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pinkcorsair 2005.01.25 - 05:31AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
Desperate is the most accurate word to discribe me. If I really knew anything about women I would be sitting alone at 3:30 reading a novel and playing on my computer.

Author's Response: You see, all you need to do is let your hair grow, dye it black, get black contacts and some black robes and show up at a Harry Potter convention. Women dressed as Granger, McGonagall, even Trelawney would mug you! Well, so would blonde men with snake's head canes, too, but such is the price of fame and you might find a blonde-headed Narcissa wanna-be. ;-D Have fun, but do it safely!

pinkcorsair 2005.01.25 - 05:17AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
Who said anything about paying? Men love to spend women's more than their own.

Author's Response: I've never been that desperate, but I suppose the women you've been with must have been. ;-D Love 'ya, Pink! But I couldn't let an opportunity like that go by. I'm sure you understand and are secure enough in yourself to accept it all with a laugh.
~Lisa ::running and ducking, just in case::

pinkcorsair 2005.01.25 - 04:59AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
As soon as a Dildo can take a women out for dinner and dancing, then we're in trouble. Until then we'll stay the single minded assholes that we've always been.

Author's Response: Welcome to the 21st Century, my dear Pink. We can pay for our own dinner and dancing means you can ask any guy you want onto the floor. Time to update a bit, perhaps?
~Lisa ;-D

pinkcorsair 2005.01.25 - 04:13AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
All women are Bi. Didn't you know that? It's the cornerstone of all male sexual fantasies. A guy can't sleep with two women at the same time if they're not attracted to each other. And I thought all women had that Father, Daughter fantasy.They only want men like their dads, right?

Author's Response: You've been watching waaaay too much porn, pink. Waaaaaaay too much. ;-D But do men really want the competition? After all, plastic is never too tired, premature, or selfish.
~Lisa ;-D

pinkcorsair 2005.01.25 - 01:53AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
I'm just reviewing because story was at 199. I love to be the one that pushes a story to a even number, like 200.

Author's Response: Thanks, pink! I never thought I'd break 100, much less 200. Of course, 50 of them are from you begging for a three-way. ;-D

pinkcorsair 2005.01.25 - 01:01AM 10: A London Werewolf in America (You Know I Had to Use That as a Title Eventually) Signed
You had a perfect oppertunity for a threesome in this chapter and you let it get away. Rolanda could have came in while they were in the shower. She could have joined them or just watched...................I'm still wondering how "The Brad" knocked up a seventeen year old Tricia? Was the perv out shouting local high schools or did he grab her at a Qudditch match like a groupy at a rock concert.................What did Remus do to get arrested. Pee on a firehydrent or chase some cars? He didn't take a dump on the sidewalk and not use a pooper scooper afterwards. Or are the Ripleys starting to put pressure on Tricia through her friends?....................The sex scenes are still ok, but you need to kick it up a notch. You're still in rated R territory and have yet to hit NC-17. Maybe she can start calling him Daddy and he can tell her what a naughty little girls she's been.

Author's Response: Do you think a flying instructor could have broken Severus' wards? And as Tricia isn't gay and Rolanda isn't straight, it'd just be a waste of time for all involved. You're the first person to pick up on how "The Brad" (and don't you just want to hammer him?) knocked her up. The clues are there, though, but will be explained later. Do you think Elspeth Ripley would fight so dirty? Yeah, so do I. I'll work on my sex scenes. Perhaps some more research... Forget the "daddy" scenario or the detention fantasies. Just not me, I'm afraid.

Grainne 2005.01.24 - 10:26PM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Signed
Ooh, what I could do with magical protest T-shirts...police states and Orwellian politics indeed...but I digress. Another fine chapter; you have mastered Snape's inner dialogue. And his first encounter with a Victoria's Secret catalogue left me in fits. Ta muchly.

Author's Response: Thank you, Grainne! It's a shame Tricia wasn't around during the last election. I'm so glad you liked the Victoria's secret catelogue. It was one of my favorite parts to write. I can see him sneering now, while he looks, of course (he is, after all a man). And I won't touch politics. I never comment on them. (Do I look innocent enough?)

Grainne 2005.01.24 - 10:06PM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Signed
Ahem..I would just like to take a brief moment to say that I find your disclaimers quite droll. I know this has nothing to do with the story, but I do appreciate the little extra bit of wit you provide at the top of the page!

Author's Response: Thanks, Grainne! I enjoy writing them as much as I do the author's notes (aka creative review begging). A bit of private laughter. I'm glad you share in it!

Grainne 2005.01.24 - 10:02PM 5: Who Is Lynne Fields and Why is Severus Saying Such Bad Things About Her? Signed
Gads, woman, there won't be a dry spot on the carpet when I'm done with this one! (You know how I love those Ice Lolly Follies) This story only gets better as I go along. Very interesting plot development...but really, what I want to say is that it is sexy and frigging hilarious. And no one uses the word "dreck" enough in my opinion, so cheers for that. No offense to my good friends and family who live there, but Snape saying "Remind me, should I ever wake up one day utterly devoid of morals and scruples, to move to America and marry in this California," is, quite simply, perfect. I'll shut my face now, but I'll keep on humming your praises...

Author's Response: Thanks, Grainne! I'll try to work 'dreck' into chapter 14, just for you. I'm not going to ask about your carpet though... the wet spot could be from so many different things. ;-D I think America is going to be quite surprising for Severus. Please keep humming! I so appreciate it!

pinkcorsair 2005.01.24 - 03:13AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
Falling down Through the clowds Memories come rushing up to meet me now In the space between the Heaven and the corner of some foreign field, I had a dream. I had a dream. Good by Max Good by Ma After the service when you're walking slowly to the car. And the silver in her hair shine in the cold November air. You hear the tolling bell as you feel the silk in your lapel. Hold on to a dream. Hold to the dream. :)

Author's Response: I shall, pink, I shall. ;-D

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