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Reviews for A Right Bastard

phoenix 2005.03.26 - 01:35PM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
Very nicely done. Nothing like a good bit of Albus meddling to get things going the right direction....I'm definitely interested in seeing how they react when they find out they've been duped...Oh, I also loved the level of frustration Severus was having at her inability to realize he had finally come to his senses. Probably a good thing he was tied to the chair. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Phoenix! I can promise you the next chapter will give you their reactions towards their friends. Snape's going to have to accept the fact that she does not blindly obey. :-)
~Lisa

Pigwidgeon 2005.03.26 - 09:53AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
That was awesome, Lisa! There were so many great lines; "She was a woman in a snit and he thought she looked beautiful." was one of my favs. Albus is such an overprotective mother hen, isn't he? But that's one of the things that makes him so endearing. Nice use of buttons at the end -- things have, indeed, come full circle :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Pigwidgeon! I like to think that Albus really does have the best in mind for everyone. I'm so glad you liked the buttons at the end. There still some ways to go. :-)
~Lisa

Sniv 2005.03.26 - 08:48AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
He didn’t want to make gurgling noises at her, so he tipped the chair back, balancing it on two legs, then let it drop forward. Ok sorry but I find that funny! “You don’t love me. It’s a potion.” Aw I love this shows that Snape's words are...gah how to explain it...Just ironic that it was his words that hurt her and now they can un-do it...I really like that! Albus always told him that might help him control his temper. Good old Albus lol! Slytherin won that round easily. lol oh yeah! Heartbeat. Pillows did not have a heart to beat. aw poor Tricia...(yes I love her too) Fantasy was fun until you allowed it to control your reality. Aw to true! "...I will never say ‘I love you’ as often as you deserve to hear it. I frown on public displays of affection. But I can tell you now, and under Veritaserum, that I love you and I shall love you until the day I die.” *starts to celebrate* “Will you be my Roger?” LOL *romantic music playing* Hagrid in a Speed-o. Dumbledore and anybody. Dumbledore by himself. Aberforth and his goats. Gah mental images - gah they wont go away now! And the bunnies are at it huh? LMAO! Wonderful and fantastic update! *hugs the story* Lovely A/N made me laugh! :) ...So if one wants Snape to admit his love one needs: a chair, rope and a plain room...interesting ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sniv! I am so happy you found so much to like in this chapter and I'm sorry about the mental images. :-) I'm sure a chair, a rope, a whip, and a gun would have made it easier to get Snape to admit his feelings. :-)
~Lisa

looneyluna 2005.03.26 - 07:52AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
Giggle! Why do I have the feeling that Carol is the one who tied up Severus? Was Carol even there? Pleaes tell me we aren't nearing the end. They're back together, but there is still so much to write. Right? I know I've told you this before, but I adore your style and flow of writing. Tricia is quite a creation. She' vulnerable yet strong. She'd have to be in order to deal with Snape. Good job! (Pet's the bunnies) Happy Easter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, looneyluna! You're absolutely right about Carol. She told Hermione bit she would make sure Severus was not in a position to hurt Tricia. You'll find out more about that next chapter. Yes, there is still more to this story! You can always tell me you adore my style and flow of writing, but I have to give credit to Karina. She makes things sound better. I'm so glad you don't think Tricia is a MarySue! She needs to be strong enough to stand up to them, yet not so strong he doesn't feel threatened. The bunnies love you!
~Lisa

SPK 2005.03.26 - 05:37AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
That was excellent. A wonderful reunion. The way he bared himself to her emotionally was so touching for a character like him.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, S. K.! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and didn't think he was too out of character. I was worried about that.
~Lisa

Obadiah Slope 2005.03.26 - 05:31AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
A big 'hoorah!' - I'm so pleased they're back together. The bit when Severus told Tricia about his father was so moving. It's the glimpses into his past that really touch me. Wonderfully written - and, as ususal, I cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Obadiah! I always figured Snape had one of the worst childhoods ever not recorded. :-) I am just so glad you enjoyed it!
~Lisa

Trickie Woo 2005.03.26 - 04:27AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
I have another question to add to the list. When is the wedding? I'm so glad that the wait for an update is finally over. Now when they find out what really happened what are they going to do to all those people who are near and dear to them? I am going to miss this story when it inevitably comes to an end, and it looks like that will be soon. I hope you are writing a sequel or a new Snape/OFC story that will fill the gap.

Author's Response: Thank you, Trickie Woo! All of your questions should be answered next chapter. But don't count on the story being over yet. There are still three more story arcs to cover. Plus, the sequel is starting to form itself in my mind as well as a new Snape/OFCs story tentatively entitled "The Defense Professor's Wife". But we still have miles to go on this one!
~Lisa

SPK 2005.03.25 - 12:47AM 20: Operation: Destiny Signed
Great buildup to the reunion. I can't wait to see what happens! S.K.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, S. K. I am almost through with chapter 21!
~Lisa

potionmistress60 2005.03.24 - 11:41PM 20: Operation: Destiny Signed
Working on the reunion, hmmm? Reading about all this plotting and planning has got me craving lemon drops. Heh! Heh! Bless that ol' Albus, for his meddl'n ways. Damn right - Severus better NOT bollix it up again!

Author's Response: Thank you, Deb! Yes, I am working on the reunion and I can't promise you lemon drops, but there will be lemons. :-) I don't think Severus will bollix it up again.
~Lisa

Trickie Woo 2005.03.23 - 12:54AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
I've just re-read this chapter and i noticed she has a little Bridget Jones in her, with her 'note to self'. Mark Darcy and Severus Snape are my current 2 favorite fictional characters.

Author's Response: She has a little Bridget Jones in this chapter and a big Slytherin in her. :-)
~Lisa

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