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phoenix 2005.05.06 - 08:51PM 23: Happy Engagement or Is That a Secret? Signed
Very well done. I love the way you are weaving the different parts of the plot together. It's not good that they now have two sets of enemies in America. And now my curiosity is definitely up over the prophecy and exactly what Albus is doing and why. YOu are giving just enough tidbits to keep me really interested....I can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Phoenix! Luckily, their enemies hate each other but that could change. Ah, the prophecy. They keep falling into Dumbledore's hands, don't they? Now that I'm getting feedback on this chapter, I will begin Chapter 24. It's silly, but I can't write the next chapter until I know people like this one.

SPK 2005.05.06 - 08:19PM 23: Happy Engagement or Is That a Secret? Signed
Tricia already knew Severus was the mastermind, I love it!! Great chapter. Especially liked the scene with Albus. It was a nice little reminder that underneath all that attitude, Severus has human vulnerabilities and he can't always disguise them from someone who knows him so well. S. K.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, SPK! I don't think Severus is going to fool her with much. I'm so glad you liked the scene with Albus! That's the one that worried me the most. Thank you!

Hobopixie2 2005.05.06 - 03:32PM 23: Happy Engagement or Is That a Secret? Signed
Auntie Grizelda?! You're an evil, evil woman. That song will be on my mind for days now! I can't wait to see where you go with all the plot lines (bunnies) you're juggling. Just when I think I sort of have the plot figured out you add another bunny. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Hobopixie2! I have to admit, I sang that song while I was finishing the chapter. :-) Do you remember the old Steve Martin routine about cat juggling? The bunnies are cute and they breed freely. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hope to keep you guessing until the end.

Nyx 2005.05.04 - 11:07AM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
FINALLY!!! ***happy dancing with the rabid bunnies*** great chapter. Now if only that Politican would get splinched life would be good. Great chapter. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Nyx! I'm so glad you liked it! If only more politicians would get splinched in real life, life would be good. :-)

pinkcorsair 2005.05.03 - 03:39AM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
YEA!!! I'm the 500 reviewer. I know this story will reach 1000, and I plan to be number that one to. Keep it up Lisa. Love you.......................P.S To LordSnape. BLOW ME!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, pink! I can't imagine this story reaching a thousand reviews, but then I never thought it would reach 500.
by the way, are you trying to pick up LordSnape? You're getting a bad habit of picking up people in my review threads. :-) I hope he doesn't live too far away.

LordSnape 2005.05.03 - 03:34AM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
How dare you speak to me that way, you dirty little Muggle. Like I, Severus Snape would ever take advise from a man named Pink. Save the advise for your boyfriend, you twinkle-toed puffer!

Author's Response: Now, LordSnape, don't get your knickers in a twist. Let's see, you've bashed Americans and you've bashed Muggles. If I were you, I would think twice before you showed up at my house expecting certain favors, if you know what I mean. You're not the only one with sharp teeth. :-)

pinkcorsair 2005.05.03 - 03:28AM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
You better pull your head out of your ass, LordSnape. If you think Tricia is just going stay in that dungeon and change diapers, your in for a hell of a shock. You better open your eyes before she shove that ring where the sun don't shine.

Author's Response: Now, now, pink. No fighting in the reviews thread. :-) LordSnape is entitled to his opinion no matter how wrong it is. :-)

LordSnape 2005.05.03 - 03:22AM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
I would never marry a swollen-headed Gryffindor, the hat was obviously mistaken. And that ridiculous American could have never of hide from me under Potter's cloak. I can smell a filthy Yank wizard from a mile away. As for PinkCorsair's question, of course she would live with me. She should be honored to stay home and raise my heirs. She's fiddle-faddle around long enough with that so called career of her own. It time she started acting like a real witch.

Author's Response: Okay, LordSnape. Tricia will act like a real witch and hex your bollocks off. :-) Thank you!

pinkcorsair 2005.05.03 - 02:48AM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
I've waited four months for him to give her that damn ring. I have to say that that was the best proposal a guy could dream of. Asking a girl to marry you, and she give you a blow-job in return. I almost cried................. We all knew that hat would say Gryffindor. I was hoping for Ravenclaw. Gryffindors are always so full of themselves................. So, what are they going to do to their kidnappers? Can Beau keep his big nosy trap shut?........................ I realy feel for Severus. Falling for a Kentucky women can be rough. The long distance relationship will be difficult to overcome. The question is who will live with who? Can he get Tricia to leave her family and friend to start a new life with him, or will he give up his career and move to states to be with her?

Author's Response: Thank you, pinkcorsair! Has it been for months? And I really think you're reading something I didn't write after he gave her the ring. :-) Of course she's Gryffindor! I wonder what has Beau was said? :-) And Tricia is from Virginia, though she was born in Georgia. That's a long story that may or may not make it into this story. Of course, they will stay at Hogwarts. Tricia is used to traveling, so that will be a problem. Remember, she's been in every Portkey authority except for Antarctica. So everyone will be happy... well, as I'm writing this, perhaps not. There's still a lot to come!

SPK 2005.05.02 - 08:15PM 22: With Friends Like These Signed
Another great chapter! Snape is being so Snape-like because he just can't bring himself to tell the whole truth, even to someone he loves. Just like in JKR's books, the man is his own worst enemy. I love how Tricia handled John Aubrey. Aubrey and Montgomery really have me worried. Hope something can be done about them before they cause irreversible damage. Looking forward to more! S. K.

Author's Response: Thank you, SPK! I don't think Snape will ever tell the whole truth about anything. :-) Especially if it makes him seem vulnerable. I can't really see anything about Aubrey and Montgomery, but they will be the next chapter and I think it might be resolved. If not the next chapter than the one after that. Thanks a lot!

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