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| Snapesforte | 2005.05.26 - 04:43AM | 67: Chapter Sixty-seven: Trapped | Signed |
| I had to go back a couple of chapters, and read again, to familiarise myself with the events. Brilliant chapter - I especially like the glimpses into Snape's mind, I think he would feel trapped, and it is interesting to see that they both feel the same way (him and Sarah), without really realising it. I feel quite anxious about Snape now, the tension levels are even worse than they were during the torture scene, because now they're subtler and more cunning. And Sarah's dream has me on tenterhooks, as well. Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you're reading this story...that's wonderful! And Snape does have some things happening in his life and career that could be very difficult for him to deal with... | |||
| LariLee | 2005.05.25 - 11:51PM | 67: Chapter Sixty-seven: Trapped | Signed |
| Poor Snape! I can understand his emptiness, his depression. And because I haven't said it lately, I really do not like Silas. I wonder what the Order is going to make of Sarah. And I wonder what will happen the next time she and Snape meet. I'm glad you're back! ~Lisa | |||
| Apothecaria | 2005.05.25 - 06:54PM | 67: Chapter Sixty-seven: Trapped | Signed |
| Yay!! Good to see you back. Nice job of showing Severus' post-discovery state of mind. And I like how the teachers reflect their personalities when they show up to help him repair his classroom: Flitwick is congenial, Sprout is briskly friendly, McGonagall furtively helps him, and Silas tries to snoop. | |||
| Aiden | 2005.05.25 - 11:55AM | 67: Chapter Sixty-seven: Trapped | Signed |
| I am so happy to see this story updated. I was starting to get worried . . .. Anyway, this chapter was well worth waiting for. You've done a fantastic job of depicting Snape's despair after his exposure as a spy. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I'm trying to update as soon as possible, and should have more soon. :) | |||
| Rickfan37 | 2005.05.25 - 08:04AM | 61: Chapter Sixty-one: Two Cups of Tea. | Signed |
| An absolutely wonderful chapter! The turnip episode has had me laughing out loud, and it is SO in keeping with the HP-verse that JKR herself could have written it. As for the more serious section that follows, I loved it. The way Sarah's emotions are able to come to the fore more and more now she no longer needs to use the painstone (which BTW is a brilliant idea and you've obviously thought it all through) and the s...l...o...w... way Severus is becoming more and more keen on her are both very well done. However, I now have only 6 more chapters to read until I have caught up...so without further ado... OMG THIS ROCKZ! !!!!!!111!! WRITE MORE!!!ELENTYONE!11!! | |||
| Rickfan37 | 2005.05.20 - 05:21AM | 32: Chapter Thirty-two: A Conference at Myrtle's. | Signed |
| I started it last week, same time as I started my re-read of OOTP, and the first thing that struck me was how easily I confused the two opening chapters in my head. I love the way you write those early chapters, they're so much like JKR's style. I like your Snape. So far, he seems very IC. Ditto the other canon characters. Sarah Tanner is terrific. The slow revelation of what is wrong with her is masterfully done. I had no idea why she was so stiff and flat at first, except that it was some sort of disability caused by Snape (and, as I now know, Malfoy). I love the way she is so emotionless and controlled...I've decided it's because she is working so hard to control the pain and to get through each day that all her efforts are directed into that, and her behaviour reflects that effort. I'm very keen to see how she is going to change as SNape's counter potion starts to alleviate her condition. As for your other OC, the odious Marten, he's a triumph. I loathe the man, LOL! | |||
| Are You Dead Yet | 2005.05.11 - 01:47AM | 26: Chapter Twenty-six: It's Called Research. | Signed |
| Not too shabby. A little too heavy in the anticipation stages, but otherwise, a quite good piece. Author's Response: Heh...I do agree. I spent a little too much time on the backstory. If I were to do it all over again, I think I would eliminate the Harry POV entirely and just concentrate on Sarah and Severus. Thanks for the comment! | |||
| krazykay | 2005.04.22 - 11:48AM | 66: Chapter Sixty-six: Waking | Signed |
| I adore ure story. like the summary says it's truly unique. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed before but I ahve been reading this story on fanfictionnet and I am not able to reveiw there for some reason. Anyway just wanted to say i love your story and hope you continue with it. Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you think it's unique. I am trying to continue as quickly as I can! :) | |||
| sophierom | 2005.04.10 - 12:10PM | 58: Chapter Fifty-eight: An Order Meeting | Signed |
| Interesting that Severus would vote no because Fleur has connections to Lucius when his own connections to Lucius keep him walking the fence (if not for the Order, which he serves sincerely, then with Sarah in some ways). Wanted to hex Silas (would have been difficult as he's not real and I'm a muggle, but you know...). Good chapter. Like the Severus and Remus interaction at the end. | |||
| sophierom | 2005.04.10 - 11:59AM | 57: Chapter Fifty-seven: Trust. | Signed |
| Hi, Valis! I'm back again! I know, I know, I'm completely unreliable. Anyway, your story is not unreliable ... (yes, bad segue, I know :-D). Still quite good! Hmm, very interesting relationship between Severus and Narcissa. Your ability to draw interesting, complex characters continues to amaze me. Narcissa could come off as a complete bitch, but you manage to make her feel quite real and needy (if also Slytherin and sneaky and yes, bitchy). Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you liked the characterization of Narcissa...she was particularly elusive, considering that we had so little canon information about her at the time. I'm so glad you're still following the story! | |||
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