would bring out goose pimples anyway, but I really think the power he will show will have me shivering for hours. Good story, please update soon, now I have discovered the site I will check often. Author's Response: Thanks again, eve/roarke! I promise you Severus will meet up with Ripley sooner or later... but it might not go as you'd think ::grinning evilly:: I do appreciate your kind words and chapter 7 is being worked on now! ~Lisa [Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 [Next]

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