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Reviews for Un Livre des Herbes Foncées, A Dark Herbal

sinaz0211 2005.10.17 - 10:31PM 8: Night Cap Signed
"If you wanted to use a poison to induce a victim to experience certain feelings or visions..." seems a perfect fit to the HBP Horcrux scene with DD and Harry in the cave. I like the "flavored with magic" description, it's just right. Your Snape is dangerously venemous and multi-faceted, as I've imagined him (with more oomph than in the books). Bravo! His hands thrumming and closing when he becomes otherwise occupied is also nice. Ms. Knight is definately a sensitive on overload right now. It's surprising her parents saw no magical ability in her; it's there albiet non-traditional. Hmm...is there such as thing as non-traditional magic? I'm loving this, please don't abandon your readers!

sinaz0211 2005.10.17 - 08:13PM 4: Nightshade Signed
Wow. That's a powerful Snape. I liked the thrumming vibration during dinner, but this chapter was even better. Of course, your Potions Master would use his mind skills against this Muggle woman; but the fact that he wished to do so tells us something also, eh? I hope you have not abandoned this story, as other reviews have said. AU, who *cares* ? Please continue.

macropis 2005.10.13 - 11:31AM 12: Doll's Eyes Signed
I have to concur with vitriol and skyeyel. This is a truly quality piece of writing that has attracted quite a crowd of fans wating for an update. I check this fic weekly, hoping for an update. It is amazing.

Ceridwyn Penn 2005.10.01 - 11:14AM 1: Thornapple Signed
Hello, there. Please allow me to join the voices that wish you to continue (again). I am particuarly afraid that Half-Blood Prince might have set you back somehow, but please ... it doesn't matter. I don't care how far it diverges from canon, A Dark Herbal is far too good to languish and fade away. The story itself knows that. Everytime I come back to check for an update, it sucks me in. Your words are too vivid and powerful to release me and I don't want them to. I'm sure the rest of your life is busy, and if it takes you 3 years to update, it would be worth the wait, but just don't give it up forever. Pretty, pretty please.

skyeyed 2005.09.21 - 12:16AM 12: Doll's Eyes Signed
This story is better written than 80% of the books I have bought in the past year and that is truly saying something. I knew this story was different the moment I started reading. When, in the first paragraph you are reminded of Bradbury's power of description at the beginning of Something Wicked This Way Comes, you know you are in for a treat. This story is truly fantastic. I've loved every moment of reading it and I would love for it to continue.

vitriol 2005.09.18 - 03:34PM 12: Doll's Eyes Signed
TSH9S, i would do just about anything to know if you plan to finish your irresistible work. Everything else I've read on Occlumency pales in comparison to it. I love the complexity of your characters and the mastery you have over the English language-- the words you use are so very effective and delightful! I am on edge-- Davina's dreams are incredibly haunting to me-- i read them over and over, strongly drawn the many riddles they pose. And how true-- black is death, and white is the womb. Bone and mud in between. So aptly put! This is a masterpiece to be savored-- incredibly breathtaking. Character-worthy dialogue. I find myself running a gamut of emotions when i read it: heart-pounding fear, acute longing, breathless dread, enormous suspense, unshakable excitement. You are a tremendous writer! Pleasepleaseplease do continue, i shall be checking everyday-- Wickedly, vitriol. Rating: 10+++++

vitriol 2005.09.18 - 03:04AM 12: Doll's Eyes Anonymous
TSH9S, I *ache* for more... this is by far the most intriguingly addictive Snape and OC I have come across. Do please continue to weave your enchantingly wicked tale. Your writing is absolutely delectable-- such a decadent pleasure to read. I pray you continue... it is absolutely haunting... "a dead light"... ...I'd happily pay to read your work. All the Best to You. Please let us know if you plan to continue.

Hell Hath No Fury 2005.08.30 - 10:13AM 12: Doll's Eyes Signed
Please don't take forever to update!!! I am really really really really loving LOVING this story... please... It's not going to be a happy ending between them is it? *shoulders droop* I hope I am wrong in this suspicion.

Hell Hath No Fury 2005.08.30 - 09:39AM 11: Black Hellebore Signed
Fear? What is he afraid of? I love the way you write... the twisting of words to describe things... Vesuvian rage... Brilliant!!!!

Hell Hath No Fury 2005.08.30 - 08:59AM 9: Wormwood Signed
Death?!?!? But she can't.. Snape... He... That bitch... shouldn't?... *deep breath* Ignore my spluttering... but she can't die!!!

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