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Reviews for A Right Bastard

Guinevere Greenleaf 2006.06.11 - 12:46AM 3: The Chapter That is Character Heavy But Lemon Light Signed
I'm hooked! Excellent story! Can't stop reading it!

sarabella76 2006.06.07 - 12:43AM 8: Do Peaches and Lemons Really Go Together? Signed
Can Severus be more delicious? Gah! I love how he's "claimed" her. So Snapeish. And Hermione needs to mind her own business! Lovely lemons, by the way. *sigh*

sarabella76 2006.06.04 - 03:16AM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
*sigh* This chappy leaves me all warm and fuzzy feeling inside. I love seeing Snape's perspective on things and it's so sweet that he misses her. You've also kept him in character--he uses Legilimency to figure her out and is plotting like the clever Slytherin he is. I just love this. It's just as good as when I first read it.

sarabella76 2006.06.04 - 02:41AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
I'm embarassed to say that I have read this before and never reviewed. Shame on me! I love love love this story! Severus is unbelievably tender and sexy and Patricia is such a well rounded OC. I love that she is vulnerable and lacks confidence. She's real, in other words! Their first kiss gave me goosebumps. I can't say enough about this!

MollysSister 2006.05.15 - 11:23PM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
Your little bitty baby cliffie isnt evil. It isnt even cliffie worthy. Id call it a teaser. Then again you said this was your first fiction. I know you have gotten much MUCH better at leaving dear readers on pins and needles. What will my favorite right bastard do next?

MollysSister 2006.05.15 - 05:15PM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
Oh my! Is it hot in here or is it just me? Well that was a wonderful opening chapter. I am not seeing too much bastard, but plenty of smut. Which is fine and dandy with me!

MimiManderly 2006.05.13 - 09:19PM 27: Amor Vincit Omnia Signed
I want more story! I've been sucked in! Your version of Severus is much gentler than most of the versions I've read, but who's to say he actually isn't a genuinely nice person? It stands to reason that he might try to look and act as off-putting as possible while he was a spy, because he didn't dare form any attachments. Even friends would be verboten, since Voldemort would use anyone Severus felt close to as a pawn. Now that he's no longer a spy, he would be able to form attachments, but of course his social skills would be a little off the mark. I rather like the fact that it appears that he will get to live happily ever after in your story, at least. I greatly fear that JKR will have him die a martyr's death. (I STILL believe he is on our side, despite the way things appear in HBP). He deserves better after sacrificing so much of his life to the Order. I'm glad that, at least in your universe, he has achieved a happy life. (Oh gods! I'm sounding more and more like a Hufflepuff!)

Mooncat 2006.05.11 - 10:25PM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
This has got to be one of my favorite fan-fics in quite a while. You have Severus Snape down so well that I can "hear" his voice (okay, Alan Rickman's voice) in my head when I read your dialog. To me, that indicates that your Snape is "real," and I also LIKE him. He's a snarky wretch, but his intelligence and humor make up for it. Also, I REALLY enjoy your sense of humor. Please keep writing - I'm truly enjoying this one!

LauranotLora 2006.04.24 - 07:50AM 7: The Muggliest Muggle or You Donít Really Want to Think of Your In-Laws Having Sex Signed
Wow, so I loved this chapter (being a Southern gal from Georgia myslef). Mary's story was great. Great, great writing. And she and George are cute.

weirdo_ 2006.04.14 - 10:08AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
Fantastic. Great timing, wit and character development (without going overboard). "Hagrid in a Speed-o" will haunt my thoughts and tickle my funny bone for a long time. Your sense of humor has me giggling like mad every time I read an author's note or disclaimer.

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