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phoenix 2005.03.19 - 10:35PM 20: Operation: Destiny Signed
I'm glad you've found my reviews useful. I always try to say what it is I like and don't like about a particular part of the story. As a writer I like to get the same kind of feedback. Some of them I didn't leave too much because I was very eager to get to the next chapter. That's how engrossing I've found this story. You've created a very vibrant set of characters and done an excellent job personifying the canon characters. It's been a great emotional roller coaster with all the angst and happiness mixed together. You've given great depth to the HP universe outside of Harry's POV. Brava!....I've added this story to my favorites list and will eagerly await installments as you get them up.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks Phoenix! I do love this kind of feedback! And I find myself oddly speechless. I think I shall just let the bunnies dance in glee. :-)

Trickie Woo 2005.03.19 - 10:29PM 18: When Good Proposals Go Bad Signed
For supposedly intelligent people they are both pretty damn stupid. I know Albus will meddle and bring them back together, so I'm not worried. Your Draco is a great version of JKR's character. It's hard to believe he turned out that way after being raised by Narcissa & Lucius. I can understand why he would be Bi-sexual with that parentage though. It seems that he is a good friens to have when you need him.

Author's Response: Thanks, Trickie Woo! Albus always meddles, it's one thing I like about him. I don't think parentage has anything to do with bisexuality, heterosexuality or homosexuality really. And I can't see either Narcissa nor Lucius being parents in the true sense of the word. I see them were as leaving him with house-elves or the Wizarding world equivalent of a governess and pulling him out when he's interesting, i.e. old enough to understand the prejudice they want to raise them in. But he really is a good friend to Severus and vice versa.

Trickie Woo 2005.03.19 - 08:31PM 17: Honor and Remembrance Signed
Good description of the final battle. The whole situation with Percy Weasley is very sad. He was always such a pain in the books but his family loved him. I hope someone will make a drawing of Patricia in her ball gown and robes, I'd love to see it.

Author's Response: Thank you, Trickie Woo! Percy was sad. I felt really sorry for Arthur and Molly. I wish someone would make a drawing of Tricia too. But even my stick figures look funny.

Trickie Woo 2005.03.19 - 07:09PM 16: Dwelling on Dreams Signed
I read this chapter before bed last night. I enjoyed the scene in the Slytherine dorm, good fantasy sex and Peeves' dirty limerick was great. I sent you something via email I know you will enjoy. Let me know how you like it.

Author's Response: I finally got it today and thank you Trickie Woo. I hope Playwitch stays around for a good long time. I'm in Yahoo groups with several of the creators so I saw it when it first came out and they publicized it. They are some wonderfully creative women!

Trickie Woo 2005.03.19 - 02:20AM 15: Define Normal Signed
I've been reading Pink's comments on this chapter. I think your Snape is the biggest sex god I've come across. Tell me, does he have much in common with John Holmes? I think you could do a great story on how Carol and Beau met and fell in love, they are great characters.

Author's Response: Trickie Woo, thank you so much! John Holmes? Let's just say that it is the motion of the potion that makes the magic. But Snape's stirring stick is not lacking. :-) Pink wants the story on George and Mary and you'd like the story on Carol and Beau. I think that means I've created a pretty decent world here. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Trickie Woo 2005.03.19 - 12:32AM 14: A House is a Big Thing to Drop or Better Aim for the Ego Signed
You have some very good friends who care about you very much at Snycophant Hex, I'm very glad. I enjoyed this chapter, when the dressers appeared i kept imagining Trinny & Susannah from the BBC's "What Not to Wear" and what they could do with both Patricia and Snape. As I said before I don't like politics, but this was good. My politics are sexist, men don't come with a brain as standard equipment in other words. She did the kind of job on Rumson that I'd like to do. Most of the time , in my mind, men are good for one thing, especially if they do it as well as Snape. I'm sure you know the old joke, "What is the definition of a man? A life support system for a penis." I wonder if Pink Corsair would appreciate that one? See why I try to keep away from politics?

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Trickie Woo! There are some excellent people here at SyncothantHex and I feel blessed to have them in my life. I've always heard the one says, "the good goddess gave man two heads but only enough blood to let one work at a time." :-) I'm sure pink will make an appearance and let us know his opinion. :-)

Trickie Woo 2005.03.18 - 11:46PM 13: Operation House-Drop Begins Signed
I don't like politics, so I've been bored when the last 2 chapters were centered on politics. I like it best When it's about Snape and his interactions with Patricia, her friends and relatives, and with his friends. And of course I like the sex. Just not the politics.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you've been bored, Trickie Woo. I've written a PWP here on Occlumency which you might find more to your liking because it doesn't have a plot, just sex. :-) It's called Revenge--A Dish Served Hot. I think it's probably more what you are looking for. Thanks for hanging in there!

phoenix 2005.03.18 - 10:27PM 20: Operation: Destiny Signed
Excellent, excellent, I love the plotting and scheming. I wonder how much Albus is involved in the scheme that Harry and Draco and the others are concocting. Now I really can't wait until the next installment, but I'll have to as I'm all caught up now...Great job on the sleazy American politician. One of my favorite stereotypes. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Phoenix! It's going to be interesting to see exactly who always scheming and how deep their involvement runs. :-) But you can't call the sleazy American politician a stereotype. It's far too true to be a stereotype. :-)

phoenix 2005.03.18 - 09:52PM 19: Alone Again, Unnaturally Signed
What a great chapter. I love the heartache you have shown Severus having. It's a shame that it took losing her for him to realize how he really felt...All the Slytherin scheming and talk of it is great, too. I especially loved the Headmasters conspiring....Please, don't take too long getting them back together, okay?

Author's Response: Thank you, Phoenix! We are all working as quickly as possible to get them back together. :-)

phoenix 2005.03.18 - 07:38PM 18: When Good Proposals Go Bad Signed
AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I knew it would be bad, the words were forboding in the summary and chapter title, but this bad??? Nope, never saw it coming. Excellent writing as it definitely evoked a great deal of emotion in me. I knew his inability to say he loved her would come back to bite him. Okay, the evil plot bunnies need to be tied up for a while so the good ones can come out a play again. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Phoenix! You always leave me the best reviews because you tell me what you like and the fact that it does make emotion! The evil plot bunnies will be going away soon... for a little while anyway. :-)

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