Reviews for A Portrait of the Potions Master as a Young Man
maudite |
2004.12.28 - 10:04PM |
10: Chapter 9: The Whomping Willow |
Anonymous |
Marvelous!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you think so! :) |
LariLee |
2004.10.31 - 09:50PM |
10: Chapter 9: The Whomping Willow |
Anonymous |
Excellent job! And by leaving open questions that Severus would have, you've given his viewpoint perfectly!
~Lisa |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.21 - 09:13AM |
9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of O.W.L.s |
Anonymous |
Not only is Snape's character well written, but so is Jane's. It's a "ship" that's believable. It makes me dread what we know will happen. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.21 - 09:02AM |
8: Chapter 7: The Eagle and the Serpent |
Anonymous |
good foreshadowing |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.21 - 08:52AM |
7: Chapter 6: Of Dragons and Dungbombs |
Anonymous |
Excellant chapter. Dumbledore's character is just like he should be. Gives a good reason why Snape has always respected Dumbledore (and McGonnagall as well). I was originally going to nitpick that according to book 5 Dumbledore is the only one who gets the final say whether someone is educated at Hogwarts or not. Then it occured to me that Dumbledore may not have had this right when he started his job. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.21 - 08:33AM |
6: Chapter 5: To Quidditch or Not to Quidditch |
Anonymous |
If you keep writing scenes like what happened in the Swizzle household I swear I'm going to have to ... start bringing a box of kleenix with me to my computer.
I love your interpretation of the scene where he is trying to mount a broom and a girl is laughing. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.21 - 08:13AM |
5: Chapter 4: Snivellus |
Anonymous |
good details about his friends. The fact that Malfoy would blackmail Snape is an idea that fits well. The scene with McGonnagall was touching. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.21 - 07:57AM |
4: Chapter 3: At Borgin and Burkes |
Anonymous |
I like that you are sticking to canon. I had forgotten that Dumbledore only became headmaster just before Snape's class came in. Interesting foreshadowing of why Snape chose to be a Death Eater later on in life. |
LariLee |
2004.10.20 - 04:53PM |
9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of O.W.L.s |
Anonymous |
You make it so difficult for me to dream about what makes Severus tick because you've explained it all so well and kept it all in canon. Beyond excellence.
~Lisa |
LariLee |
2004.10.20 - 04:53PM |
9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of O.W.L.s |
Anonymous |
You make it so difficult for me to dream about what makes Severus tick because you've explained it all so well and kept it all in canon. Beyond excellence.
~Lisa |
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