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redvelvetcanopy 2005.04.15 - 10:07AM 6: Put Your Wand in the Box or the Chapter Where Plot Elements are Added--Finally Signed
Slytherin comes through as he is snooping through her house--very in character for him. I also really like your portrayal of the US wizarding world and the differences between that and the Euro world. They make a lot of sense. Sigh, Sirius is slipping away.... BTW, you are close to me--I live near Dayton!

Author's Response: Thank you, rvc! I thought very hard about the US Wizarding world, so I'm glad you like that part! I'm sorry about Sirius. :-) and hello Ohio!

redvelvetcanopy 2005.04.15 - 10:05AM 5: Who Is Lynne Fields and Why is Severus Saying Such Bad Things About Her? Signed
I love the plot that is developing. SS feeling like he is falling for her, yet doubting himself. All the changes he made as per AD's suggestion, very funny interplay between the two of them. And all her struggles as she disentangled herself from her exhusbands. I really like Harry's role as mature Auror--I often imagine what his future will be like and this is a good possibility that you are exploring.

Author's Response: Thank you, rvc! I think once the war's over, there will be some growing up. In fact, I hope Harry has grown up in book 6. :-) I'm so glad you're enjoying this!

redvelvetcanopy 2005.04.15 - 10:03AM 4: Why Southern Women Don't Drink (and Why British Men Think They Should) Signed

Author's Response: Thank you!

redvelvetcanopy 2005.04.14 - 09:26PM 3: The Chapter That is Character Heavy But Lemon Light Signed
rvc here--loved it when Tricia got drunk and used "Hominy" as HG's name. I chuckled hard on that one. I also had never thought to pair RL with HG, but it fits quite well. Dumbledore's meddling was portrayed perfectly, as was Severus' somewhat softened exasperation with him. I am so glad I found this story!! Unfortunately, it is feeding this terrible case of Snape-aphilia I am bothered with at the moment. I am struggling so hard to stay with Sirius...oh dear, you might do him in!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, rvc! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Snapitis is easily cured by reading more Snape stories! And there's no truth to the rumor that I did Sirius in... I have an alibi. I wasn't anywhere near the Department of Mysteries that night. :-)

redvelvetcanopy 2005.04.14 - 12:19AM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
I loved how you replayed the previous scene from his point of view. That was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you, Tricia! I'm glad you liked that chapter, because it was one of my favorites to write. :-)

redvelvetcanopy 2005.04.14 - 12:09AM 1: So Many Buttons, So Little Time Signed
Whew, I am sweaty and breathless. That was fabulous, hope you won, but don't really care. ;) No really, I hope you did. I wonder if my husband every uses Hagrid in a speed-o?? Brilliant. I am new to this site (just on MNet previously) and this was exactly the thing I was looking for. I hope to get to the other chapters too! BTW, secret pleasure--I go by Tricia in real life.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tricia! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Actually, I did win. :-) I'm so glad you came over from Mugglenet! Welcome!

EllieK 2005.04.11 - 12:54AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
*mops forehead with towel* Ok, it is most definitely hot in here!

It crossed his mind that their future offspring might end up in Gryffindor one day. That thought tasted as foul as the gag between his teeth. There was just something about those lines that caused me to go into a giggling fit. Now, here is a classic IC Snape thought: He had forgotten Triciaís propensity for insubordination. Insubordination? Good god, will he ever snap out of being such a sodding Slytherin? (I hope not.)

I'm glad that these two finally got back together. It was painful to read the breakup, but I think they will reqach a new place in their relationship now. Hey, when is Angie gonna get back together with Tricia? I am looking forward to that reunion as much as the Tricia/Severus reunion.

I'm glad the bunnies are healthy and breeding. Will you ever forgive me? Hell, if Tricia can forgive Snape, miracles can happen.

Author's Response: Now I can finish up the next chapter because I've heard from you, Ellie. :-) He does have a problem with her refusing to mindlessly obey. He's gotta get over that. :-) Angie will be coming up in a later chapter. If I can forgive you for your political leanings, I can forgive you for anything. :-)

matf 2005.04.03 - 08:36PM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
I can't decide whether to cheer or to cry -- he did it! He did it! And by himself! He figured out that he has to open up to her and let her in! And she's finally getting the happy ending she deserves! This is one of the most satisfying (and funny) things I've read in a while. Thank you so much for showing a Severus who reminds me of why I love my husband so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, matf! I am so glad you liked that chapter and I think you and your husband must be an adorable couple! But were still a ways from the ending!

potionmistress60 2005.04.02 - 02:06AM 21: Destiny Rules Signed
Woo! Hoo! The make-up sex I was waiting for! You made my day...not to mention Severus and Trisha's too. I love how Severus was trying to keep focused. "Hagrid in a speedo". LOL! Now where have I heard that one before? Hope he didn't have it on backwards. (Snicker)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, potionmistress60. You love his focusing, even if it's not on you. :-) and who can tell if a Speedo is backwards on Hagrid were not? I think it would still look like a rubber band around an egg. :-)

Nursegirl 2005.03.29 - 02:56AM 2: Needed: A Plan. A Plot. A Scheme. A Ploy. A Ruse. Signed
There is so much to like about this! I feel like you really got into his head and I'm hoping that is Tricia at the door. But it's getting late and I've got to get some sleep before I go in tomorrow. I really like your story.

Author's Response: Thank you again, Nurse girl! I'm so glad you feel that way (that I got to Severus' head). The plot bunnies shall dance for this! Get some rest, the story will be here tomorrow.

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