Reviews for Bittersweet
cmwinters |
2007.05.17 - 02:12AM |
9: Chapter 9: Sacrifices and Opportunities |
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Don't feel bad - I "play" chess the same way. When people ask me "do you know how to play chess" I always answer "I know how to move the pieces". For someone who can actually play, they understand perfectly.
I've seen my husband mate people in five moves. I won't even sit across the table from him. |
MimiManderly |
2006.08.05 - 05:21PM |
16: Chapter 16: Unusual and Unexpected |
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Note: Turkey is a REALLY bad choice for a romantic meal. It contains L-Tryptophan, which is a soporific. The very last thing I'd want to do after having dinner with Snape would be sleep! ;) |
MimiManderly |
2006.08.04 - 11:32PM |
18: Chapter 18: Redemption |
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Yes! YES! God, YES!!! *Lights up a cigarette, even though doesn't smoke* That was amazing! Hope it was good for you, too! |
NoxSomnium |
2006.06.20 - 07:20PM |
2: Chapter 2: Snape's massacre |
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I do so completely love this chapter. It's brilliant. I've read it at least nine times. I know breakdowns are sad but this one is utterly entrancing in your words. |
Melpomene Erato |
2006.06.15 - 04:17PM |
42: Chapter 42: A New Day |
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May I surmise that the writer is also wiccan? ;-)
Author's Response: You might, but you'd be wrong ;) I based Autumn off a combination of friends who are, though. |
Melpomene Erato |
2006.06.13 - 02:12PM |
24: Chapter 24: Wrong |
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Actually, given her answer, I think he was right to walk out. "Because fidelity to her memory won't bring her back" and "you know wine" seem pretty lame exvuses to choose a partner.
But there must be a twin "joy of life" that he sees in Autum that his former lover had. The (valid) question remains: why did she choose him?
Author's Response: They are pretty lame excuses, but then, Autumn isn't really ready to face the truth. Thanks for commenting. |
cinnamon_luvr |
2006.05.07 - 09:09PM |
30: Chapter 30: Explaining One's Actions |
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Loved the potion's class scene! That was a very original idea to show the consequences- I can't think of any other fic that does that. And still loving the story! Another nit-pick though- I find that in fanon Snape's always giving points to Slyth whereas he's never given one point to anyone (Slyth or otherwise) throughout all of the books. I think the only compliment he gave in class was to Draco in the very first class- only one compliment ever. I kind of see him as the sort of 'negative' reinforcement kind of guy. :) Why compliment? You're supposed to make it perfect- anything else is making a mistake. :) |
cinnamon_luvr |
2006.05.07 - 02:30PM |
12: Chapter 12: What if and what was |
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Wow. I really love your story! (And your other stories too- just haven't gotten around to reviewing them yet :) ) I just had to nit-pick on a point though. I believe the British word used for underwear is 'pants'. When he was dangling upside you could see his legs (they were called pallid etc. in the book weren't they?), so he wasn't wearing trousers (not pants the north-american word). So taking off his 'pants' (ie. underwear in America) would have left him completely bare, and god, that would have been sooooo embarassing. I thought the same thing as you (I'm Canadian) until a Brit pointed it out. Anyhoo, love the story! |
NoxSomnium |
2006.02.12 - 05:49PM |
39: Chapter 39: The Order Loses its Spy |
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If I didn't know there was a sequel, I would be very upset with you right now. Even though I know there is a sequel which happens in the future which requires that the main character not be dead since after all it's really difficult to write an extremely long fic when your main character is not a ghost and dead never the less I still spent most of the last two chapters thinking "he's not dead, he really isn't he can't be, no, he isn't." etc... over and over. Wow you're good. |
seventonks |
2006.01.29 - 04:08PM |
41: Chapter 41: Lullaby |
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*faints* i have never read a better chapter. marvelous!!!!! |
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