Reviews for A Right Bastard
FJDS |
2007.03.31 - 11:58PM |
11: A Kitten’s Claws are Just as Sharp |
Anonymous |
From 10-24-2006 -- Your begging IS cute ;-) And as you prefer a 'love it' with an explanation: I love your plot development and your real people, how your portray the Patricia-Severus relationship, the mixture of love and insecurity, even though they are already together.
Still, I should prepare for my midterms, now.
Thanks LariLee!
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kittykat91419 |
2007.03.31 - 11:56PM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
Anonymous |
From 03-09-2007 -- Eep, I adore this story. This is such a wonderful story. I adore your dry humor (I've struggled to keep from laughing out loud in classes). I absolutely love Tricia, and Severus is quite realistic. Please continue the story, I'll beg if you want. *please?*
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rubyfey |
2007.03.31 - 11:53PM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
Anonymous |
From 02-07-2007 -- (sigh)
Definitely, MOST definitely, one of my favorite stories. I love the character development, the way you KEPT them in character, and I especially love the backstory (such as Tricia's muggle and wizarding parents and relatives). And I absolutely ADORE Beau! Thank you for writing a Southern US character that is actually both hot AND intelligent--no Tobacco Roads here, thank you very much! A true Southern gentleman...(just as Severus is, in all that "matters", a true English gentleman, I think, with his loyalty to the "right" causes---but then, I thought Rhett Butler was FAR more the gentleman than Ashley Wilkes, so there you have it).
At any rate, now the $64-dollar question: Have you abandoned this story? Yes, yes, I know you left it at an earth-shatteringly WONDERFUL point, but still I'd like to see you tie up all loose ends and show us how they got from here to where they were in your sequel-story when Patricia is pregnant. Please, oh pretty, pretty please---don't leave it here! Do tell us you'll finish it---and another update SOON, -- please?
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FJDS |
2007.03.31 - 11:52PM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
Anonymous |
From 10-27-2006 -- great story, larilee! I am really relieved that it worked; and only a bit worried about what lucius might be up to. I loved the way you resolved the deirdre-problem, and I'm looking forward to MORE!
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sahara18 |
2006.10.02 - 04:48PM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
Signed |
Hurry up and finish! I love how you've managed to write a snarky, bitter, solitary Snape in love. Very believable. And Tricia is also a very well written character, great development. I can't wait to read on! |
countrymouse |
2006.09.25 - 01:42AM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
Signed |
Lisa:
Your story is lovingly categorized, in my "Favorites" file, in the "WIP" folder, along with a number of other wonderful works. But there's another folder I have, to which I (sadly) consign beloved fics, when they've languished for momths (or a year) without update. It's my "Abandoned Fics" file. I really, really DON'T want to see this lovely fic go into that file. The characters you've created---Patricia, her paresnts, Beau, her friends-closer-than-sisters, --- they are all so very well fleshed-out, they are so REAL, and I find myself wondering whatever happened to them.
You've created too wonderful a world here, to just let it die. Please, please---won't you continue this fantatic tale?
Love,
Countrymouse |
Ewa |
2006.09.18 - 04:09AM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
Signed |
Hello! I have just read all your chapters and I really love it! Although I prefer when the background of the storyis in UK.. maybe you can write more at Hogwards? please let me know when you plan to post chapter 28, thanks! |
LunaSnape |
2006.08.29 - 12:16PM |
27: Amor Vincit Omnia |
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No need to beg darlin', I freely give my review. Amazing chappy. Give the bunnies an extra helping tonight on me! *LS* |
amygdalaj |
2006.08.21 - 09:07PM |
3: The Chapter That is Character Heavy But Lemon Light |
Signed |
great story so far! I like how it started out lemony and is getting more and more...drama! |
amygdalaj |
2006.08.21 - 08:38PM |
3: The Chapter That is Character Heavy But Lemon Light |
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great story so far! I like how it started out lemony and is getting more and more...drama! |
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