Reviews for Sing a Song of Hogwarts
Sniv |
2005.02.27 - 03:23PM |
10: Bring Me To Life |
Signed |
Oh ho wonder if she will know what precisely Snape did! lol Great chapter! |
Vocalion |
2004.09.27 - 08:27PM |
10: Bring Me To Life |
Anonymous |
From you Author's Notes, I understand that you want suggestions to improve your writing. I can't really come up with any. Your sentences flow well, the grammar is fine, your descriptive language is colorful and fresh; I'll go over the next chapter with a fine toothed comb, to see if I can come up with anything at all. Your story is entertaining with touches of humor, and that's the most important thing! |
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