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Reviews for A Right Bastard

Miri Tiazan 2004.12.25 - 08:51PM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
Ouch. That was harsh. LOL. Fear not, your plot bunnies are safe for now. Loved the chapter. Severus is doing rather well, as knights in shining armor go. Merry Christmas, and even if you don't celebrate it, have a really good day anyway.

Author's Response: Thank you, Miri! I'm glad you're still enjoying this! Severus gets a very nice, possessive knight in shining armor scene next chapter. Happy Christmas to you, to! I do celebrate it and appreciate the sentiments. ;-D

Melpomene Erato 2004.12.25 - 02:01AM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
“Do you not understand that my arms are around you? That I will protect you?[...]"

(Sigh!) Call me a total romantic, but that line just got to me!

Author's Response: Thank you, Melpomene! You're a total romantic. It's okay, so am I. ::sigh::

EllieK 2004.12.24 - 01:01PM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
I want to give Tricia a high-five, so, maybe you could pass it along to her. She is a tough little vixen!

I have a question: Why doesn't Severus like Carol? Is it because he just doesn't understand her? (Is the prat jealous in some way?) This was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next installment! Merry Christmas, Lisa!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Ellie! I'll pass it along. Now, why doesn't Severus like Carol? I think it's because he finds her cold, sarcastic, a good fighter, and has a position of influence with Tricia. Let's see cold, sarcastic, a good fighter, and has a position of influence with Tricia... cold, sarcastic, a good fighter, and has a position of influence with Tricia... that just sounds familiar somehow. ;-D If opposites attract, sometimes alike repels.

Merry Christmas to you also, Ellie!


sophierom 2004.12.21 - 01:14PM 3: The Chapter That is Character Heavy But Lemon Light Signed
Ooh, the tension! Good plot development. I like your use of the other canon characters, too. It's nice to see them all working together.

Author's Response: Thank you, sophierom! I'm glad you're liking it so far. I think they all would work together after all they'd been through. ~Lisa

SPK 2004.12.21 - 05:25AM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
I really like this version of Severus. Tricia goes so well with him. Can't wait to read more. S. K.

Author's Response: Thank you, SPK! I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

sophierom 2004.12.20 - 05:56PM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
I love it! Still a scheming Snape, as in your Ashwinder story, but a bit gentler, perhaps? maybe that's because the war is over. You do a really nice job portraying him. And i really like Tricia, too. I've put this on my favorites list over here. I'll definitely be coming back to this when I get a moment. Best, Sophie

Author's Response: Thank you, SophieRom! I'm glad you see him as a bit gentler. The war was five years earlier, so he can be a bit more relaxed. It took him 20 years to get his life back. I think he deserves to be happy, don't you? I'm glad you're enjoying this one as well as the one on Ashwinder. ~::happy chair dance::

Pigwidgeon 2004.12.20 - 02:34PM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
Ooo .. I love a good political battle! Tricia's "apology" to the snot auror left me rolling, heh heh heh. Keep on keepin' on!

Author's Response: Thanks, Pigidgeon! Tricia does have a bit of a temper and the "honeymoon" phase seems to be wearing off. And haven't we all met a snot auror, that we wish we could apologize to, the way he deserves? I'm glad you're enjoying!

witchlisa 2004.12.20 - 02:06PM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
I'm enjoying the parallels between the magical world and it's people and politics and our current situation in the States. :-) Very clever. Hope you don't put some "red" folks off, but it's very clear and well done. Rumson. Snicker.

Author's Response: Thanks witchlisa! I am a Liberal in a nest of Neocons... in other words, I put "red" folks off daily. ;-D I'm glad you're enjoying this. I enjoy the parallels almost too much.

Obadiah Slope 2004.12.20 - 06:59AM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
But, thinking of new and interesting ways to beg for reviews is always the most entertaining part of writing a chatper! ;) Anyway, I'm enjoying this story more than ever. It was an interesting moment when Patricia almost admitted her love. When are they both going to truly admit how they feel? Oh, I adore 'the couple'; keep them wondering for a while longer, then I can read a fair bit more of this fic!

Author's Response: Thank you, Obadiah! Thinking up new disclaimers and new ways to beg can be the most fun. Chapter Titles bother me, but the others make me laugh (even if no one else does).
I'm so glad you caught the fact she almost let it slip! However, she's afraid if she says that, he'll fun. For some reason, some men take it badly.
And before Severus can tell her, he has to figure out he does love her. I'm looking for a small brick wall to fall on him in the future! Or a visit from Albus "Twinkly" Dumbledore.
I'm just so happy you're enjoying it! And we still have to defeat Prop 409, visit Hogwarts for the five year anniversary and a few other things... ::cough, cough "The Brad" cough cough::

Mariana 2004.12.19 - 11:26PM 11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp Signed
Because you didn't ask for reviews, I'll give you some. I read very few fanfics nowadays. I've been in this fandom for about five years now, and to be honest, very few stories hold my interest. Which is why it's been such a pleasure looking forward to you updating. I have to admit, it's nice having that small thrill when I see your story has been updated. Your story is wonderful. It has the best elements of dialogue, humor, love, plot, and artful writing. Your words are not in love with themselves, but love the reader. And that, my dear, is refreshing. Thank you so much for your story, and I look forward to another chapter. Like Snape in your story, I will never let you go, either.

Author's Response: Oh, Mariana! I love you too! ;-D Thank you so much for those words. I'm blushing, really. In fact, this is one of the few times in my life that I am speechless. Thank you!

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