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Reviews for The Slytherclaw Sisters

kittymipie 2011.06.02 - 10:34PM 1: The Slytherclaw Sisters Signed
ok, i like it, the thing about granger& dobby tho cracked me up ;) u should write more like this, it's very good!

Jong_Kahn 2010.10.13 - 06:42AM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
My dear, you...are...FABULOUS. Ordinarily I'm not too crazy about OCs in fanfiction. But your "Slytherclaw Sisters" are the exception that proves the rule. If everyone could write characters like these, there would never be a problem! First off, I loved the way you eliminated Hermione as a threat: Dobby! Unbelievable--and yet it was (believable, in its own goofy way)! Guernica Smythe and Madelyne Belaire are two perfectly matched and complimentary women. You made them both highly individualistic, yet believable. You made their interactions with Snape believable. You made your Snape--and his interactions with them--believable. In short, this is one hell of a story, and I'm glad I discovered it--and you. I repeat: FABULOUS, baby! You and this storyare both: WOW! Now to read your other stuff!

TheBlackMaddness 2006.09.08 - 04:47PM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
I really enjoyed it, but I would have liked to have seen more of the Snape/Mad arc to ease us into the ending. It was just a little to abrupt for my taste.

Author's Response: Ah, the thing was, there was a word count requirement for this fic. To expand upon any part of it overmuch would have disqualified me by making the story too long. But oh well, even with any story, no matter how beloved, there's always something that could be better...*sigh!*

Author's Response: Ah, the thing was, there was a word count requirement for this fic. To expand upon any part of it overmuch would have disqualified me by making the story too long. But oh well, even with any story, no matter how beloved, there's always something that could be better...*sigh!*

Author's Response: Ah, the thing was, there was a word count requirement for this fic. To expand upon any part of it overmuch would have disqualified me by making the story too long. But oh well, even with any story, no matter how beloved, there's always something that could be better...*sigh!*

beckthther 2006.07.23 - 07:40AM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
OOOOOHHH.... NOW I get it. You wrote that in 3 days?? Puh-lease slap me if I sounded critical!!! :) For 3 days worth of a story that actually was good! Oh yeah I almost choked when I read the reference to the young blonde man in drag with the drawling voice!! HIL-Larious!

Author's Response: No worries! Yes, I wrote this in about four or five days, off and on, in between composing KEC chapters. It really was just a fun little lark, but I do think it has a few inspired moments here and there. ("Believe me, Mad, L.A. is full of people who have moved here and completely forgotten where they came from." "You just wanted to see if I was as much of a hack as you imagined I was.") And yes - I found the idea of Draco turning into a craven submissive fetishist longing for an authoritative female lover (and the touch of the whip) to be...kinda hot. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it even a little! Cheers!

beckthther 2006.07.20 - 03:35AM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
Hmmmmm.... compared to KEC, this seems like a teens first attempt. Not to say it isn't good, just to say it pales in comparison. You have improved immensly, good work. XO Beck

Author's Response: Ah, it's not really fair to compare a bit of airy fluff like "Slytherclaw..." to KEC, any more than you can compare a pretty little cottage to a HUGE sprawling royal castle. This fic is meant to be a bit of purely escapist erotic fantasy, and was written in response to a challenge in just a few days. I rarely (if ever) write challengefics, because most of the time I think the required elements of challenges are kind of trite and ho-hum. But this story did allow me to poke fun at a few of the usual Snapefic cliches, like AlwaysRomanticallyDominant!Snape (and I'll admit it, the idea of Submissive!Draco is disturbingly hot to me. Most people played the "Draco Malfoy in drag" requirement of the challenge for ridiculous comedy, whereas when I thought of a pale androgynous blond boy-man in women's clothing...um...well.) Anyway, I hope "Keep Me in the Dark," another short erotic piece, but without so much of a light, frothy tone as SS, is a little more to your taste.

MollysSister 2006.05.15 - 12:25AM 1: The Slytherclaw Sisters Signed
Hermione left him for Dobby!!! Ewwww that is squicky and completely hilarious as well. I am enjoying your OC very much. I seem to prefer Madalyn I hope there will be more of her in part 2?

Author's Response: The challenge required me to have Hermione and Snape start out together, and then break up on New Year's Eve, and one of the options was house elf sex...well, it just kind of went from there. And yes, there is definitely more of Madelyne in Part 2! There's a happy ending for all in this one. :-D

EXECUTR 2006.02.27 - 08:26PM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
Fun story. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you, I had a ball writing this one! :-D

spitfirecrackre 2005.08.07 - 05:29AM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
This is the first in these challenges that I've read(I know! What HAVE I been waiting for? - I suppose the word 'Mary Sue' just scared the hell outta me what with all those stupid, insipid, I-haven't-the-words-enough ficI had to trawl through in search of gems over at ff.net. Of course this was before I made my way to sycophant hex, so...

*ahem*

Back to the fic: This is quite the fun accompaniment to a lazy weekend(which is really supposed to be work-filled.. but well procrastination took over, you see. *waves hand languidly*)

Thanks and I promise that when I have the time, I'll read 'Knight' quicker than you than you can say, "OMG , why do the holidays have to in such a vile time period!"

Author's Response: Yes, I sympathize, generally the words "Mary Sue" scare the hell out of me too - if I hadn't gotten a wonderful idea for this fic practically from the first, I never would have undertaken it. And yes, I completely agree that much of ff.net is too terrifying for words! Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you like KEC too!


pomegranate heart 2005.08.04 - 04:41AM 2: The Slytherclaw Sisters, Continued Signed
elegant and sexy as usual ms. guernica. you always weave the hp perfectly with real world kink and innuendo. thanks for allowing snape et al a visit! xoxo pomegranate p.s. where's the follow up with "ferret" and Guernica? that could be intensely hot. young luscious submissive draco..... oh my.

Author's Response: Thanks, gorgeous! Yep, I count too many teachers among my close friends to even imagine that they aren't just as kinky, sexual, and experimental as the next guy when their students aren't around. Also, yes, I have thought of writing a sequel featuring Guernica!Sue doing all sorts of wild, kinky, delectable things to her little submissive boy (I'll admit I've even sketched a few scenes of it as a pure self-indulgence), but seeing as how Guernica!Sue is an open and overt self-insert character as per the requirements of the challenge, I'd need to put big fat warnings on it - **YES, the OC IS a shameless self-insert, I'm aware of that, thank you very much** - because a lot of fandom gets up in arms about that sort of thing. However, the idea of seeing, oh, ANY of the Malfoys playing a submissive role in any erotic scenario is pretty damn sexy to me because I'm all about role reversal, if you know what I mean. Anyway, thanks for the review!

redvelvetcanopy 2005.05.13 - 10:45PM 1: The Slytherclaw Sisters Signed
I loved this--read it as a sequel to In the Dark. I loved how Guernica's rather self-absorbed personality eventually turned off even the coarse Severus. That he ended up with the Slytherin was very fitting.

Author's Response: YEAH, glad you liked it, babe! I'm generally not into writing challenge fics, but this one just kind of wrote itself in a few days. I know the tendency is for fic authors to write self-avatars who are perfectly compatible with the character they lust for, but with the rules of this challenge being what they are, I saw no reason why I shouldn't write what I think is the way I'd honestly interact with our own Professor Snape - it'd probably be super-hot for a few months, and then my workaholic tendencies would probably turn him off, and his authoritarian tendencies would turn me off. I know the challenges said you had to Mary Sue yourself, but I didn't see any reason why Guernica!Sue shouldn't have my flaws, shortcomings, warts and all ;-)

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