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Reviews for A Portrait of the Potions Master as a Young Man

maudite 2004.12.28 - 10:04PM 10: Chapter 9: The Whomping Willow Anonymous
Marvelous!

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you think so! :)

LariLee 2004.10.31 - 09:50PM 10: Chapter 9: The Whomping Willow Anonymous
Excellent job! And by leaving open questions that Severus would have, you've given his viewpoint perfectly! ~Lisa

rambkowalczyk 2004.10.21 - 09:13AM 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of O.W.L.s Anonymous
Not only is Snape's character well written, but so is Jane's. It's a "ship" that's believable. It makes me dread what we know will happen.

rambkowalczyk 2004.10.21 - 09:02AM 8: Chapter 7: The Eagle and the Serpent Anonymous
good foreshadowing

rambkowalczyk 2004.10.21 - 08:52AM 7: Chapter 6: Of Dragons and Dungbombs Anonymous
Excellant chapter. Dumbledore's character is just like he should be. Gives a good reason why Snape has always respected Dumbledore (and McGonnagall as well). I was originally going to nitpick that according to book 5 Dumbledore is the only one who gets the final say whether someone is educated at Hogwarts or not. Then it occured to me that Dumbledore may not have had this right when he started his job.

rambkowalczyk 2004.10.21 - 08:33AM 6: Chapter 5: To Quidditch or Not to Quidditch Anonymous
If you keep writing scenes like what happened in the Swizzle household I swear I'm going to have to ... start bringing a box of kleenix with me to my computer. I love your interpretation of the scene where he is trying to mount a broom and a girl is laughing.

rambkowalczyk 2004.10.21 - 08:13AM 5: Chapter 4: Snivellus Anonymous
good details about his friends. The fact that Malfoy would blackmail Snape is an idea that fits well. The scene with McGonnagall was touching.

rambkowalczyk 2004.10.21 - 07:57AM 4: Chapter 3: At Borgin and Burkes Anonymous
I like that you are sticking to canon. I had forgotten that Dumbledore only became headmaster just before Snape's class came in. Interesting foreshadowing of why Snape chose to be a Death Eater later on in life.

LariLee 2004.10.20 - 04:53PM 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of O.W.L.s Anonymous
You make it so difficult for me to dream about what makes Severus tick because you've explained it all so well and kept it all in canon. Beyond excellence. ~Lisa

LariLee 2004.10.20 - 04:53PM 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of O.W.L.s Anonymous
You make it so difficult for me to dream about what makes Severus tick because you've explained it all so well and kept it all in canon. Beyond excellence. ~Lisa

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